FF-Pyar kiya hai.p53pt56-last part, note P68 27/12

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Jasmine

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Posted: 17 years ago

#81

hiii..
read the 2-3 parts together..
they were relli nice 😳
sumit is such a flirty but kk will make him alright soon 😉
bwn..u can just call me jasmine 😳

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poorvi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#82

hiiiii kashishk... again a good part yaar. 👏.lagta hai sumit jaldi line pe aa jayega. ...cont. soon 😛.& u can just cal me poorvi 😛 .

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kashish

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Rahila

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Posted: 17 years ago

#84

wow buddy!!ur sure going fast!! 👏 👏 it's fantastic & ur flow of the story is excellent 👏 👏 👏 just one thing...on Part 7-Pg 10, Sonali should say 'Bhai KK ko job mil gayee'....u've written Sonali ko job mil gayee 😊

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shafia Akhtar

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Posted: 17 years ago

#85

ohhhhhhhh it cooll dont be upset your goodddddd in writhing story of kumkum and sumit

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noorya

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Posted: 17 years ago

#86

very good part 😉
cant wait for the next one 😳

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Priya

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Posted: 17 years ago

#87

OMG Su was so shocked........... can imagine his face ..........Su has started feeling restless.......good

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vernika

@verni

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Posted: 17 years ago

#88

Both the parts are nice bachcha.... 😳 👏 👏

Keep writing .. 😊

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kashish

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Posted: 17 years ago

#89

@rah_akki:thnx u tell me i didn't notice tht before(p10pt7)
@shafoo:thnx shafoo to encourage me, and for the compliments
@mdtafan:thnx and i will send another 2 part today
@pearl29:thnx, ab su ki tari raatein hi aisi jayein ghi
@verni:thnx a lot
@sumitwadhwa:thnx a lot