PreeRan TS - Shayad **Part 2 on page 2** COMPLETED

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Serial_Fan90

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Abhi1393
This far exceeded my expectations! The way he makes up to his lady love is so beautiful! His gestures are subtle yet grand! Amazing! And the way you write is so beautiful!

Karan is a such a beautifully written character.
Dheeraj has done such a beautiful job playing Karan.

I can't wait for their romance to begin.

Love
Mish

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Serial_Fan90

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Lolchiku
Hmmm so to be honest girlit reminded me of my ex and so maybe i couldn't connect that much or maybe didnt want but yeah u have got great writing skills👏

Thank you !
Karan could have swayed either sides in this story. Wanted to keep him the hero.
Hopefully next story reminds you of something fun.

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Mish

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Lolchiku

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Serial_Fan90

Thank you !
Karan could have swayed either sides in this story. Wanted to keep him the hero.
Hopefully next story reminds you of something fun.

Love
Mish

The previous one actually reminded me of good things ...that stadium one😆

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Serial_Fan90

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Lolchiku

The previous one actually reminded me of good things ...that stadium one😆

Oh good then !
How about a prompt from your side and I try to justice to it.
I can't think of anything to write on
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Angrita

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

You know what? I love you.. i just love you for this..

Omg..i m done! I'll cry now.. this was so damn good i can't explain.. The last part just took away my heart..He wants to spent time with her..n for that he opted for such a great plan..

Mish...just thankyou..thankyou so muchh for making me fall in love with them even more..i can't just explain in words how good u've written.. please never stop writing..u write too well..like tooo well..

M waiting for more such stories of them..

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Lolchiku

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Serial_Fan90

Oh good then !
How about a prompt from your side and I try to justice to it.
I can't think of anything to write on
:)

I have my own TS pendin😭

But i have experienced this one thing which i would want to happen with preeran

I had gone on a trip and there was this guy he had 60 percent looks of karan and we had a party and he was dancing in a group and i must tell u he looked so sexy that i knew that i was staring at him but still i couldn't look away and i sooo want this to happen with preeta so maybe u can use this😆

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Kaay

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

That was adorable! Please do continue writing more stories!

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MafiaQueen17

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Posted: 7 years ago

#18

So beautiful
i love it
happy diwali to you :)

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SunshineMk

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Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Happy diwali to you.

This was brilliant, I really liked it. The fact that they fought and sorted it out meant a lot to me.

It felt like no matter what comes between these two, they'll always find their way back to each other because they're meant to be.

Loving your works so much!

Will wait to read More!

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Sumaiya_Scrible

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Posted: 7 years ago

#20

Reading this was exotic with all emotions piling up. I really loved how u pointed out their practical life's and how they actually live. After all life isn't a film but it could be lived like one in your way.

You got a break?!! Wow that means we could read more after this...their home romance or something 😃 ❤️

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