The face of love Preeran,Shrishmeer,Manit Divyanka SS last part-pg5 - Page 3

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Posted: 5 years ago
#21

Rishab saved Rashmi from falling. The hospital scene was emotional. Loved Rishab taking care of Rashmi. Their bonding is beautiful. The sirishmeer scene is romantic. Waiting to know Preeta's reality. Hope Karan accepts her with that.

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Superb fabulous fantastic nice lovely update dear

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A Very Interesting Part

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thank u very much friends


The face of love Part 5

Preeta:When I was 16 years old I met with an accident after a dance programme.My left leg was amputated.

Karan was shocked:Then how are you dancing?Then this leg...

Karan was stammering.

Preeta:It's an artificial leg.

Karan could not believe it.

Preeta:My world broke into pieces as I cannot dance anymore.But I was not ready to accept my fate.I wanted to dance at any cost.So Like Sudhaji I also started dancing again with my artificial leg bearing all the pain.Though it was very difficult in the beginning I tried my level best and started dancing again.No one even knew that my leg is artificial.Many people came with marriage proposals seeing my dance.They told me how much they love me.But after knowing about my leg their love melted fast like icecream.

Karan's eyes became wet hearing her unknown story.

Preeta:Karan...I am a human being...not a robot not to understand what feelings you have for me.But I know that your love also disappeared after knowing my truth.

Preeta walked tearfully.Karan looked at her going emotionally.

Rashmi was thinking of her hospital moments and smiling while sleeping.

Suddenly she heard a voice:Rashmi..wake up.

She opened her eyes and was surprised to see Rishab there.

Rishab:Happy news.You are getting discharged today.

Rishab gave her a flower bouquet.

Rishab:Happy discharge day.

Rashmi smiled:Thank you so much.This is so beautiful.

He smiled.

Rashmi got discharged from the hospital.

Rishab was with her till they reached home.Unknown to him Rashmi's eyes were on him.

Ragini was dressing up.She was struggling hard to tie the thread behind her blouse.Neil tied it.

Ragini blushed.

Sathiya yeh tune kya kiya, beliya yeh tune kya kiya
Maine kiya teraa intejar, itna karo naa muje pyar
itna karo naa muje pyar

Neil turned her around keeping his hands around her shoulders.

Neil:Now also you blush like a newly bride.

Sathiya yeh tune kya kaha, beliya yeh tune kya kaha
Yu naa kabhee karma intejar, maine kiya hai tumase pyar
maine kiya hai tumase pyar

Ragini blushed:How did you know that i blushed?

Neil:Because i know when you blush.

Sathiya yeh tune kya kaha, beliya yeh tune kya kaha

Ragini became shy and embraced Neil.He smiled caressing her.

Itanee mohababt saha naa sakunga, sach mani jinda rah naa sakunga
Tujhko samloo yeh meraa jimma, mai hu toh kya hai jane tamanna
Abb jina marana meraa janam tere hath hai
Maine kaha naa sanam, abb tu mere sath hai
Toh phir samhal, le me chala
Jana kaha, aa dil me aa

Ragini:Now alo you are like a newly wed when I am in your arms.


Dil ke chaman kaa hasna toh dekha
Jagee najar kaa sapana toh dekha
Ese bane ham ek jan ek dil tu hai ke mai hu
Kahena ho mushkil

Neil blushed:Yes...always.

Chota basanti hai tu, tan hai gulabi meraa
Do rang mile ke bad hote nahee hai juda
Toh phir samhal, le me chala
Jana kaha, aa dil me aa



They continued being in the sweet embrace.


La lla la sathiya yeh tune kya kiya
Beliya yeh tune kya kaha(Love).

Rishab walked towards his car.He was surprised to see Rashmi coming towards his car.

Rishab:Rashmi!

Rashmi:Hi..I came to see you only.

Rishab asked in disbelief:Me?

Rashmi:Yes.I wanted to ask you when you go for jogging.

Rishab:By 6 a.m.

Rashmi:Actually these days I am putting on weight.So I need some exercise.Can I also join you?

Rishab's face blossomed:Oh yes sure.

Rashmi was excited:That's my friend.

He smiled.

The next morning both were excited to meet each other at Jogger's park.

They jogged together and enjoyed each other's company.

Days passed....

Preeta was coming back after her dance rehearsal.Suddenly she slipped.But somebody's strong arms held her.She looked at him.It was Karan.

Her face blossomed.

Rom rom tera naam pukaare
Ek hue din reain hamare
Hum se hum hi chiin gaye hai
Jab se dekhe hai nainn deewane
Sajda .

Karan:Are you alright Preeta?

She smiled:Yes Karan.After all you saved me.

She thought in her mind:I wish i could stay in your arms forever Karan.I really missed you.

Slowly he released her.

Teri kaali ankhiyon se jind meri jaage
Dhadkan se tej daudu, sapno se aagey
Ab jaan lutt jaaye, ye jahaan chhut jaaye
Sang pyaar rahe, main rahun na rahun

Preeta:Karan..don't feel awkward to mingle with me.I don't feel bad when you stop loving me after knowing about my leg.Because I am used to it.Just forget everything.

Karan said in his mind:I will not forget anything Preeta.I cannot just forget my love in a moment.Because my love for you is not that weak.I will keep on loving you till the end.

Sajda tera sajda
Din reain karoon na hi chain karoon

Sajda tera sajda

Karan did not reply.

Karan:Will meet you at the Navratri party.

Preeta:Yes.

They both walked in 2 different directions.Preeta's eyes became wet.

Preeta said in her mind:When others rejected me I did'nt feel bad.But when your love for me ended I feel so hurt Karan.

Rak vaar karoon meri jaan lut doon

Ab jaan lutt jaaye, ye jahaan chhut jaaye
Sang pyaar rahe, main rahun na rahun
Sajda tera sajda(My name is Khan).

Rashmi looked at her and Rishab's photograph with a smile.

She kept it inside her book.She was thinking of Rishab and unknowingly a beautiful smile appeared on her face.

Preeta:These days you look so happy Rashmi di.

Rashmi smiled.

She thought:Rishab has succeeded to bring smile on my face.

Shrishti:What's the secret of this beautiful smile Rashmi di?

Rashmi:Finally I have realized what true love is.The face of love is so beautiful that I am just drowning in it.

All were stunned.

Ragini:You are in love again?

Rashmi blushed:Yes Maa.

All were stunned.

Ragini:Are you repeating the mistake?

Rashmi:No Maa.This time it won't be a mistake.I am 100 percent sure.

She walked out smiling.

Ragini looked at Neil:Neil..why are you silent?Why are you not saying anything?

Neil:I feel that this time everything will be well.

Ragini:But how can you just be sure Neil?

Shrishti:Maa..I think papa is right.This time Rashmi di has chosen the guy who loves her unconditionally.

Ragini:You know who he is?

Shrishti:Though Rashmi di has'nt disclosed to me about him I think I know him.Seeing her spending time with him I feel she really loves him and he loves her like anything.Though Rashmi di loved Ravesh he did'nt stop loving her.He made her life safe...he protected her..he took care of her..still he loves her silently.

Neil:Are you talking about Rishab?

Shrishti:Yes.

All were surprised.

Preeta:Rishab loves Rashmi di?

Shrishti:Yes.

Ragini:And Rashmi too loves him.

Shrishti:Ya..I think so.I am sure that Rashmi di cannot love anyone else now.

Neil:This is such a nice news.

Ragini:Now I am relieved.Now I am sure that Rashmi's love won't give her pain this time.

They all smiled.

All got ready for Navratri function...

Shrishti gave a bouquet of flowers to Sameer:Happy Navratri Sameer.

Sameer was surprised:Happy Navratri Shrishti.This is so beautiful.This is for the first time I am seeing someone gifting flowers to wish Happy Navratri.

Maine puchha ye dil se
Main kyun hoon jahan mein
Ek dhahkan boli tere liye..

Shrishti:Sameer...when Rashmi di was hospitalized we were so depressed.That time the support and courage you gave me to face the situation was great.After talking to you I really felt relieved and nice.I just wanted to thank you by giving these flowers to you.

Sameer:That's so sweet.But I don't need any thanks.You just be happy.Because I like the cheerful Shrishti more.



Maine yaadein tarashi
Aur khwaab bana di
Nayi duniya basa di tere liye..

Tere liye.. tere liye..

They both smiled at each other.

Jo main kehta hoon, jo sunta hoon
Jo sehta hoon, tere liye
Main girta hoon, sambhalta hoon
Phir chalta hoon, tere liye(Fitoor).

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Posted: 5 years ago
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thanks for the pm!

lovely update!

happy that Rashmi is thinking of Rishabh! nice that they are friends!

Feeling for Preeta! but she is so strong!

Karan still loves her.... when will he confess?

great that Shristi told her parents about Rashmi and Rishabh!

update soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Preeta's story is shocking. Her leg was amputated but glad that she didn't give up. Karan still loves her but didn't say anything after hearing her story. I hope he confesses his love to her soon. Glad that Rashmi chose the person who genuinely cares for her.

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Awesome superb fabulous lovely update dear

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Posted: 5 years ago
#28

thank u very much


The face of love Part 6

Navratri puja and celebration were going on in a full swing.

Rishab was mesmerized by Rashmi's beauty in her traditional look.


kaNdukoNdaen kaNdukoNdaen kaadhal mugam kaNdukoNdaen
viral thodum dhooraththilae veNNilavu kandukondaen

Rishab:Happy Navratri Rashmi.

Rashmi:Happy Navratri Rishab.

Rashmi:I have a special Navratri gift for you?

Rishab was surprised:For me?

Rashmi:Ya.

Rishab:What is that?

Rashmi smiled:Guess what?

Rishab smiled:No guesses.

Rashmi giggled:Ok ..no problem.

She gave him a paper.

He took it and was surprised to see his sketch in the paper.

Rishab:You drew my picture.

Rashmi:Ya..did you like it?

Rishab:I loved it.I am happy that you drew my picture.

She smiled.

Rashmi:I drew your picture in this paper and gifted it to you.But I have drawn your picture in my heart also.I am waiting to gift that also to you.


veNNilaa veLichcham kiNNaththil vizhundhu niRaindhaal vazhindhaal
magizhchchi
veNNilaa veLichcham kiNNaththai udaiththaal uyirai udaippaaL oruththi
en kaN paarththadhu en kai saerumoa

Rishab got confused:What?

Suddenly the paper slipped off his hand and it was blowing in the breeze.

Rishab ran after the paper and caught it with relief.He looked at the paper.

It was the other side of the paper that he saw.He could not believe his eyes.It was written I love you Rishab..yours only Rashmi.

kai saeraamalae kaNNeer saerumoa
kaNdukoNdaen kaNdukoNdaen kaadhal mugam kaNdukoNdaen

He stared at her in disbelief.

She was smiling emotionally.

malarmanjam vizhi kenjum manam anjumallavaa
uyir minjum ivaL nenjam un thanjamallavaa

Rashmi:Yes...what you saw was true.I have fallen in love with you.Everyone proposes with a ring.But I proposed you with your pencil sketch.


un thanimaik kadhavin thaaL neekkavaa
kaNdukoNdaen kaNdukoNdaen kaadhal mugam kaNdukoNdaen

Rishab could not believe it.

Rashmi:You might be confused.When my relationship broke I thought that my love failed.But when I was with you I realized that love does'nt fail when we are with our soul mate.I realized that no one can love me more than you.Then I realized that I reached my soul mate.

Rishab looked at her emotionally.


maegam thiRandhaal adhaRkuL un mugam paarkkiRaen
pookkaL thiRandhaal adhaRkuL un kural kaetkiRaen
kaNgaLaith thiRandhun kanavugaL vaLarkkum

Rishab:How did you know that I ...I love you?

Rashmi:When I was in a bad phase of my life you took care of me.Those lovely moments showed your love to me.When I had a break up I thought that love is ugly.But you showed me the beautiful face of love.The face of love can never be ugly.It's more beautiful than we can imagine.I can feel it now...


kaadhalin viralgaL kallaiyum thiRakkum
unnaith thaediyae ini enadhu payaNamoa
endhan saalaigaL un veettil mudiyumoa

She cupped his face in her hands:I can see it now on your face.

ae kanavu mangaiyae unadhu manadhu enadhu manadhil iNaiyumoa

They shared an emotional eye lock.

kaNdukoNdaen kaNdukoNdaen kaadhal mugam kaNdukoNdaen
viral thodum dhooraththilae veNNilavu kandukondaen

aa...

Rashmi:Will you marry me Rishab?

nadhiyin thaedal kadaisiyil kadal kaaNbadhu
uyirin thaedal kadaisiyil unaikkaaNbadhu
kadal konda nadhiyoa mugam thanai izhakkum
naan unnil kalandhaal pudhu mugam kidaikkum

Neil Ragini Mahesh Rakhi Sameer Shrishti Karan Preeta were excited.

Rishab cupped her face in his hands smiling at her emotionally.

natchaththirangaLai oru naaril kattuvaen
endha naeramum un kadhavu thattuvaen
ae kaadhal dhaevanae enadhu imaiyil unadhu vizhigaL mooduvaen

He nodded his head slowly.She smiled emotionally.


kaNdukoNdaen kaNdukoNdaen...kaNdukoNdaen kaNdukoNdaen
kaadhal mugam kaNdukoNdaen...kaadhal mugam kaNdukoNdaen

He embraced her with all his heart.She embraced him back.

viral thodum dhooraththilae...viral thodum dhooraththilae
veNNilavu kandukondaen...kaNdukoNdaen kaNdukoNdaen...kaadhal mugam
kaNdukondaen(
Kandukonden Kandukonden)

All were very happy.

Ragini:Now I am relieved.Rashmi is in the safest hands.

Neil:Right.She will have the most happiest life with Rishab.

Preeta:I am so happy that finally Rashmi di got true love in her life.She is truly blessed with the most loving partner.Only a few lucky girls are destined to get true love.

Karan looked at Preeta.

Karan:You are right Preeta.Only a few people are lucky to get true love.And you are also one among them.

Tenu itna mein pyar karan
Ek pal vich so bar karan
Tu jave je mainu chad ke
Maot da intezaar karran

Preeta looked at him:Me?

Karan:Yes..you.Your true love is also in front of you Preeta.Can't you see it?

Preeta stammered:Karan...


Key tere liye duniya chod di hai
Tujh pae hi saans aa ke rukey
Mein tujh ko kitna chahta hoon
Ye tu kabhi soch na sakey

All the family members stared at them.

Preeta:What...what are you trying to say Karan?About whom are you talking Karan?

Karan:Preeta...why are you pretending that you don't know who loves you?Look at my eyes.Can't you see love in your eyes?


Key tere liye duniya chod di hay
Tujh pay hi saans aa kay ruky
Mein tujh ko kitna chahta hon
Ye tu kabhi soch na ske

Preeta was stunned and also all other family members.

Preeta became emotional:Karan...you know everything about me.

Karan:Yes,I know everything.So why should I stop loving you?I love you.I am not here to buy your original leg.Then why should I back out knowing your accident and after effects?

Preeta was really touched by his words.

Kuch bhi nahi hay ye jahan
Tu hay toh hay is mein zindagi
Ab mujh ko jana hay kahan
Key tu hi safar hay akhri

Preeta:But I am imperfect Karan.

Karan:But you are perfect for me.Only you are perfect for me.All other girls are imperfect for me.

Preeta looked at him emotionally.

Key tery bina jeena mumkin nahi
Na dena kabhi mujh ko tu fasly
Mein tujh ko kitna chahti hon
Ye tu kabhi soch na saky

Karan held her hand:I love you Preeta.Do you love me?Will you be mine?

Preeta's eyes got filled up with tears.


Tere liye duniya chod di hai
Tujhpe hi saans aake ruke
Main tujhko kitna chahta hoon
Ye tu kabhi soch na sake

She looked around.All the family members were smiling and gesturing her to say yes.

She looked at Karan nodding her head:Yes Karan.I love you too

and I belong to you.

Aankhon ki hai yeh khwahishein
Ki chehre se teri na hatein


Neendon mein meri bas tere
Khwabon ne li hai karwatein

Karan:Really?

Preeta:Yes Karan.

They both held each others hand happily smiling from the bottom of their heart.

Ki teri ore mujhko leke chalein
Ye duniya bhar ke sab raaste

They embraced each other happily.

Main tujhko kitna chahta hoon
Ye tu kabhi soch na sake

They shared a sweet eye lock.

Tere liye duniya chhod di hay
Tujh pay hi sans aa kay ruky


Mein tujh ko kitna chahta hon
Ye tu kabhi soch na saky(Airlift).

Everyone smiled happily.

Ragini became very emotional:Neil...finally God sent an Angel in Preeta's life.

Happy tears flowed out of Neil's eyes:I knew it..I knew it..

Sameer thought:All are getting their love except me.I can't wait anymore.I want Shrishti.

Shrishti thought:Why can't Sameer also propose to me?Or should i propose to him?So confusing.

Karan-Preeta,Neil Ragini,Mahesh-Rakhi,Rishab Rashmi,Shrishti Sameer were playing dandiya.


Ho...
Ho aavigayiraat
Mann bhulobhadibaat
Premniyamausamchhe
Abaao mere paas
Rehjaao mere saath
Premniyamausamchhe (x2)
Mill jaayemujhko agar saathtera
Tohbhoolun main saarajahaan
Chogadatara
Chabeelatara
Rangeelatara
Rangbherujuetarivaat re, Haah!


Shrishti was enjoying herself.


Chhogadatara
Orechhabilatara
Ore rangeelatara
Rangbherujuetarivaat re, Haah! (x2)


Chupchupketumhe
Dekha main karun
Saarisaariraat
Saarisaariraat


Chupchupkemujhe
Dekhatukare
Saarisaariraat
Saarisaariraat

During Dandiya dance Karan-Preeta unknowingly got romantic.

Mill jaaye mujhko agar saath tera
Toh bhoolun main saara jahaan…

Chhogada tara
Chabeela tara
Rangeela tara
Rangbheru jue tari vaat re, Haah!

Shrishti bumped into Sameer by mistake and held his shoulder for balance.

They shared a romantic eye lock.

Chhogada tara
Ore chhabila tara
Ore rangeela tara
Rangbheru jue tari vaat re, Haah! (x2)( Loveyatri).


They broke the eye lock.

Sameer was blushing.

Shrishti:Did you bump into me purposefully?

Sameer:What?Why should I do that?

Shrishti put attitude and said:Because I am beautiful.

Sameer:I am not that type of a boy who purposefully bumps into beautiful girls to touch them.

Shrishti became dull.

Shrishti thought:I talked too much.My tongue is my enemy.

Shrishti:I am sorry.

Sameer:Ok.But don' talk like this.I will never behave like that even if I am interested in that girl.Because if I like a girl it means I respect her.

Shrishti smiled slightly deeply looking at him.He walked away.She smiled thinking of his words.

Time passed....

Rashmi was getting out of the mall after shopping.Suddenly she bumped into someone.

She was stunned to see him.

Edited by jasminerahul - 5 years ago
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Interesting Chapter


Karan loves Preeta while Rashmi is thinking

of Rishabh

Preeta is a strong person

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Part 6

marvelous update! well written!

loved how Rashmi confessed and proposed!

Rishabh is happy!

wow Karan also confessed to Preeta!

lovely moments!

will Sameer propose?

whom did Rashmi see?

update soon

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