ff-pyara rishta**coming soon**note pg28 - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks i will continue soon


Originally posted by: nehanne

Nice story ........i never read a ff before so m excited 4 ur next post.


thanks alot will continue soon


Originally posted by: verni

Hey ambreen.... gud job bachchaaaaa

Do continue soon



thanks alot will surely continue soon

Originally posted by: HuTiJu

SUPERB,OUT STANDING strating ambreen....Loved reading every word..U r just gr8 dear..Now contine the next part soon..




thanks surakshita well i am trying hope tht i can write well


Originally posted by: surakshita

awesome introductory ff.

so another feather in your cap.

keep going girl




thanks yup will continue soon


Originally posted by: preethi

grt one ambreena cont next part

Edited by panjwani - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow. 👏 . another ff maza aa gaya 👏 ...har taraf sukk ki love story...fantastic...& a good start too...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi

fantastic ambreen

great start

waiting anxiously for next part

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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks

Originally posted by: sweetpoorvi

wow. . another ff maza aa gaya ...har taraf sukk ki love story...fantastic...& a good start too...




thanks norzar will continue soon

Originally posted by: norzar

hi

fantastic ambreen

great start

waiting anxiously for next part norzar



Edited by panjwani - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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it is coolllllllll plzzzzzzzz contuied your parts i love it reallyy
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great, starting, mindblowing introduction & really very thanks for the brand new ff, beast of luck for your further way. Great, superb, mindblowing & we are always with you.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG Ambreen the intro's awesome!! 👏 👏 ab jab bhi u write plz PM me, so I can read ur next parts...all the best buddy 👍🏼
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Posted: 17 years ago
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@Shafoo- thanks

@janu-kumkumjuhi-thanks so much

@rahila-thanks alot will pm u for sure
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Posted: 17 years ago
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The first step- Part 1

At a busy airport,

throughout the airport many people are running from one place to another
In this crowd most of the people dont know each other but come together to reach one destination.


A girl is hastily running towards the check in counter cause shes already late for the flight. shes worn a pretty yellow churidar pink kurta with black work and alot of accesories. she has long black hair pinned up with the help of a black clip.
On the hand, a boy is excitedly running towards the exit cause he will be meeting his parents n family after a couple of years. he looks damn hot hes worn a red shirt with a bleck leather jacket with dark blue jeans. he has also worn alot of funky accesories which also helps to attract girls😉
Both of them are coming from opposite sides and dash into each other

girl- sorry sorry

boy- you better be

girl- hello yeh kya mein tumse maffi mang rahi ho aur tum mujhe yeh sab keh rahe ho tum khud dekh kar nahi chal rahe the

boy- yeh mein bhi tumse keh sakta ho

girl- galti tumhari hai

boy- tumhari hai

suddenly the girl heard the last annoucement for her flight she picks up her bag which had fallen down when tht boy dashed into her

girl- mein ja rahi ho kyunki mujhe late ho raha hai yeh mat samajna ke mein tumse dar gaye

the boy made a face as if to say tht i dont care the girl picked up and her bag and both went to the opposite side


the girl gets into her flight and her friend comes to her

f- tum kaha reh gaye thi kitna late aa rahi ho kumkum

kk- mein toh time par hi aajati agar ho pagal ladka se nahi milti kahaa phas gayi thi main

f- ladka kaun sa ladka

kk- shut up neeta

n- are kk tumhe nahi pata pyaar ho jata hai aise fights karne se

kk- pyaar aur aise ladke se nahi baba main toh apne prince ke liye wait kar rahi hu

Here the boy comes outside excited to see who is come to take him back home he sees his dad waiting for him om wadhwa his dad and also the owner of wadhwas industries he loves his son alot thts why came to meet him at the airport and couldnt wait to meet his son

om- su thank god tum aa gaye
he give su a hug

om- lekin tumhe itni der kyun lagi kab se tumhara intezaar kar raha tha

su- papa dont ask aisi pagal ladki se takraya mein ke woh mera sar kha gaye aisi ladki maine aaj tak nahi dekhi galti uski thi aur sarri galti mujhpar dal rahi thi

om- aise hi pyaar ho jata hai su

su- oh pls papa aap ko pata hai main pyaar vyaar mein nahi manta pyaar sirf pagal log karte hai

om- pata hai chal teri maa tera ghar ppar intezaar kar rahi hai

su smiles and both get into the car and drive away

Edited by panjwani - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great, Keep it up. Continue soon.

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