FF - SuKk ki class! Updated pg 24/25 - Page 4

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Posted: 17 years ago
#31
haan exams over... 😳 😳

bas will be writing the part in a while...

lemme at least settle down na first 😳 πŸ˜†
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Well this is my attempt.....plz do let me know what u think....aur haan Verni main bhi Sumit-KK ko milaa ke rahungi πŸ˜‰

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The bell's ringing saw a scramble for desks & chairs in the classroom....there was a mad rush as the students tried to settle down....apart from one....he sat on the teacher's chair with his legs crossed on the table infront of him & lounging with his hands behind his head, without a care in the world.....

Saahil: oye Mr. Sumit Kapoor...jaldi aa beth jaa...tujhe pata hai nah Professor abhi hi aata hoga πŸ˜• ....

Sumit looks at him with an arrogant expression on his handsome face & then looks back up at the ceiling...

Sumit: Professor aye yah Principal mujhe kya fark parta hai....main kisi se darta hoon kya? πŸ˜‰

Saahil: arrey mere baap πŸ˜ƒ ...pata hai tu kisise nahin darta lekin meri baat maan...aaj college ka pehla din hai...aaj tho tu koi halla mat khara kar πŸ˜• ....

Sumit smiles & unfolds his legs putting them down & standing up....he then stretches himself & winks at the girl on the front desk...the girl starts blushing & hesitantly smiles back....Sumit then goes to the classroom door & fidgets with something, closes the door, then saunters casually to his seat at the back next to Saahil,his best friend...

Saahil: tu itna muskurah kyun raha hai??? πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

Sumit: abhi pata chal jayega πŸ˜‰

Saahil: kya pata chal jaayega??? πŸ˜•

Sumit: *putting a finger to his lips* shhhhhhhhh *nodding his head towards the door* dekh...

At that precise moment, the door opens & a banner rolls out from the top of the doorframe....it says WELCOME on it...

Sumit: dekha πŸ˜‰ Professor aaj is baat se itna impressed hoga ke woh sab kuchh bhool jayega πŸ˜‰

Saahil: Sumit manna parega tujhe yaar! πŸ‘

But, pulling aside the banner is not Professor Ram, but a beautiful girl, wearing a white punjabi suit....she enters the class with a confused look & starts blushing as all eyes are on her 😳

Sumit: wow! 😳

Saahil: wow??achha tho yeh iske liye tha Professor ke liya nahin?? πŸ˜ƒ

Sumit: *not taking his eyes off the girl* maine tho isse pehli baar dekha hai....

Saahil: aur love at first sight?? πŸ˜‰

Sumit: *coming out of his reverie* love???chhhhiiii....no ways!!tujhe pata hai main yeh love shuv main believe nahin karta πŸ˜•

Saahil: aur karna bhi mat...tu college ka sabse bada flirt...gang-leader...notorious student jaana jata hai....aisi ladki tho tujhe bhau bhi nahin degi 🀒 ....

Sumit: tu mujhe challenge kar rahe hai?? πŸ˜‰

Saahil: *smiling* tu jho chahe samajhle...

While they were talking, the girl had settled herself at the front & was already making friends...The Professor then comes in & seems impressed with the banner πŸ˜‰ .....

Saahil: Sir Sumit ne khaas apke liye lagaya tha jab aap darwaza khole lekin koi aur hi pehle pahunch gaya πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

The new girl starts blushing again when Saahil points at her...

P.Ram: oho new student!!aapka naam??

Sumit sits up straighter in his chair to look at the girl....

Kumkum...Kumkum Malhotra 😊

Sumit smiles & to himself *Kumkum* 😳

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Edited by rah_akki - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
@ rahi : very gud write up bachchaaaaaaa πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ par tune to twist laa diya... maine to Sukk ko childhood friends and lovers bataya tha.... 😳 chal chod.... πŸ˜‰ waise the write up was superbbbbb πŸ‘ πŸ‘

@ henna : haan haan maine kab manaa kiya.... ab settle ho gayi ho to likh.... I wanna see ur writing kab se nahi dekhiiiii 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
hey rahi nice attempt πŸ‘ πŸ‘ ...well even me too thinking now do we have to continue of previous one or start our own one..... πŸ˜•

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Posted: 17 years ago
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@ Verni: well I thought this was not supposed to be continuous nah?? πŸ˜• Henna ke post main likha hai everyone writes as they deem fit πŸ˜• πŸ˜• if it's to be a follow-up to the previous writer's story,plz let me know tho main waise likhoon 😊

@ Resh: awww thanks!! 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
super part rahi

ha mee too occupying last bench πŸ˜† last bench ka kuch our hi maza hii πŸ˜†
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Posted: 17 years ago
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@ rahi : achcha aisa hai kya??? πŸ˜• Okk .... maybe then... maine shaayad instructions dhyaan se nahi padhe.... 😳 πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Henna.... Chup gayi Henna.... bulao ab to raat ho gayi.... πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ jaldi update kar do.... Srk ki class ho gayi πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Sorry yehi fit ho raha thaaa 😳 😳 πŸ˜›
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
arrggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhh 😑 😑 😑

yaar i said na I wanna cont!!!!!

uff all my hard work gone to waste... wrote my part for no reason..

*sighs*... πŸ˜’ πŸ₯Ί *walks off*

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Acha ppl sorry for the redness >> 😑 hotness of the moment thing...☺️

...had a think about this n I'm sorry if I wasn't clear that this is a continuous story...😳 and yes anyone can write... as long as anyone hasn't opted to write beforehand so plz check before you post...

and also a reminder... this fanfic is about the forum members so no other fictitious characters are allowed other than Sumit and Kumkum. This I have already clearly stated in my initial post... it's are about 'U me aur hum'

@Rahila- although I appreciate your efforts your part doesn't comply fully...😳 but plz feel free to post this scene under the mini FF's thread, I'm sure it won't go missed. I apologize for your efforts going in vain but do keep posting!! 😳😳 sorryyyy ☺️

@Everyone- I'm really sorry for the technical hiccup!
Edited by Henna042 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39
haa chila tha saab kuch now i am busy maroying line on hu dont disturb me πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

grt idea heena now cont the str forward 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#40
πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ If thats wht rules say...So rahila if u want i can move ur story πŸ˜›

Well just upt u guys..and Hennie update pehla page na ki ki kia kaise kaise...U see samjhana padta hai πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜›

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