FF-Hadsa THE END pg-63 *24.8.08* - Page 16

@ Preeti Di-ab kuch toh hoga hi..m writing now... 😳

@ Jasmine-thenQ...dkho m writing to entertain u.. 😳

@ Roku-Thats good...varna tu pit jaati... 😆

@ Ambreen di-ThanQ.. 😭

@ Reshu di-ThanQ di.... 😳

@ Shafoo-well..wait n watch is what i can say... 😳

@ Seema di-ok..m writing.. 😳 😉

@ Priya di-Dekhte hain... 😉

Su-Tum baby abort karaana chahti ho kk?... 😭

Kk-toh main..kya karun... 😭

Su-kk..dekho..faisla tumhe hi lena hai...par bas ek cheez kehna chaahunga..ki zindagi ki shuruaat hamaari nahin bhagwaan ki marzee se hoti hai...aur mere hisaab se..bhagwaan ki rachna ko nuksaan pahuchaane ka haq humein nahin hai... 😳

Kk-......

Su-tumhein agar chunauti mili hai toh tumhe us se ladna chahiye...haar nahin maanani chahiye...

Kk-ye baccha kiska hai jaante ho na... 😭

Su-kk...baccha kiska hai se zyaada zaruri sawaal hai...bacche ki kya galti hai?...ek masoom zindagi ko khatm karna...kya uske saath anyay nahin hoga?...tumhaare saath jo hua...uske baad agar tum aisa faisla leti ho toh...tum bhi kisi ke saath anyaay hi kar rahi ho... 😳

she's crying silently... 😭

su-faisla tumhaara hai...meri baatein bhul jao..jo dil gawaahi de..wo faisla lena...tum aaram karo...main chalta hun... 😭

He leaves the room...

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Its 5:00 PM..

Kumkum knocks Sumit's door...

Sumit-kumkum?..aao..aao na andar baitho.. 😳

He makes her sit on the couch... 😳

Sumit-how are you feeling now?.. 😳

Kk-faisla kar liye maine... 😳

Su-hmm?..kya?...

Kk-ye baccha iss duniya mein aayega... 😳

Tears trickle down her face..He sits besides her and holds her hand... 😳

Su-I knew...sirf meri best friend hi itna sahi faisla le sakti hai...aur kk..tum pareshaan bilkul mat hona...koi bhi takleef tumhe akele nahin sehni hogi..I will be with you...tumhaara dost hamesha tumhaaresaath rahega..hmm?..

She nods her head in agreement... 😳...

Su-abhi tabiyat kaisi lag rahi hai tumhe?...😳

Kk-sarr mein dard hai...

Su-main davaiyaan laaya tha le lin?...😳

Kk-nahin...

Su-stupid...tu koi laaparwahi nahin karegi davaiyon mein...follic acid aur iron subah-shaam lena...aur baaki sab prescription mein likha hai...😳...

Kk-Su..davaiyon ke kitne paise hue...?

Su-paise?..wo..10$...abhi degi?..

Kk-haan..ye le...

She gives him a 10$ note from her purse...😳

Kk-ThankQ

Su-my pleasure...

Su-ab tu jaa..mujhe padhna hai..kal ek practical hai...😳

kk-ok..thanks..

Su-aur ab ye jo aankhon se nal beh raha hai na...use band kar le...😳

Kk gives a faint smile and leaves..

hey so kk took decision!!! good. to see su with kk and kk listen to su. liked dialoges goo one. keep it up 😉

Hey dialoges are awwwwwwwwwsome,u've written it very nicely...N As Su is with kk then no tension guys..

Now that KK has taken the decision........everyone will think that it is Su's child......then what will Angali think...........continue soon.........

Hey the parts are fabuloussss.... I really liked the way Sumit made Kumkum understand that it's not her faulttt 😊 😊 😊

I really like this friendshipppp 👏 👏

The dialogues.... the way he takes her care..... is awesomeeeee 😃 😃 😃

Hey...thanx for the support guys..now m asking u all sumthing...

I have 2 options...

1.To end hadsaa first

2.To end Pyaar first...

Now u tell..

sonu it was just too good loved lines u wrote 😛
wht quest ur ask to end hadsa first end kk mystry ya hii na 😆