pyrasa bandhan updated pg40 on 06.02.07 - Page 22

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Posted: 17 years ago
i hope kumkum gets better i dont want her to die=((
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Posted: 17 years ago
wonderful..but please add sumthing funny..no rona dhoa\na
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Posted: 17 years ago
Sumit waits for another two hours...after sometime..a nurse comes out of her room..sumit goes to her...

sumit-sister...wo..kumkum kaisi hai abhi?...

nurse-hosh aa gaya hai..kya aap hi sumit hain?..

sumit-jee..

nurse-aapka hi naam le rahin thi kafi der se...

sumit-main mil loon use?...

nurse-nahin..please 10 minute aur lagenge...actually unka BP abhi kafi low hai..dr. aakar check kar ke koi injection denge...

sumit-oh!..but..wo thik toh hai na abhi?...

nurse-haan...filhaal to thik hain...main dr. ko lekar aati hoon..

Soon, Asit comes..

sumit-asit?..uska BP?

asit-pareshaan mat ho..ghabrane ki baat nahin hai...stitches aaye hain...thodi weak hai na abhi..aise mein kabhie kabhie BP low ho jaata hai..injection de doonga main use...

sumit-aasit..jaldi kar de pls..main mil..

asit-chal tu bhi saath chal par..she shoudnt be strained...zara bhi stress nahin..

sumit-haan..main khayaal rakhoonga..

asit-aa..chal..

they go to her room...she is lying down, pale and very weak...sumit sits besides her and she puts forward her hand and gestures him to hold it...
sumit holds her hand lovingly and kisses it...

both have tears in their eyes..

sumit quickly wipes her tears and smiles...

asit-kumkum?...hmm..abhi toh sab thik hai..bas BP low hai..injection deta hoon..

sumit -arre...aasit..ye garam kyun lag rahi hai?..ise toh fever hai?..

asit-sumit kuch nahin..steroids le rahi hai..high drugs ke injections hain..temperature high ho jaata hai..ghabra mat baba..

kumkum removes her o2 mask and cries...asit keeps the injection down and sits on her other side...

sumit-arre?..kumkum?..ye kyaa aap ro rahe ho?..munna kya hua?...sweety?(he treats him like a child)....

asit-kumkum(holds her hand)...kya hua kumkum?..

kumkum-asit...ab mat karo mera treatment..

asit-kumkum...baba aisa kyun keh rahe ho..

sumit(kisses her hand)..kumkum kya ho gaya batao..

kumkum-sumit...ab aur takleef seh nahin paa rahi hoon main...su..sumit..agar thodi bhi himmat bachi hoti na..to main mana nahin karti par ab aur nahin...asit ab nahin jeena chahti..i want to end all this pain...please ho sake to ab aur takleef mat do..

sumit-kumkum..accha ye batao..kya ho raha hai?..thik nahin lag raha hai?...

asit-kumkum?...main tumhaare bhai jaisa hoon na?..hmm...tum khulkar batao..dr. nahin bhai maankar..pareshaani to batani chahiye na apni?..

kumkum cries...sumit is not able to control himself...he hugs her warmly...

sumit-kumkum..paagal tumhe jeena hai..ab mere liye jeena hai tumhe...aisa kabhie dobaara sochna bhi mat samjhi...

asit-kumkum?..kya ho raha hai?..batao...

kumkum(hugging sumit)..ab aur taakat nahin hai mujhmein ki main ye sab seh paoon...pls asit..ab nahin..

sumit(stops her)..chup..kaha nahin aise nahin bologi tum..aur agar tumhe takleef hogi bhi..to tumhein mere liye bas kuch din ye takleef sehni hogi..apne sumit ke liye..

asit-nahin sumit..ye apni takleef bataye na..to hum bahut kuch kar sakte hain...

kumkum looks at him..

asit-kumkum please..ek toh tum ro mat bas..

sumit wipes her tears and kisses her forehead..

asit-stress lene se sirf tabiyat kharaab hoti hai..painkiller de doon..kahin dard ho raha hai?..

kumkum-nahin..

sumit-thak rahi ho tum na..

asit-haan..abhi bahut aaram ki zarurat hai...chalo..injection deta hoon aurr tum so jao hmm...

asit injects her...sumit also gets up to leave with him but kumkum holds his hand..

kumkum-please...

asit -tu baith yaar..aur ab thodi coffee pee le..main bhejta hoon hmm?..

sumit(smiles)-hmm..

sumit sits besides her and caresses her hand to put her to sleep..
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Posted: 17 years ago
very sweet bachcha.........sorry itne din baad aayi////.........luved it..............so sweet 👏

hope everything gets fine now 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
yeeee kk is feeling better...wicked update plz continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
i like the emotional scenes..do update soon 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
A nurse enters the room...

nurse-ermm..hello...aap yahaan?..patient aaram kar rahi hain toh please..

but she stops seeing kumkum holding his hand...

sumit-wo..actually...

nurse-aap sumit hain?..

sumit-aapko kaise pata?...

nurse-bahut kuch bataya hai unhone aapke baarey mein...bahut pyaar karti hain na aapse....

sumit(smiles)-haan...

the nurse sits besides kumkum...

sumit-aapko agar jaana ho toh aap jao..main hoon yahaan par...

nurse-nahin..main jaa nahin sakti..unko abhi thodi der mein zarurat padegi...

sumit gets confused but doent say anything...

he caresses kumkum's hand lovingly with moist eyes...

after 15-20 minutes...kumkum intends to change side...sumit leaves her hand...while trying to turn, she starts having problem in breathing....

sumit gets panicked..

sumit-kumkum?..kumkum kya hua?...

nurse-kumkum...aaram se...

she helps her in changing side and rubs her back....in the process...she gets uncomfortable, sita down holding sumit's hand and starts crying.....

the nurse gives her water...

sumit-kumkum/?....ro kyun rahe ho baba?...kumkum..??

nurse(softly)-please...neend mein hain abhi wo...dekhiye abhi so jayengi.....

sumit-(hugs her and pacifies her)...sab thik hai munna...chinku?...

she cries for sometimes and falls asleep in his arms...
sumit moves a little aside and checks if she has fallen asleep...

sumit-so gayi....

nurse-isiliye baithna padta hai...thodi thodi der mein aisa hi hota hai...saans lene mein dikkat hoti hai...phir pareshaan ho jaatin hain....neend tutegi phir har aadhe ghante mein..

sumit(in tears)-ye takleef kyun??...

nurse-wo..jab wo let ti hain to unke tumor waale hisse mein circulation ruk jaata hai...karvat lene ki koshish mein saans tut jaati hai..

sumit-aap jao...main baitha hoon..

nurse-unko letayenge aap to..

sumit-baitha hoon main..aise hi so jayegi thodi der?..

nurse-thik hai..
the nurse leaves...sumit is unable to see her in such a state...he cries ..but avaoids any movement...

he kisses her shoulders...

kumkum(faintly)-sumit?..sumit kahaan?..

sumit-(kisses her head)bas kumkum...yahin ho...so jao aap..

she holds his hand and falls asleep...sumit closes his eyes thinking "....bas ab meri kumkum aur kuch nahin sahegi...bahut kuch jhel chuki ho tum...kuch din aur...sab thik hoga...par ab humein jald hi ek hona hoga...y sab akele nahin face karogi tum.."
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Posted: 17 years ago
great but please write soon n longer..you are the only ff writer who listens to me when i say write soon n thanx for it..
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Posted: 17 years ago
great
hope kk gets fine soon
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
hope kk gets fully fine sooooon
awesum write up..
continue soon 😊

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