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Posted: 16 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: maureen100001

Nazy darling...sooooooooooo sorry I'm late actually I got lost😆

Once again a fab epi, tumhari taareef tho kithni kiya jaaye, uthna hi khum hain👏 arrey,, yeh tho Kumkum ka dialog hain😆😆 Seriously yaar like I say always u r unbelievably good👏
and once again they bump in to eachother😆 Ise kehthehe Kisamat😳😆 destiny!!!
aur Kumkum ka sharmana, hiyeeee. 😍I loooooove the way Sumit toaly goes blank and forgets what he was suppose to say evrytime he sees her 😳 Aur ha Naz yeh Aishwarya Rai ne bilkul sahi kaha Sumit ki baare mein, u tell me which Woman in this Universe has the guts to look at Sumit's eyes and not fall in love with him???🤢☺️
Raj and Simmie are very cute( tumhare ff ka,😉 😆 hamare dono bhi obviously cute hoga😆) ' I missed you' 'I missed you too' ....yah mein kahi suna hain...kaha suni? haaa Sumit aur Kumkum ki voices mein suni hain😉😆 and yaar I'm so growing to Sumit's gang😛 (ofcause excep for Renuka😡) typical collegers😆, arrey wah, Sumit already can't take a single thing against Kumkum😳 ha ha, kyun nahi😛 Kumkum ki izzat pe Sumit ke elawa aur kise haq hain??....
And yaar it's ok, u slowly slowly reveal what ever the differences she had in the past. Shayad yeh sab Sumit himself might try and findout....Koi problem nahi, because Sumit Kumkm ko ithna pyaar karenge, ithnaaaaaaaa pyar karenge ki he will reverse 10,15 times all those bad moments, heart breaks she had in the past.😍 like he does always😳
Mera essay katham😆once again awesome Naz👍🏼

Thank u so much maureen sweetie...
was waitin for ur comment..
maine socha tumhe part inti buri lagi ke tum comment hi nahi deparahi ho
but wow u loved it
im so glad u loved this part also...
and u like the gang awwwww..that is cool
ya yaar sumit ki aankhen hain hi aise ke koi bhi doob jaaye un mein😆
and ya Kk raaz wil reveal slowly 😃
thanks a gain for reading it sweetie..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#82
finally!!!!!!!! i am back to read ur ff di

i read the part........
it was tooooooooo good
really sweet........and cute
and ye ajay kitna khana khata haiiiiiii
ye to mere liye do din ka meal hai😆
haan ajay ko dekh kar lagta hai
that he really loved food

sukk again takra gaye
haiiiiiiiiiiii i love their takrana
well lovely introduction part
and ashu is soooo kind with kk
she is such an amazing friend
friends ho to ashu jaise........
loved the way u have made kk and ashu chemistry

and i hate that renuka a lotttttt
she is such a trouble maker
and kk ashu ki baat manna and don't even talk to renuka😡
and ashu ki aur ek baat manna do talk to su😆
cause he is soooooooo cute and caring person😳

do con't soon di
and sorry for reading so late
love afreen🤗



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Posted: 16 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: juhuti

finally!!!!!!!! i am back to read ur ff di

i read the part........
it was tooooooooo good
really sweet........and cute
and ye ajay kitna khana khata haiiiiiii
ye to mere liye do din ka meal hai😆
haan ajay ko dekh kar lagta hai
that he really loved food

sukk again takra gaye
haiiiiiiiiiiii i love their takrana
well lovely introduction part
and ashu is soooo kind with kk
she is such an amazing friend
friends ho to ashu jaise........
loved the way u have made kk and ashu chemistry

and i hate that renuka a lotttttt
she is such a trouble maker
and kk ashu ki baat manna and don't even talk to renuka😡
and ashu ki aur ek baat manna do talk to su😆
cause he is soooooooo cute and caring person😳

do con't soon di
and sorry for reading so late
love afreen🤗



awww thank u so much Affreen..
glad u love this part also..
aur haan renuka is in the story to hate..
bas dekhti jao kya kya hota hain...
hope ull raed the next part also..
Love
-Naz-
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Posted: 16 years ago
#84
hee guys
here i am back with the 4th part of my Fanfic Tera Saath Hain Kitna Pyaara..
i know im a slow updater...par kya karoon im not that fast like our writermasters...
anyways hope u guys still remember the story...

Recap part 3: Renuka waitin for Sumit, Sumit & his friends in morning, Raj and Simmie have a moment in cantine, Sumit & Kumkum bump again, Sumit & Kumkum finally introduced, Sumit and friends meet Kumkum and Ashu, Kumkum sad by Renuka question reagrding her last name, Kumkum Ashu moment, Kumkum & Ashu looking for their classroom...

Part 4
Sumit and his friends enters the classroom
for their lecture followed by Renuka and behind her Suraj with his friends.
They all take a seat and Sumit sitting and still thinking why Kumkum was sad when Renuka asked her about her last name..just then Kumkum and Ashu also enters the same classroom…both surprised to see Sumit and his friends also there..

Ashu whispering to Kk: Haila ye churail bhi yahaan hain..Kk tum uske side mein seat nahi lo ghi..dekho seat next to Su is empty tum wahaan pe jaa ke sit karo..

Kk also whispers: Shhhhh kya kehrahi ho…main uske next nahi baitungi..main kaheen aur baith jawungi..waise bhi wo mujhe hamesha ghur ta rehta hain..

Ashu whispering: to achha hain na to tum bhi ghurna usko..

Kk whispering: kya!!!…kya kehrahi ho..main aisa kuch nahi karungi..

And both slowly walk into the classroom. The teacher welcomes them and tell them to take a seat..as they were the last students all seats were taken and only next to Renuka was empty and next to Su. Renuka sees this and wants to go to sit next to Su before Kk sits there but Ajay, Su's friend was watching all this and whispers to Raj wo was sitting next to him..

Ajay whispering: yaar Raj tu jaa ke Renuka ke next seat pe sit karo na..?

Raj whispering: Kyon..im already sitting here na..

Ajay whispering: yaar tum sawaal kyon karrahe ho..tum yahaan se hatto ge tab to wo Kk ke dost next to me sit karpaayi ghi

Raj whispering: yaar tu bhi na..jahaan ladki dekha..doston ko bhool jaate ho..Ravi ko kyon nahi kehta..

Ajay whispering: uffo ab dekh to emotional black mail mat kar mere ko..Aur Ravi meri next to nahi baitha hain na… wo to front mein hain aur uske saath to Raksha baithi hain na..aur tu to jaanta hain na mera dil kitna soft hain main do pyaar karne walon ko judaa thodi na karunga…dekho na kitne pyaar se dono baithe hain..

Raj: uffo main nahi jawunga..yaar aur wo bhi Renuka ki next mein..yaar tu to jaanta hain na wo kitna bholti hain..mujhe headache hone lakta hain

Ajay: to tu meri baat nahi maanega..apni dost ke liyee itna bhi nahi karoge..

Raj: yaar ab nautanki mat shuru kardena..apna bhola chehra dekha ke..main nahi jawunga..doosra lecture mein tum jiske saath chaaho baith jaana..

Ajay: achha aisi baat hain… tu jaata hain ke main Su se kahoon teri aur wo tera Simmie ka chakkar..

Raj shocked whispers: Kyaaa tujhe..S..S..Simmie..tujhe kaise pattah…

Ajay whispering: hehe yaar main ho Ajay…Ajay Khanna aur mujhe sab malung hain..

Raj whispering with a helpless face: theek hain, Theek hain, bahut bhaaw mat kaah main tujhse lecture ke baat mein baat karta hoon..aur aggar kisiko patta chala na to..

Ajay with a naughty face: arre nahi yaar..tu jaaraha hain na…to main kissi ko nahi batawunga..promise..mujhe meri food ki kasam..aur remember mera soft dil…

Raj shaking his head and stands up and goes to sit next Renuka who wanted to go and sit next to Su before Kk would sit next to him, but could not go as Raj came and seated next to her..

Raj: Kya hua Renuka..tum kahin jaa rahi ho..?

Renuka: hmmm nahi wo..tum yahaan tum to Ajay ke next wala seat pe baitha tah na..?

Raj: Haan wo kya hain na..main wahaan se clearly teacher ko nahi sun paraha tah to main yahaan chala aaya..tumhe koi problem hain..?

Re: no..not at all, not at all..mujhe kya problem hoga..

And Re smiles fakely..and watches irritated and follows Kk, while Ajay smiles to Ashu who understands his ishara for her to sit next to him so that Kk lands up sitting next to Su..Ashu sits next to Ajay and says to Kk

Ashu: Kk tum wahaan pe baitho na..?

Kk looks at her and knows that ye sab Ashu jaan mujh ke karrahi hain and she gives her a tujhe main dekh lungi look and goes to sit next to Su. Su smiles to her and Kk shyly smiles and sits next to him. Putting her books on the table while Su is looking at her amazed. Kk notices his look and feels shy and kind a confused by the mixed feelings she feels when he looks at her like that and she doesn't understand why she feels like that by his look..

Kk: Kya hua..aise kyon dekh rahe ho..

Su coming back to his senses: hmm..m…m…main k k kuch nahi..wo aise hi..woh I wanted to say sorry earlier wo meri dost ke sawaal ke wajahse wo..

Kk smiling: To tum kyon sorry kehrahe ho..sawaal to tumhari dost ki thi na..

Su smiling: haan wo to hain..lekin phir bhi mujhe achha nahi lagta ke mere dost aapko sad karde

Kk: its ok..waise choro un baaton ko jo hogaya so hogaya..

Su smiles: haan ur right..waise main tumse ek baat puuchu

Kk: haan kya poochna chahte ho aap..?

And Su forwards his hand and says

Su: Kya tum mujhse dosti karoge..? Do u like to be my friend..

Kk hesitates first but then smiles and forwards her hand and they both shake hands

Kk: Ofcourse..ab hum dost hain..

Sumit smiles and says

Su: aur please tum mujhe aap mat kaho,

Kk smiles: theek hain..main tumhe tum kahungi

And both smiles, both feeling good and don't understand why they feel so good in each others presence

Ajay and Ashu sees this and gets happy and Ajay also forwards his hands to Ashu

Ajay: Kya tum mujhse dosti karoge..?

Ashu: excuse me..?

Ajay: ya..u want to be friends with me..

Ashu: main to aise hi dosti nahi karti…aur aaj to mera mood nahi hain kissi se dosti karne ko..sorry

Ajay: ok no problem..ill try later..

Sumit, Kumkum, Ravi, Raksha and Raj laughs and Ajay embarrassed throws a piece of paper to them..while Renuka watches irritated at SuKk from her seat..and how much fun the guys are having with Kumkum and Ashu…Suraj notices all this as he was sitting one table behind her..he leans to her and whispers..

Suraj: Kyon kya hua meri jaan..Tera dost Sumit to kisi aur ke chakkar mein phas raha hain….dekho dekho kaise has raha hain wo..lakta hain Kumkum ne uspe koi jaadu kardiya hain…

Renuka irritated: What rubbish!!!! Aisa kuch nahi hain..wo sirf dosti ki hain..tumhe kya patta

Suraj sarcasticly: chalo tum kehti ho to maan leta hoon..par kal ke mat bholna maine warning nahi diya tah…

Renuka: shut up…aur tumhe mujhe warning dene ko koi zaroorat nahi hain..aur tum hote kaun ho mujhe warning denewala..Renuka jo bhi karti hain wo soch samach ki karti hain..samdja..

And Renuka angrily turns her face the other way..

Suraj thinking: Main bhi dekhta hoon Renuka..tum mera kaise nahi hota..

And he cracks his pencil with his hands and the pencil brakes in two pieces..

Renuka watches Sumit and kumkum and Surajs words are echoing in her mind..

Renuka thinking: Kuch to karna parega..warna kahin ye Suraj ke baat sach na hojaaye..

To be continued...

Hope u guys enjoyed this part also like the first 3 parts..
thank u all for reading it
Love
-Naz-

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Posted: 16 years ago
#85
fantastic naz this part is really interesting
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Posted: 16 years ago
#86
WOW Yaara👏👏👏...Ab main aur kya kahoon??😕😕😕...Itne ache part likhti ho kay speechless hojati hoon main😃😃😃...Waise I am going to use your dialogue lekin aaj kay part ko padh kar KUCH KUCH HONE LAGA hehe😆😆😆...Seriously the way you presented Sumit and Kumkum ahhhhhhhhhhhhh😉😉😉...Main toh dreamworld mein chali gayi thi😍😍😍...OMG ab toh sari raat apke part kay hi sapne ayein gay😉😉😉...I mean I love how Kumkum got shy to sit next to Sumit at first but then she sat there anyway...Then the SWEETEST part EVER...Mujhse Dosti Karoge???😃😃😃...You should have seen main yahan computer kay samaney chila chila kar keh rahi thi HAAN HAAN muger sadly he was not asking me hehe😆😆😆...I also love the part because Renuka😡😡😡 was being tortured in the part...It's a GOOD FEELING to see her like that...Awwwwwwwww Ajay and Raj scene was ADORABLE...I mean the way Ajay blackmailed Raj about Simmie SO CUTE...Aur phir Ashu was playing hard to get POOR AJAY😳😳😳...Overall the part was GREAT...I love the descriptions you give it makes it easier to imagine the whole thing happening...Oh BTW Di...Hum apke ff ko kabhi bhool hi nahin saakhte and don't worry about updating early...We all know your parts are always worth the wait so just keep writing FF Master Ji👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼...I am looking forward to your next update!!!
Luv Alwayz Sahar😳
Edited by KumkumisGR8 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#87

yeeeeeeeeeee FINALY!!!!!😛.....jhug jhug jiyo Di.....thanks for updating😃

uffffffffffff the part was FANTASTIC AWESOME FABULOUS!!!!!

kitna enjoy kiya maine read karte waqt😉

hehe kk ka nasha abhi tak uthra nahin....bechara su voh tho gaaya kam se😆😳
and omg i was waiting ke kab kk class mein entry karegi.........aur intezaar khatam😃...voh aa gaayi
yaar su se ziada main khush ho gaayi thi😆😆😆

and omg Ajay and raj are soooo funny😆😆...and Ajay already fida for Ashu😉...hmmm would love to see more about these two😉............and the way he blackmailed Raj😆😆....first with his bhola chehra but it doesnt work sooooo uska simmie se realtionship ka faida utha liya😆😆....loved that part Di😳

and then sukk.........ufffffff what can i say about this part😳😳......just love the way they talk to each other........pehle toda sharam se aur phir dosti ho gaayi😃😃..aur dheere dheere pyaar😳....and the way he apologize to kk for renuka's question....awww soooooo cute😳😳....ufff i can imagine he's cute face😍😍😍.....

thank u Di for this wonderful and soooo cute part....
Love u🤗
Edited by mdtafan - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: mirza_ajju

fantastic naz this part is really interesting

Thank u so much Affu...im glad u like it..😃
love
-Naz-
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Posted: 16 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: KumkumisGR8

WOW Yaara👏👏👏...Ab main aur kya kahoon??😕😕😕...Itne ache part likhti ho kay speechless hojati hoon main😃😃😃...Waise I am going to use your dialogue lekin aaj kay part ko padh kar KUCH KUCH HONE LAGA hehe😆😆😆...Seriously the way you presented Sumit and Kumkum ahhhhhhhhhhhhh😉😉😉...Main toh dreamworld mein chali gayi thi😍😍😍...OMG ab toh sari raat apke part kay hi sapne ayein gay😉😉😉...I mean I love how Kumkum got shy to sit next to Sumit at first but then she sat there anyway...Then the SWEETEST part EVER...Mujhse Dosti Karoge???😃😃😃...You should have seen main yahan computer kay samaney chila chila kar keh rahi thi HAAN HAAN muger sadly he was not asking me hehe😆😆😆...I also love the part because Renuka😡😡😡 was being tortured in the part...It's a GOOD FEELING to see her like that...Awwwwwwwww Ajay and Raj scene was ADORABLE...I mean the way Ajay blackmailed Raj about Simmie SO CUTE...Aur phir Ashu was playing hard to get POOR AJAY😳😳😳...Overall the part was GREAT...I love the descriptions you give it makes it easier to imagine the whole thing happening...Oh BTW Di...Hum apke ff ko kabhi bhool hi nahin saakhte and don't worry about updating early...We all know your parts are always worth the wait so just keep writing FF Master Ji👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼...I am looking forward to your next update!!!
Luv Alwayz Sahar😳

Waw thank u so much sweetie..
ur comments are always so motivating and makes me feel so good..
awww tujhe bhi kuch kuch hone laga..yaara abhi se..dosti wala part se..
im happy u love it yaara
hehehe i can imagine all of us wanting to be dost with Su..😆
i can totally understand what u mean..😃
im glad u liked Ajay and Raj and ashu
and yaa mujhe bhi mazaa aati hain renuka ko torture likhte huwe😆
aww thanks for not forgettin the story..😃
will try to update soon
Luv u
Naz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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tht was cool part i am wondringg what going on renuka evil mind

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