FF-Hadsa THE END pg-63 *24.8.08* - Page 57

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: panjwani

😭u r ending it soon

no dont do tht sonu
abhi toh su an dkk came together
when we can read abt them it is ending
dont do tht sonu continue it whenever u can😕
anyways tht part was very well written
kk did tht to save su 😭

No di..its gonna end sooner now..hope u'll like the end too..😳



Originally posted by: verni

Bachchaaaaaaaaa...... the part is awesomeeeeee👏👏

The ending would be too gud am sure...cant stay here for long so.. in short..
Words are falling short to describe my feelings... after reading the parts...
Luv u bachchaa🤗

Didi..

U dont know how much i miss u..(u noe the vernier callipers thing na)..uske alaawa bhi..i even tell classmates abt my didoo...pls aap jaldi se aana...coz i miss u a lott...kya ab hum kabhie pehle ki tarah baat nahin kar payenge..?..

I didnt PM u..actually cudnt..and no ti anyone else..u know what life is here...bas..will be waiting for days, like we had in past, where we chatted merrily..


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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Rah_HuJu


awwww...poor KK😭😭...she lost her baby😭😭...kitni taklif main hogi😭😭...Sonu I love your way with words👏👏...I could actually feel Sumit's tension and grief when reading....very emotional and heartwarming part....absolutely excellent👏

Hi di. thanks for the appreciation..i hope u like the next part too.





Originally posted by: sweetpoorvi

hiiii sonu..i read d last 2 parts together...awwssooommmeee yaaarrr

vaise bhi teri to jitni tariff ki jaye kam hi hai..nice long parts dear..👏tune to mughe apna fan pahle hi bana liya tha..ab ac ,cooler...sab banati jaa rahi hai...😆
anyway sukk finally ek hone wale hain..cool..ab last part romantic hoga naa...plz...
waiting eagerly for last part dear....

arrey baabaa ree..dont be a fan of mine..😆..its no big deal..i hope u like the next prt too..thanks..



Originally posted by: seemahujufan

hey sonu well i know i am late a susual but what i can do....

well i read ur part ..well am sad ff will get over but happy that su-kk will meet and loce each other...u write very well and i wanna see new fc soon....

ok di..riting the next part..thanks..n enjoy urself..😳






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Posted: 17 years ago
Epilogue..:

6 years later...


Kumkum is standing on the podium, with tears in her eyes..😭

"Ek aurat..kamzor nahin hoti...ye samaaj use kamzor bana deta hai..aurat ko durga bana kar pooja jaata hai...saraswati bana kar mandiron mein sthapit kiya jaata hai..par use ek insaan ka hi darja nahin diya jaata..Aaj bhi..hamare desh mein developement ki bahut baatein banayi jaati hain...ki india is gonna rule the world..US se comapre kiya jaata hai..china..honk-kong ..singapore se compare kiya jaata hai...kyun?..kyunki hum khud maante hain ki hum..un deshon se peeche hain..aur aisa hai.."👏

A drop of tear trickles down her face..."We talk about women empowerment...we see Indira Gandhi ..PT Usha..sania Mirza..mother teresa as our role models...but ek aisi ladki..jiska..mansik aur shaaaririk shoshan kiya gaya ho..usko buri nazar se dekhte hain..uslo sahaanubhuti aur pyaar dene ki bajay.."😭

She wipes her tears.."And of course, before the media speculates anything else..main khud hi bata doon..ki main bhi ek aisi hi ladki hun...jiske saath sharirik shoshan kiya gaya..par mujhe bhagwaan ne aashirwaad ke roop mein mere pati mujhe diye..Dr.Sumit Wadhwa..jinhone us samay mera saath diya..jab mujhe saath ki zarurat thi....ek dost bankar..wo meri zindagi mein aaye..aur ek humsafar bankar..mera saath diya..bhagwaan se agar kuch maangoon..toh sirf har janam mein unka saath hi maangoogni...thankyou shabd bahut chota hai..magar apni feelings zahir karne ka koi aur tareeka nahin hai..isiliye..thankyou sumit.."😳

She steps down the podium and the hall roars with thunder...!!!👏👏

Announcer.."and there's a suprise for you Mrs.Wadhwa...to give you the President's award for excellence..we have, alongwith the honourable president..Mr.Sumit Wadhwa himself..."😳

Kumkum smiles...It was unexpected.."Sumit?..how come you came to Delhi without informing me..?"😆

sumit hugs her..whisphering into her ears.."kyun?...har baat tujhe batani zaruri hai..Ms. chipkali?..mere kuch secrets nahin ho sakte..?"😆😉

Kumkum smiles..He hadn't changed a bit even after six years of their marriage..He was the same naughty, haughty and good-humored sumit..always pulling her leg..😆

Kumkum receives the award from the President himself..But, sumit, seems to be more happy than kumkum herself..!!!😳

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Kumkum hugs sumit, outside the auditorium..He hugs her back.."Tired??.."😳

"Hmm.."she replies, closing her eyes...😊

"Ok..there's another suprise..close your eyes.."He places his hand on her eyes..😕

"Mamma..!!!!"a 3 year-old rushes to them..😉

"Adoo???.."Kumkum shouts in joy..⭐️

Little Aditi, is taken into arms by kumkum..she kisses Aditi like anything.."are..mera bacchha?... mera Adoo bhi aaya hai papa ke saath?.."😳

She smiles, kissing her mother's cheek..😃

"Mama..chalo..mere adoo ko mere paas do..how dare you touch my girlfriend..aaja Adi.."Sumit takes Aditi from her and kisses her nose..😉

Aditi chuckles.."Daddy.."😛

She kisses his cheeks...Sumit closes his eyes.."aah..haa..ummm..aaah..mera cutie pie.."😳

Kumkum smiles, looking at the father-daughter duo..😊

"Sumit...she had a test at shool...tumne uska test miss karva diya?..."Kumkum asks.😆.

"Kumkum...she's in pre-school yaar..what test-vest?.."Sumit kisses her fingers...😉

"Test-vest-nest.."mutters Aditi..😆

"Sumit..test is a test.."kumkum justifies..

"Shut up..no test vest.."Sumit says, holding kumkum's hand too, taking them, to the car parking..😳

"Aadatein mat bigaado uski...waisi hi bahut bigdi hui hai..."Kumkum opens the car door..😕

"Tum chup raho..apne bete ko sambhalna..meri beti..bigdi hi theek hai.."He replies..😉

He makes her seat comfortably and closes the door, handling aditi to her..😳

"aur agar..beti hui toh?.."Kumkum asks..parting Aditi's hair properly..😉

"Toh kya?..woh bhi meri team mein aa jayegi...phir hum teeno masti se rahenge.."He takes Aditi in arms..making Kumkum wear the seatbelt properly...😆

"papa..ice tream..."Aditi looks at him..

"No beta...thandi mein ice-cream nahin khaate.."Kumkum replies..

"Kyun nahin khaate..tum mat khana..hum toh khaayenge..hai na adoo..??"Sumit kisses her cheek, starting the car..😆

"aaaaah..you two are impossible.."Kumkum shakes her head...😆

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Kumkum is lying down on the bed..Sumit enters the room, closing the door behind him..😳

"Kumkum?...soyi nahin?.."sumit smiles..😕

"tum nahin they na.."she closes her eyes...😳

He sits besides her.."thak gayi na.."

she smiles.."its ok..aditi so gayi?.."🥱

"Hmm...sula diya..."He checks her pulse..

"Nahin baba..fever nahin hai..use sulaane ka kaam toh main bhi nahin kar sakti.."she holds his hand..😳

"hmm..blood pressure check kiya?..aur...sugar test reports dekhi thi tumhaari...low thi na.."😳

He brings a sphygmometer and an injection.."lao..haath do.."

"Itna pareshaan hone ki zarurat nahin hai sumit..its ok..pregnancy mein hota hai BP low.."she places his hand below her head...😳

"ab main kya karoon..museebat tumhaari best friend aur main uska dushman...toh..jab bhi..apni baaki girl friends se time milta hun..toh tumhaari taraf bhi dekh hi leta hun.."😉

"oh..!!..then, its ok...waise agar..meri zarurat nahin hai..toh main baar baar pareshaan nahin karungi..I mean...if i become a hurdle in your dates and all..toh main..jaa bhi sakti hun..chodkar..aur.."

"Chup..!!"he places his hand on her lips..

His eyes become moist.."ek baar khone ka ehsaas ho chuka hai..ab please..dobaara kabhie aisi baatein mat karna.."😭

FLASHBACK

Even after 4 days of her miscarriage, kumkum refused to face anybody...she wished to be left alone..But, one day, when sumit came to check her up, he found her absent from the bed..After a rigorous search, they found her at the beach, walking to a deep end...Sumit, had saved her in time from a huge current..😭

"KUMKUM...!!!"He pulled her closer...

"Main..main jeena nahin chahti sumit..please..chodo mujhe..chodo.."she struggled..😭

"Kumkum...pagalpan mat karo..chalo mere saath.."

"Mujhe nahin jeena hai..leave me.."She shouts..

Kumkum is struggling hard..but, he plants a tight slap on her left cheek.."dimaag kharaab ho gaya hai tera?...pagal...main??..tujhe kuch ho gaya toh mera kya hoga?..socha hai?...."

He pulled kumkum closer and took her in arms...carrying her to a safer place...

She was crying pathetically..."Su..Sumit..I..I..lost my baby..."😭

"I know.."is what sumit said.."i am sorry.."😭

He took kumkum in arms and hugged her tight..Kumkum sobbed badly..

"I have no reason to live now...main toh sirf bacche ki wajah se zinda thi na...ab mujhe nahin jeena hai..main..main.."She breaks down..😭

"Sab mere kaaran hua hai kumkum..main hun sabki wajah.."he blames himself..

"Nahin...wo..wo raasta maine chuna tha...main ..main tumhe bhagwaan se badhkar maanti hun...aur main nahin (sobs) dekh sakti thi tumhe kuch hote hue..isiliye..main..main hi hun wajah..i want to die..i want mercy death..."😭

"Nahin pagal..main hun na...tujhe mere liye jeena hai...main bahut oyaar karta hun tujhse aur..aur..agar tujhe kuch hua..toh i will kill myself...kumkum..I..I love you..."😳

Sumit takes her in arms...but before he could explain anything...her body goes limp and she faints...
FLASHBACK..


"sorry.."kumkum holds in hand..😳

"its ok.."he kisses her hand..."please..kabhie phir iss tarah chodkar jaane ki baat mat karna..."😳

Her eyes become moist on seeing him upset..He bends down and kisses her forehead..😳

"Pap..papa?.."aditi comes, smiling..😕

"arrey?..my baby isn't sleeping?..adoo..aajaa meri gudiya.."Sumit calls her..😃

She comes running and climbs on him..Kumkum starts getting up but, sumit holds her.."arrey..leti raho na..kyun uth rahi ho?.."😳

He lies back..Sumit kisses Aditi's fore head.."sweetheart?..kal bhi school ki chutti karni hai kya?..."😉

She grins.."mama?...aap ye kya tar lahe ho?.."😳

"you noe..ur mumma is a bad girl..isliye unko injection laga raha hun..laga doon?.."sumit asks..😆

she nods.."lada do.."😉

"accha..badmaash.."kumkum takes her in arms.."mamma ko injection laga do..accha bacchoo.."😆

she giggles as kumkum tickles her..😆

"no..chalo..aao aditi..papa ke paas aao..mumma ko injection laga dete hain na.."he kisses aditi's cheek...😳

"mat ladao.."she says, making a luv my mumma face..😛

"accha baba..theek hai..pehle.chalo..jaldi se papa ke paas aao.."he lies her down and closes her eyes..😳

kumkum smiles at them..

"now..close your eyes till u count 20..ok?.."😕

she nods..and begins counting..Sumit quietly moves to kumkum and takes her arm in his hand..she closes her eyes..😳

"kumkum?..kahin zyaada weakness toh nahin ho rahi hai na?..."he asks her, breaking a glass ampule, to inject her..😳

"nahin..theek ho jaoongi thodi der mein.."she gives a faint smile..

"niiiiinneee.....eleven...."😆

"Accha...where's ten?...adooo?.."sumit asks..😉

"ninneee..ten.."she continues..😃

sumit rubs the skin, where he had injected her.."bas..bas.."

He kisses it and smiles.."so jao jaldi se.."😳

"fifteeen.."

He bends down to her lips, and gives a soft peck..kumkum closes her eyes, feeling the warmth of his lips on hers..and reciprocates, with a soft kiss..😳😳😳

"nineteeeeen"

"and twentyyyyyyyyyyy..."sumit shouts and hugs aditi tightly..she laughs aloud..😆😆

"my baby is quite intelligent na..?..adoo?.."he kisses her head..😳

"Chalo..adoo..beta papa's tired too na..aa jaa..mumma paas aa.."kumkum speaks..😳

"no..kyun aa mummy ke paas..mere paas soyegi..aaja.."

After another hour, they all fall asleep, in a very cute position..

Aditi's lying on sumit's chest and sumit is holding her with one hand which is also, touching her stomach..while she's sleeping with his arm around aditi as well as sumit...and her head on his arm..😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
Sonu..I loved this epilogue..
So they had Adoo..good..and Kk is preggy again...
Loved it loved it...
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Posted: 17 years ago
sonu...tht ws the cutest part in ur ff till now..😃
aditi is shooooo shweet..😛
nice to see sukk happy⭐️
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Posted: 17 years ago
thats was a great part thnks soooo much for posting keep up the good work
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Posted: 17 years ago
I am sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo happy Kumkum and Sumit r happy this part was soooooooooooooooooooo lovely awesome mind blowing and Aditi is really shoooooooooooo sweet😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey
gr8 epilogu... n sukk ve aditi n r happy...
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Posted: 17 years ago
sonu such a cute sweet family lovely going yupp aditi is so naughty
sukk ki bacha ya bachi
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Posted: 17 years ago
hi sonu
u fanfic is awesomeeeeeee mate 👏
this was da cuties part ⭐️ ever
it jut excellent part ⭐️⭐️⭐️


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