Not just friends! - A preeran TS {part 2 updated on pg 3} - Page 3

Originally posted by: Sofna

Loved it... enjoyed reading the flow of their thoughts ... flow of their feeling with the flow of the music. ... aaand aaaggh what a cliffhanger ending. ... there's no way u can stop...😆

Originally posted by: Lolchiku

Thanku so much this is my first peice of leisure writing not only on forum but in my entire life😆 so all ur comments mattter a lot.

PART-2

Hii guys first of all thanks to all those who commented.Secondly plzz comment that's how decide to continue or not, if u want u may criticise, tell me what to improve but do comment.
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It was not long after Sherlyn had been exposed that Preetha and Shrishti had been discussing how nobody had trusted them.
' di yrr aapko wapas jaane ke liye haan kehna hi nhi chahiye tha.'
' shrishti agar me mana krti to karan aur rakhi aunty ko kitna bura lagta.'
'Vese di aapko nhi lagta ki rishab ji ka reaction kafi cold tha , unhone to sherlin ko jyada kuch kaha hi nhi, jese ki wo unki door ki rishtedar ho.'
'Haan pehle mujhe bhi laga tha fir mene jyada socha nhi.'
'Esa to nhi hai na di ki wo aapse pyaar vyaar krte hai coz warna kese sherlin ko itna doubt hua'
'Chup kar shrishti. Tu bhi na.' This had lead her thinking whether this was true but she brushed the thoughts and never got time to think about it again.
But here she stood, as rishab was busy praising her, praying to God, 'hey bhagwan plzz rishab ji wo na kare jo me soch rahi hoon. Dont let him say ki he liked me even before meeting sherlin warna unki jo good human being wali image thi which he had spoiled a bit recently wo puri destroy hi ho jayegi.'
She was brought out from her thoughts by rakhi ,' han betaji preeta ne humari sahi me bahut help ki hai.' She realised rishab had just finished praising her. ' Rishab hum sabne use thanku bol diya hai ab wapas kyu wo sab yaad kr rhe ho.' Said Kareena bua. 'Ek minute kareena bua me bata raha hun, Preetaji aap apni importance is baat se samaj sakti hai ki mene shadi ke liye haan sirf aapke liye ki thi, mein aapko ye pehle hi batane wala that but fir aapko deepak ke sath dekh liya, aur fir aage to aapko pata hi hai, to me ye kehna chah raha hun ki I love u preeta ji , kya aap mujhse shaadi karengi.' And he sat down on his knees. Her prayers had went unanswered this time Rishab had spoiled his image by doing this how could he think that she would accept his proposal after knowing that he had accepted another girls proposal when he loved someone else what if sherlin had been a good girl but this is what she cared least about right now. She already had two other major things to fear and worry about. The bigger one was that she didnt want her improving relationship with Karan to go back to square one, maybe he'd consider her rejection as an insult of his brother then she realised why she had been feeling that different kind of pain since the time she had entered the hall, it was an intuition. The other one was Sarla, yes she has proved to be a good mother for them she had taken a stand whenever required for them but she was was the person who even after getting to know that Rishabh had refused to help them had scolded her for behaving rudely and referred to him as 'bhagwaan jaisa insaan'. And preeta had this feeling that she might ask her to marry rishab.
Everyone was shocked but all had different expressions too. Kareena bua was angry like hell 'is preeta ka bhoot kese utaru me , agar isne haan bola to me ise chodungi nahi.'
'Ye kya ho gaya shrishti mera mann nahi manta iss rishte ke liye bass ab preeta doosro ka soch ke haan na bol dey' rodadi expressed her fear. 'Dadi aap tansion na lo meri di utni achi bhi nahi hai ki jitna sabko lagta hai.' Srishti was right, yes preeta believed in arranged Marriges but after the deepak fiasco she had decide that she will not agree upon any other guy. Kritika and rakhi were shocked the most, kritika although had come to know the truth of preeran's relationship but she had always thought that they had a sizzling chemistry and Rakhi because maybe earlier she had paired preeta with both her sons but from the last one month she had thought of her as a good match for karan,' bhagwan ji mujhe to kuch samaj nahi aa raha hai aap hi dekh lo ji.'
But there stood this one person who was expressionless, karan waited patiently for what was next, a few seconds ago his heart and mind were full of confusion but being a smart guy he decided not to judge right now. This was not the right place and the right time to decide what would be right and what would be wrong. So burrying the hurricane of confusion and emotions somwhere deep inside, with his heart beating at the rate of what he thought was velocity of light, he stood there waiting for the answer.
Now it was time for preeta to speak up, she looked at karan straight into his eyes and he too didn't look away, took a deep breath, and began, ' dekhiye rishab ji mana ki hum ache dost hain,' she wanted to say they were good friends but this was not the time right now she had to be wise and careful in what she spoke as she will not want to spoil her newly found relations and this house and hurt anybody over there, 'but me aapse shaadi nahi kar sakti.' 'Par kyu Preetaji kya aap kisi aur ko pasand karti hai'. 'Kisi ko mana karne ke liye ye jaroori nahi hota. Mene aapko humesha apna sabse acha dost samjha hai lekin my heart and mind both don't feel right to say yes. I know u will understand and also thanku for expressing your emotions and keeping them in.' This was meant to be a sarcastic one. Saying this she walked to the side, ' I am proud of u di', 'ek minute shrishti, beta ek baar thoda soch leti' said sarla as assumed and then went away to rakhi.
' Rishab tumne to bata diya but ab if she said a no to tum kya kar skte ho forget her beta it will be good for u,' said kareena bua who was supposed to be the happiest but someone was even happier. Everybody else were normal they had dealt with the condition. 'Ji ab hume chalna chahiye,' sarla said, ' nahi ji aapne kuch khaya hi nahi hai kuch khana to padega aur aap aise kyu behave kar rahi hain mein preeta ki side pe hoon, uska decision bilkul sahi hai,' replied rakhi.
'Preeta come lets eat something yarr,' Kritika said, but then seeing her bestfriend's eyes searching for someone she continued, 'yarr ye karan bhai aaye nahi, pata nahi kya kar rahe hain upar.' 'Kritika tum plate lagao me washroom jake aati hoon.' And all kritika could do was smile as she knew her bestiee can't lie.
She couldnt find karan in his room,'gaya kaha ye ladka, me to jaldi se baat khatam karke aayi iska reaction dhekne ke liye aur ye pata nahi kaha chala gaya,'...suddenly she spotted sameer, 'sameer karana kaha hai', 'kyu tumhe kuch kaam hai',said sameer.
'Nahi wo me to washroom ja rahi thi tum dikhe to socha puch loon kritika was looking for him.'
'Oh kritika, vese bhai kritika ke room hai,'
'Thanks.' As she started heading towards some other room so that sameer doesn't question her he spoke up,' Vese tum kritika ke room ka washroom use karlo, ye jyada better rahega, nahi to raula pe jana hai' saying this he ran away.( for those who don't know raula pe jana hai means something might go pretry wrong.) 'Ye sameer kya bol ke gaya, karan gusse me hoga shayad isliye bola.'
As she was about to enter the room she collided into someone and she smiled smelling the perfume. 'Yarr tum dekh ke nahi chal sakti ho kya pagal ladki, tumhari ek hi wish hai na ki kese mujhe girao.'
Hearing this preeta flashed the brightes smile karan had ever seen. 'Chalo he is normal,' she mumbled. 'Tumne kuch bola?'
' nahi to.'
' nahi kuch to bola, but chodo konsa tum bataogi. Vese baby doll tumne aaj prove kar diya tum mujhse kitna pyaar karti ho.'
'What?' Now this was something she had Not expected.
'Tabhi to tumne bhai ko mana kar diya, akhir me hoon hi itna charming.'
'Ughh tum nahi sudhroge, par chalo acha mujhe laga tha tum to gussa ho jaoge.'
'Aree mein to khush hun mera bechara bhai bach gaya, kese tolerate karta tumhe puri life, asli roop dekha nahi hai na usne tumhara.'
They were interrupted by kritika, 'areee preeta khana nahi khana kya,' 'Aa rahi hoon.'
'Karan all the best.'
'Oh to tumhe yaad hai.'
'Sabko yaad hai ki shaadi ke 10 din pehle tum ek hafte ke liye match khelne jaa rahe ho, kese bhai ho tum.'
' Aree 3 me se 2 match to khelne padenge na my team needs me, anyways thanku sweeetheart'.
Preeta left nodding her head but this time with a smile.
But as soon as she was gone the dimpled smile vanished and a confused and serious look took over his face,' hmm karan high time now, let's take some experienced advice'. And he headed towards the hall after all it was time to know who deepak was.
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~HIMANI~

Awesome! No improvement required. The way you write is the best one. And of course, do continue. Waise bhi, this wasn't the question to be asked. Rather question should be 'when to update' and we would say 'today only' 😆

Girl this is awesome!

Originally posted by: obsessedbyKB

Awesome! No improvement required. The way you write is the best one. And of course, do continue. Waise bhi, this wasn't the question to be asked. Rather question should be 'when to update' and we would say 'today only' 😆

Originally posted by: SunshineMk

Girl this is awesome!

Loving it...waiting for the next Bit!

Originally posted by: Lolchiku

Thanku soo much😳the next one is most probably the last part so i will take a bit time to make it beautiful😆

No worries. Take your time. And I believe that it is gonna be as awesome as you're. You're gonna rock this time too, with your next part ❤️

Amazing update! Loved the exchange between PreeRan!

Originally posted by: Abhi1393

Amazing update! Loved the exchange between PreeRan!