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Posted: 17 years ago
Roku, after a long time I m writing here. 😳 ..

Must say a fab ff you r writing with 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
@Nits:writing.Writing...@Raina:thanks dear😳@Sonu:writing mari ma..😆@Norzar:thank i'm writing..😊@Reshu di:thanks di..😉 Sorry sorry guys sorry being so late...I'm continuing the next part..Seeing sumit the principal is shocked..He asks kk.Principal:what is this kk??Sumit tumharai sath kay kar rahahai??Kumkum:sir we miss understood su...Su is a good boy..Actually Sir su's room no is 9 and my room no is 6..By mistake i entered into his room for taking rest and when i saw him sleeping beside me i thought that he wants to do something with me...So i shouted..Sorry sir for bothering u..I'm extremly sorryPrincipal:ok..Leave it..You two go to ur respective rooms and take rest...We have to leave the place at 1pm...Ok..Everyone leaves the place without sukk...Kumkum:Say thanks to me..Sumit:thanks...no way and he leaves the place...Kk too leaves the place.After taking rest they all get ready to leave... In bus.Getting up kk saw that su is sitting with a girl..She feels a bit jealous...Going near to the girl kk starts shouting.Kumkum:Hey get up..This is my sit...I'll sit with su..The girl:no..Can't u see i'm sitting here..Kumkum:see get up...Otherwise..Sumit:hey stop this..And kk kab say tum mari sath bat na chati ho??Kumkum:a a emm..The girl:ok..U sit with su..Kumkum:with a big smile says thanks..sumit is surprised to see this..they both are silent...Suddenly kk sayKumkum: may he bat shuro karti ho...Tell me what is your recent fav song??Sumit:Title song of race...Kumkum:Ok..I'm singing that song for u..Kumkum can't sing well...She start singing..After completing her song she realize that sumit is looking at her...Kumkum:how was that??I know i'm the best singer in the world...Sumit:you were singing??I thought that u were shouting at me..Kumkum:what??She started hitting su...After an hour kk feels asleep...She falls on sumit arm and sleeps...su wants to call her but seeing her innocent face he stops himself....At 3pm they reaches home..In Sharma house Kumkum enters into her house..Kumkum:Tina,ma where are u??Tina:oh kk ur back..I missed u a lot.Kumkum:me too... Kk's ma:we all missed u a lot daughter..Ok now go and take rest...Wadhawa HouseSumit enter into his house...Seeing his everyone becomes happy..They all ask su about the picnic and then asks him to take rest...-----------------Next morning in college...Sumit kumkum and tina reaches college early...Tina ask suTina:Su how was the picnic??Sumit:fine..But u know i missed u a lot...Su hugs her..Tina:i missed u too su..Ok tell me kk tumhara sath koe badmashi to nahi ki??Sumit:looks at kk..And then he says she is really very nice girl..Hearing this kk becomes happy..Then they goes to their class...After class tina and kk ask su to buy three icecream for them..Su goes for icecream...When he was buying icecream he notices that some boys are following tina and kk..Then he saw that the boys was doing jabar darsti with tina and kk..Su runs there and asks the boys to leave in a polite voice....The boys says that if we don't leave then what will u do??Su then start fighting...The boys were very strong...So they start hitting su...Sumit becomes very weak...He falls down....One of the boy open a knife and....................
Edited by HuTiJu - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Yaww!! m the 1st one 2 reply 2day!!!..

It was cute buddy but again, a cliffhanger..but m sure sumit ko tina/kk mein se koi zarur bachaa lega..m right na?. 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
i alsoo thinking the same i dont who saved sumit kumkum or tina problyy kum kum i think
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Posted: 17 years ago
hara yaar su ko mara humm let me see wht i will do 😆 😆
cont next part
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Posted: 17 years ago
oh 😕
i think kk will come in between
and it might hurt her
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
gud part bachcha........ 😃 😃

carry on soon..... how r u now? 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz contuied next plzzzzzzzzz i loved your part plzzzzzz contuied soonnnnnnnn
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Posted: 17 years ago
rokiya cont the next part abb 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago

First of all thanks to my buddies… I'm continuing the next part.

The boy pushes the knife into su's body. And runs away with his gang….

Tina Kumkum shouts: SUMIT…

As su was so weak he falls down…. Tina and Kumkum at once take him in the hospital….

In hospital

Kumkum Tina shouts: DOCTOR….

Doctor with a nurse comes and asks Kumkum Tina: what happened????

Kumkum: doctor he is sumit our friend.. Kuch Gundo nay ispay hamla kea hai..pls admit him… his condition is very weak…. Pls…

Doctor: we can't admit him… it's a police case. So pls info police first then come..

Kumkum: POLICE CASE?? DOCTOR HAVE U GONE MAD… he is dying (with a crying face) or ur asking for police case.. Pls doctor save him… we can't see him in this condition… pls doctor admit him.

Tina: pls doctor… Save our friend…. (With a crying face)

Doctor: no… I can't do anything against the law this hospital… Its my duty to follow the law..

Kumkum: LAW??? WHICH LAW UR TALKING ABOUT???? IN THIS HOSPITAL IT IS WRITTEN THAT LET PPL DIE IF THEY DON"T MAKE ANY POLICE CASE?? IS IT UR DUTY TO SAVE A PERSON WHO IS DYING???? IF NOT THEN PUT OFF THE UNIFORM OF DOCTOR…

Tina: ok I'm making a police case u admit him….

Doctor: ok.. Nurse take him….

After doing some formalities they takes sumit in the operation room… Kumkum Tina is waiting for him outside… after 30 min the doctor comes out n says

Doctor: bohot blood flow hosoka hai.. They need blood for su …

Kumkum: to take blood from hospital's stock

Doctor: His blood group is AB+… This blood group is not available in the hospital.

Kumkum: WHAT??? WHAT TYPE OF HOSPITAL IS THIS???

Doctor: Cool down.. aap ka blood group kaya hai???

Tina: A+

Kumkum: I don't know actually..

Doctor: Ok u come with me…

After checking the doctor says

Doctor: ur blood group is AB+

Kumkum: REALLY??? Thank God…

The doctor the takes kumkum's blood and the start the operation again…after an hour the doctor comes and says

Doctor: He is fine now..

Kumkum: Thanks God…I love u.. Doctor Can I met with him???

Doctor: yeah only one can go…

Kumkum: tina I'm going…(she was going but she remembers something)..Tina Info Sumits family…

Kumkum enters su's room n find that he is sleeping… she goes near to su and sits down ... Sumit was looking sooooo innocent that kk keeps looking a him for sometime…She then kisses su's forehead n hand with passion …

Kumkum: Sumit…. Today I understand how much I love u… when the boy pushed the knife I thought that… I can't live without u su… saying this she hugs su tightly…

Sumit: Ouch….

Kumkum is shocked to heard.. She thinks that su has heard everything…

Kumkum: su……

Sumit: Kumkum ahhh.. kk its unbearable pain…. Pls do something…

Kumkum: thank god isny kuch nahi suna…don't worry Su… I'm calling a doctor….

Kumkum calls a doctor.. Doctor comes a gives su an injection… Doctor says take care of him… He is very weak…

In wadhawa House:

Everyone was waiting 4 su as its 5pm now… suddenly phone rang.. Dadaji picks up the phone…

Tina: Hello…Wadhawa House??

Dadaji: Yeah.. who r u??

Tina: Ji I'm tina su's college friend..

Dadaji: ok. U know where is su????

Tina: ji… he is in hospital

Dadaji:HOSPITAL??????

Everyone is shocked…Tina tells dadaji everything.. Hearing all this they run towards the hospital…

In hospital

Tina then enters into su's room.. kk was there.. she goes neer to kk n ask

Tina: how is he??

Kumkum: he is fine now… but he says that his pain is unbearable..

Tina: Hope he gets well soon..

Then Dadaji, Dadima, mammyji n Dadaji enters… the runs to su

Mammyji: su my son open ur eyes…

Dadima: Su open ur eyes grandson…

Sumit then slowly opens his eyes….. then he notices tht everyone is here…

Sumit: weakly..ma, Dadaji, Dadima, papa….

Everyone is crying…..

Su: don't cry….pls…

Doctor comes n says: pls go 4m here… only one person is allowed to stay. Dadaji, Dadima, mammyji n Dadaji says I want to stay…

Kumkum: u all go I'll take care of su…

Doctor: ok.kk u stay here..

Everyone goes outside…

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After three days su can get up from his bad… but his pain is still unbearable… kk is taking gr8 care of su..she is not going outside of su's room…

One morning su gets up n sees kk is sleeping on su's hand…su tries to get up but but he thinks that if he gets up then kk will also get up…suddenly he realize that kk's hair is disturbing her… su caresses her hair.. Kumkum gets up n says

Kumkum: su… Good morning..

Sumit: Good morning…

Kumkum: u need something??

Sumit: yeah… I want to wash my face n brush my teeth..

Kumkum: ok..lets go..

Kumkum helps su to get up… she then takes su washing room… she helps su to wash his face as he can't move his body properly.. She then brushes su's teeth…after that kk brings su back to his room…

Sumit: kk thank…

Kumkum: thanks???? y???

Sumit: for taking care of my health…

Kumkum: its ok su…

Kumkum then serves breakfast 2 su…then su ask kk 2 eat… kk says no.. she is not hungry…

Kumkum: (thinks) I'm fasting for u su..

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Now all happy?? i've written a long part....

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