FF Kumkum- Ek Pyari Si Prem Kahaani #1 - Page 37

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Henna042

glad to hear Anku...

u've been there with me since the beginning...

...actually u r this fanfics 1st fan now i come to think about it!!! 😆 Hamesha saath rehna ok! 😃

but Anku no rushing into marrige...it will happen soon but when u start rushin...it ruins the storyline...so were gonna do it properly... trust me it will be worth the wait...😉

han i noe i ws hee frm d start😳...just coz i luv fanfics😳

i really wnt 2 open d previous one n wnt u all 2 writ tht too 😃

arrey yeh intezar nahin hota na....i rally wnt 2 c hmmm i dunno wht😆...will b w8ting fr updates😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
yeah!! really good to see the ff forum so active!! 😃 😃 And hope this goes on for many more pages to become the longest ever fanfic in the history of if!! too dramatic ??😆 😆 😆 but really wish it does!!! 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: raji05

yeah!! really good to see the ff forum so active!! 😃 😃 And hope this goes on for many more pages to become the longest ever fanfic in the history of if!! too dramatic ??😆 😆 😆 but really wish it does!!! 😳 😳 😳

even i wish so...

the activeness culd b imagined from the fact that the last part is written on pg 45 n right now we r crusing to r half century😊

i'm so happy😃

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Henna042

Verni gee aap key liye yeh romance kuch zyaada toh nahi ho gaya? 😳

...u still there?....haven't been blow of ur chair?!!! 😆

itne dare to emotional kiya hai.. ab to tora romance ho jaye naa?!!!

arey nahi mera bachcha..............not at all...............i too like such romance..............but till marriage till a limit...........😊

hope u understand...........

i loved it...............u'll get romance from me tooooo😊

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Posted: 18 years ago

Everybody enters kk's room…su makes a face at kk thinking 'see everybodies here now'

Kk: laughs at his expression 😆

Su: annoyed 😡 looks the other way

Ra: arre kk ab tum kaise ho?

Pr: goes and sits next to kk on the bed 😊

They start talking…Su walks towards the door…kk is watching him 😕

Ak: (Getting up and running to him) 😃 Sumit Uncle…

Su: 😔 stops and turns around

Ak: kahaan jah rahe hein? 😊

Kk: also listening eagerly 😲

Su: (looks towards kk) Ghar jah raha hoon

Kk: (makes a sad face)

Su thinks: yes ab moka mila hai 😈…ab to mein pura fayda utahoonga! 😆

Ak: nahi Sumit Uncle aap yahaan hi raho 😃

Su: akshat…mujhe jaana hai…plz 😉

Ak: holding his hand…nahi sumit uncle 😭

Rahul turns around and looks at Akshat 😳

Ra: Akshat zidd mutt karo…sumit ko jaane do

Kk: (thinks) nahi bhaiya 😕…su ko nahi jaane do …plz rokh loh…😭 akshat tu hi mera kam kar deh! 😛

Ak: per papa maine khelna hai 😕

Ra: Akshat abhi nahi…su teek bhi nahi hai…😳 (turns towards su) Su tum ghar jao hum hein naa yahaan 😊

Su: (thinks) arre rahul neh to mujhe such mein ghar bejh diya …ab to jaana hi hoga 😕 (to Rahul) ok then mein chalta hoon...

kk: has a really disappointed look on her face …she watches him leave sadly 😒

Outside Su punches the wall 😡

Su: (to himself) arre tu kya bahir kar raha hai 😡…unn sub ko bahir hoona chahiye tah aur tu under…ab kuch soch…

Somebody puts their hand on su's shoulder from behind…he turns to see who it is…😲

Vik: Hey Su 😊

Su: hi Vikram (shakes hands with him)

Vik: Congratulations!!!! Nehi zindagi bohut mubaruk ho…😃

Su: (smiling pleased with himself)…looks towards kk thru da window…haan mujhe mere zindagi waapis milgaye 😆 😳

Vik: mere seniors neh mujhe bataya tumhare operation key bare mein…lehkin abhi bhi tumhai bohut araam karna hai 😳…no office work just yet 😉

Su: ok…(thinks) 😆 arre office jaana kah to mera irada bhi nahi tah 😛

Vik: take care Su..(pats him on the shoulder gently and walks off)

Su turns towards the window again to see whats happening inside…Vikram stops in his tracks..he has a large grin on his face..😃

Vik: (turning towards su) aur haan su ek baat aur...😆

Su: kya?😲

Vik: yeh beds nah…patients keh liye hote hain…(smile escaping on his face) 😛 😆

Su: shocked 😳…to kya tumne kal….😳 😳 😳

Vik: nods his head and walks off again…😉

Su goes a lil red 😳…he feels embarrassed 😳 that Vikram saw him n kk sleeping 😳…probably on one of his round of the ward…

Su: pehle baar maine maana kiya...😳 mein keh raha tah kk se…nahi teek hai…maine sona nahi hai …yeh kk bhi nah khabi bhi meri baat nahi maanti…😊 (smiles to himself)

Meanwhilst back in kk's room

Priya and Rahul are making a fuss over kk…asking 101 questions about how she is feeling 😕…Akshat is getting bored 😔…kk is trying to get Akshats attention so that he can go stop Su…

Pr: ab kaisa lag raha hai kk? 😊

Ra: haan tu teek hai naa ab?

Kk:…about to talk… 😕

Pr: fikar mutt kar hum hain naa tere paas 😳

They continue ranting on…finally kk manages to speak

Kk: Bhaiya…bhabi mein bilkul teek hoon…😡

Ra comes forward and is about to sit on the bed too…he puts his hand on the bed and feels something underneath the covers…

Ra: (lifting the covers slightly) yeh kya hai…😲

Kk: watches him 😲

Ra: lifts up Su's mobile…yeh mobile..😕

Kk: (gubrah jaati hai) 😲…haan yeh mobile hai 😳

Pr: (slaps her playfully on her arm) yeh to rahul ko bhi pata hai keh yeh mobile hai 😆

Ra: yeh sumit ka mobile hai naa 😳

Kk: (quietly) haan 😳

Ra: yeh bed pey kya kar raha hai…

Kk: ..erm….mujhe kya pata yeh bed pey kya kar raha hai… 😳 😳

Pr: looks at kk…kya matlub tujhe nahi pata 😕

Kk: woh…mein 😕…woh…woh..(doesn't know what to say)

Ra: (sternly) kaho kk tum kya? 😳

Kk: woh mein …(quickly) mein to kal so rahe thi naa to mujhe nahi pata..😉

Ra:haan tum to kal so rahe thi…(agreeing with her) 😊

Pr: phir kaise? 😕

Kk: bhaiya mobile hi hai…kya farak parta hai kahaan se aaya…(trying to change the topic) 😃

Ra: (seriously) phir bhi mein jaana chahoonga keh sumit ka mobile tumhari bed pey kya kar raha hai…

Kk: (gettings all red 😳 and heated up)

Ra: arre per tum kyun gabrah rahi ho 😊 (assuring her its ok)…tum araam karo 😃…mein sumit se hi pooch loonga…😉

Pr: haan aur usse lota bhi dehna uska mobile 😊

Kk: (thinks) uh oh! Ab sumit kya jawaab deyga? 😕... I hope key tum ghar chale gaye ho 😒…aur jub takh bhaiya chale nah jein tum waapis mutt aana plz…😕

Just then Sumit decides to walk back in …just his luck…

k ur turn guys! i'm gonna rest my finger for a while! 😆

Edited by Henna042 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: verni

arey nahi mera bachcha..............not at all...............i too like such romance..............but till marriage till a limit...........😊

hope u understand...........

i loved it...............u'll get romance from me tooooo😊

yeh i understand what u r saying...n i agree 😆

u r completely right in saying so! 😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
awesum part henna 😊
specially the line 'ye bed patients k liye hai' 😆 😆 😆 is just mindblowing...
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Posted: 18 years ago
👏......
"ye bed patients ke liye hai" ......😆.....damn gud...m waitin 4 more 😳 😳....
Edited by nature - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
veryyyyyyyy sweet i wont be able to write tom.......so lil today..... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow!!!! 👏 that was an awesome part!!! it was really funny..aur Sumit!! he's the limit...arre office jaana kah to mera irada bhi nahi tah 😳 😳 😳!!!
waiting for the next part 😛😛😛 lagta hai sumit khudh jakar phasega!!😆😆
Edited by raji05 - 18 years ago

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