Members’ FF -***Epilogue/The End***- Pg 83 - Page 51

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey all reading fc after long time and guys nice part...su-kk kya zagadte hai aur phikar bhi karte hai...keep it up all.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
HEY I WILL CONTINUE

(somebody holds her, who can be this somebody else than sumit, he takes her make her sit on the chair, he gives her the water and the tablet)

su:tumhe mere bilkool bhi fiqar nahi hai na?

kk:tum aisa kyon keh rahe ho?

su:kyon agar tumhe meri fiqar hoti to tum apna tikh se dyan rakti na, aur jab tumhari tabyat kharab thi to tumhe office aane ke kiya zaroorat thi

(kk is looking down)

su: kk look at me

kk:i am sorry, lekin file bhi to...

su:what file! kiya file tumhari tabyat se zyada zaroori hai kk? pata nahi tumhari liye zaroori hai ya nahi tumhari tabyat lekin mere liye zaroori hai

kk:i am very sorry, sumit

su:now stop asking sorry, aur mein dad ko bata deta houn ke tamhari tabyat thik nahi.

kk:lekin sumit...

su:no argument, tum yahan file dene aana chahti thi mine ne aane diya now u will listen to me

(kk is silent as sumit is scolding her)

su:now come

(he takes her to his father's room)

su:me i come in?

dad:yes

su:dad, actually kk ki tabiyat bohot kharab hai, and mini ka phone aaye hai ke usne subah se kuch khaya bhi nahi huwa

(su's dad goes to kk, and touch her forehead)

dad:oh my god, isse to bohot hi fever hai, beti tumne pehle kyon nahi bataya

kk:woh sir mamooli sa bahar hai, aur yeh sab kuch tochalta rehta hai lekin kaam to sab se pehle aata hai na

dad:nahi beti, sehat sab se pehle aati hai, jab insan ki sehat hi thik na ho to woh kaam kaisai karegha, sumit beta isse is ke ghar chod do or doctor se check zaroor karwa lena

su:ok dad


I hope u guys liked it,

kashish
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Posted: 17 years ago
How sweet.............now Su will look after kk..........
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Posted: 17 years ago
Very nice parts guys...keep up the awesome job!!!!...will put in my bit as soon as I'm even thora sa free!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Just trying out my skills🤓

Sumit takes Kumkum to the doctor gets the medicine and drives home.

Kumkum had worked the whole night to finish the Project and now she has fever aswell. She was so tired that she fell a sleep.
Sumit reaches Kumkum's apartment and sees that Kumkum is sleeping. He takes her in his arms and reach the house.

Mini opens the door : Are ise kya huwa?
Sumit : Shhhh........ So rahi rahe.

Sumit carries her to her room and make her sleep comfortably in her bed and then ask Mini for some Ice and sponge to keep it on her fore head. He continues for hours and checks her temperature with regular intervals.

Finally Kumkum wakes up and she is confused to see herself in her bed and Sumit sitting next to her and reading a novel.

Kumkum - Are Sumit........ Mein yahan....... or tum.......

Sumit - hey you are up !!! Just wait i'll get your medicines.

Kumkum - The whole day you were sitting with me? Office ka kaam..

Sumit - Shhh....... Relax. and stop worrying about office for sometime.
Dad ne bhi kaha hai na, tabyat ka kayal rakne ki? You are not coming to office until i give you permission to come. Understand???

Kumkum - nods positively.

Sumit gives her some fruits and then gives her tablets and water. He makes her sleep again. He runs his hand through her hair and sits next to her until she sleeps!!

Somebody continue please!!!!!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
How sweet.....................just love Su sooooooooooooooo much...............very nice part...........
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Posted: 17 years ago
fab parts evryone....great going..👏
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After making sure that Kumkum is totally comfortable, Sumit tiptoes out of the room....he meets Mini at the door & points a finger to his lips...he closes the door and tells Mini to avoid disturbing her until she wakes up herself as the best remedy for any sickness is rest😳....

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The next day, Kumkum is in high spirits as she gets ready for work....Mini comes into the room & is surprised to see KK all dressed & smiling.....
M: arrey KK tum kahan jaa rahi ho??Sumit ne agar tumhe kaam par dekh liya tho woh mujhe maar daalega!!!!...kal jab maine dus baar promise kiya ke main tumhara khayal rakhungi aur tumhe time pe dawa doongi tab woh gaya yahan se!!!😃
KK: *grinning* mujhe pata hai usne aisa hi kuchh kiya hoga!!!....lekin main usse dekhe bina ek din bhi nahin reh sakti😳😳
M: lekin aisa nahin hoga...woh tumhe milne tho aayega nah.....
KK: haan magar mujhe bahut kaam hai....waise bhi hum log hamara agla kadam plan kar rahe hai....aisa kuchh jho Omi Uncle ke nazron main mujhe aur bhi achha banaa de😕😕
M: tho tu yahan bhaith kar nahin soch sakti kya?😡..abhi achhe se tikh bhi nahin hui aur....
KK: offo!!!Mini tu bhi nah!!bilkul Maa ki acting kar rahi hai!!😛...main bachchi nahin hoon....main apna khayal rakh rahi hoon nah...aur tu fikar mat kar...main ek dum tikh hoon....
M: magar.....
KK: agar magar kuchh nahin...main chalti hoon...
M: KK sun tho...
KK: bye Mini....
Before Mini can say anything else, KK gives her a tight hug & leaves for work.......
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Sumit is standing with his employee, holding a file and going through details just outside his office, with one hand on the door.......
Su: haan Yash woh accounts main jho kuchh problem dikhai diye tumhe tum aao meri office main aur hum sort out karlenge....
Y: lekin Sir accounts se zyada important woh factory aur warehouse ki details thi jho main aapse poochhna chahta tha....
Su: *slaps a hand on his forehead* arrey haan woh tho main bilkul bhool gaya...tum aisa karo.....
He looks up and sees KK coming in.....he shakes his head & looks again😆😆...
Su: arrey yeh tho KK hai😲😲
Y: jhee Sir kya kaha aap ne??😕😕
Su: *having forgotten Yash is there over his shock at seeing KK* ummm woh kuchh nahin...bas tum saare files aur problems meri cabin main leke aao hum wahan hi solve karlenge....
Y: Ok Sir main bas 5 minute main aaya....
Su: arrey nahin abhi mujhe thora kaam ha...tum aadhe ghante ke baad aana....
Y: *looking surprised* Ok Sir jho aap kahein....*he goes away to his desk*
Su rushes to KK who was standing & chatting with the receptionist....
Su: *clears his throat* Kumkum aap zara please meri cabin main aayengi? kuchh kaam hai...
KK: *looks at him innocently* Yes Sir abhi ayee.....
Su goes to his cabin...KK deposits her handbag at her desk, knocks & also goes in....
A very angry Sumit is pacing back & forth....KK looks at him with raised eyebrows....
Su: *stops walking & looks at her in irritation* tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?😡😡
KK: Sir main yahan kaam karti hoon😳😳
Su:KK main mazaak ke mood main nahin hoon😡😡....aur aaj in shararti aankhon ka jadoo nahin chalega....tumhe tikh nahin hai aur tum kaam par ayee ho...mere manaa karne ke baad bhi??😡...kya meri itni si baat nahin maan sakti tum??
KK: Sumit.....
Su: mujhe kuchh nahin sunna...aaj tumne dikhaa diya tum mujhse kitna pyar karti ho😕
KK: aisa kuchh nahin hai 😕
Su: Maine kaha na mujhe nahin sunna......
KK: pakka??😉
Su: *looking at her angrily & turning away* ek dum pakka😡😡
KK goes towards him, reaches out to touch his shoulder and draw him closer, but he just shrugs her hand off....she then tries again, bu he does the same.....smiling, she pulls him closer and before he can move away again, gives him a kiss on the cheek😳😳....He looks at her & she winks at him....he tries but cannot hide his smile...she then pulls him into a tight hug & kisses him on the other cheek😳😳
KK: Sorry baba....lekin main kya karoon?tumhare bina main ek pal nahin reh sakti tho poora din kaise nikaltha??😳😳
Su: poora din kahan hota KK??main shaam ko aajatha nah...aur hum saath guzarthe....waise tum kehthi tho main raat bhi guzaar leta!!😉😃
KK: *slapping him lightly* Badmaash!!
Su: *bursts out laughing, then making an innocent face* arrey sirf baatein karte aur kuchh nahin!!😆😆
KK: *also starts laughing* haan haan main tumhaari baatein achhe se jaanti hoon!!😛
Sumit stops laughing and just stares intently at her.....& she stares into his eyes....then he hugs her close & kisses her forehead...he finds it still warm & is concerned, but he knows that she wouldn't listen whatever he said.....Omi was even not in as he was taking Yasho for a check-up.....& Ratan was away on a business trip, so Sumit finally agrees to himself that he would let evryone at the office leave early in the evening and he himself would take KK home......
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As promised, I wrote!!!!!!😛now keep it going guys!!😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
rahu acha tu likdi warna kya karthi samjli naa
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su & kk works for whole day....su kept telling kk not to do more exertion,but she didnt listen& completed her all files & work.
Finally su convinced her to take her home lil early..he holds her hand....& then he touches her forehead..& found it burning..
SU: KK tumhe bahut hi tez bukhar hai..
KK: nahi su.. vo...
before she cud say anything he held her hand tightly..& takes her to d car.
first he took her to d doctor..
SU: dekha kk kaha tha na maine..itna exertion mat karo..rest karo..par tumhe to meri sunni hi nahi hai...tumhe to bas....( & he kept scolding her)😡😡
Kk: su dekho..
SU: chup..ab tum kuch nahi bologi..sirf jo main keh raha hun chup chap sunogi..
He drives her home...& took her to her room..lie her down carefully..(kk is only loking at her lovinly)
Then he gave her medicines..
SU: chalo main cold patting kar deta hun...fever bahut high hai..
KK is still staring at him..lovingly 😳
SU:aise kya dekh rahi ho..?
KK: hmm.. hun..kya... k..kuch nahi aise hi..
SU:main abhi aata hun..,
kk(to herself): itna pyar mat karo mughse sumit..kahin ise meri hi nazar na lag jaye.....main...(by then su comes)
SU:chalo ab apni ankhein band karo...main pattin kar deta hun..close ur eyes. & .he sits besides her..
as he sits..kk hugs him tightly...😳
SU:kk..kk kya hua..😉
KK:kuch nahi..bas thodi der tumhare pass..
SU: arre main kahin nahi jaa raha..tum leto...rest karo...doctor ne bola hai naa..
after sometimes kk falls asleep holding sumit's hand...
SU:( caressing her hair..) jaldi se thik ho jao kk..tumhe aise nahi dekh sakta main...& he kisses her forehead...
pata nahi kab tak tumhe ye pariksha deni hogi kk...bas bhagwan ab to hamari sun lo...main aur nahi reh sakta kk ke bina...aur na hi ise aise dekh sakta hun....pata nahi kab dad hamari shadi ke liye manenge...😭
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here in su 's house...
Omi: yasho tunhe nahi lagta ki ab su ko shadi kar leni chahiye...ab wo..
Yasho: aap bilkul sahi keh rahe hain...ab su ko shadi kar leni chaiye..is ghar ko ab ek bahu ki jarurat hai..
Omi: haan ek sanskari bahu...
OMi(to himself) : kash ki kk jaisi hi koi ladki maeri bahu ban kar aaye..kitni acchi aur sanskari ladki hai....badon ka adar,samman,gairon ke lie bhi apnapan............sare gun hai usme....
kash kk hi.......
Yasho: kya sochne lage chaliye...khana lag gaya hai....
Omi: hmm haan....(jo main soch raha hun agar vo sach ho jaye to....)
YAsho: arre kya hua......chaliy khana thanda ho raha hai..
Omi: hunh... haan......... chalo.
hey rahi & preethi..finally mere dimag me kuch aa gaya 😆see..likh diya......
now someone continue...

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