SuKk FF - Tera Saath Hain Kitna Pyara prt 7 g 20 - Page 6

Originally posted by: KumkumisGR8

👏LOVED IT MASTER FF WRITER👏

😃😃😃Hai Main Mar Jawaan😃😃😃...Zaroor aaj mera lucky DAY hai...Theen theen update yaara ab bus Simmie update karde aur yahaan SNOW hojaye (I don't want to go to school tomorrow😆) toh meri toh life bun jaye gi...Anyways meri toh baateyein chalti rahein gyi but let's talk about your ff...mohabbat se zyada mohabbat hain tumse meri jaan...OMG I am totally FIDA over this line Di...Seriously if I ever fall in love then I will definitely use this line but won't forget to quote you...I can just imagine the scene right now...Sahar: "Mohabbat se zyada mohabbat hain tumse meri jaan AISA MERI NAZ DI KEHTI HAIN😆😆😆"...Ok back to reality now...Di apne toh meri quality Simmie mein dhal di...Main jab bhi phone par baat karti hoon I always argue over who will hang up first...Waise bohut maaza ayaa woh scene BOHUT CUTE tha and thanks to the names I can only imagine Dr. Simmie and Raj...Arre yeh kya apne toh comedy bhi itni perfection se likhi main toh ahhhhhhhhhh...Bua is a CUTE character...I like her...The whole family sounds ADORABLE...Dada, Dadi, and Ashmit are CUTE...Aur I enjoyed the mommy daddy romance...Ohhhhh toh Sumit ji toh Kumkum ko imagine bhi karne laage...balke woh toh inhe khanna parosaney bhi laagi...Arre meri jaan pehle Kumkum se baat toh kar😆😆😆...Oh yeh kya Kumkum ki mystery continues...Di ap yeh kya karahi hain humare saath...Now I know what you go through during Sukk judaii in my ff😭😭😭...I like kay Kumkum has a nice family to live with...Acha FIRST OF ALL THANKS SO MUCH FOR UPDATING THIS WEEK aur ab phirse jaldi eik aur update karna PLEASE...I will be waiting😃😃😃

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Luv Alwayz Sahar😳

Originally posted by: Pearl29

Nice...............nice.................family introduction was good.............long one 2...............waiting 2 read more Sukk parts............

Originally posted by: coorg.japan

Good one yaar !!! Keep going. Love to read it

Originally posted by: marrukhkhan

vrey nice part so sweet simmie i like the way u r writing FF continue soon

Originally posted by: Fan of Juhi

Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww👏

Di u started a fanfic it is fabulous👏

Mughai toh Pattah hi nahin chalka😕😕😕

u started fanfic😃😃😃

i think m soooooooooooooooo lateeeeee😭

m sooooooooooooo sorryyyyyyyyyy😭

But the good thing is that i saw it is fantabulous👏

i am sim0ply speechlesss👏

You rocked👏

Characters r awesomeeeeeeeeeeeee👏👏👏

You r 2 a fabulous writer👏

You rocked di👏

Love uuuuuuuuuuuu👏

N concept of story is mind blowing👏

Superb👏

Beautiful👏

Lovelyyyyyyyy👏

Hats off to u👏

N Gauri Hiten r 2 there😃😃😃

Woow robbie Kasturi 2👏👏👏

N Gaurav 2👏👏👏

Woowwwwwwwwww👏

You really rocked👏

M really speechless👏👏👏

Kamal ker diya👏

Best of luck 4 it😳😳😳

Love😃

Annie😳

Originally posted by: maureen100001

wah wah wah Naz fantastic! U blew me off with your second episode too 😆😆

Yaar ab toh yeh kahaani produce karna hi hain muje! this is undoubtedly a SUPER HIT!!! So the pleasure is mine..Common, this is a complete script , romance hain, comedy hain, drama hain, suspense hain and most importantly situations and the caracters are 100% real. Amazing!!!!

Arrey Naz jo cast tume ne choose kia, woh sab aisa hi hogi. Especially tumhare jaan Gaurav😳😳😆

Lekhin mera ek problem hai. Ab muje tho yeh patha hain ki jab Gaurav comes to the sets obviously tum behosh hojayengi, 🤢 and when Hussain and Juhi comes to the sets main behosh ho jayengi🤢

Do behosh logon ke saath kya ye laugh kaam karenge???😆

And yaara seems like u have done a research on Hussain Juhi and dada dadi, jo unka dialogues mein, expressions mein muje woh identical laugh nazar aathehe. 'Arre dadima, college was FINE' Fine is another word in Hussain's list😆 now I'm waiting for his next famous word 'REEALLY GOOD / REEALLY NICE'😆😆 and Naz yaar u r right, he uses these words in the re-incarnation track too. In fact that was the whole point of starting the re-incarnation story right? Both of them wanted a break from the heavy duty, conventional characters and dialogues so they started a light story with characters whom they can relate to, who are much similar to them. right? ok ab mein shuru hua😆

Raj aur Simmie ki DDLJ is sooo cute😳 and Naz I was falling off my chair in the part where Kumkum Sumit ki kayalon mein aathe hain aur poochthe hain ' ek aur parata do'❤️and to see it's Simmie🤣 too good yaar.😆😆 I picturizes Sumit as the cool dude who weras body fits and denims☺️ Sumit after re-incarnation. Kumkum, before re-incarnation that too her early days when she didn't talk much with Sumit. that shanth, susheel, gorgeous ladki with silky straight baal😍 jab woh kidki ke paas aasman mein taron ko dekhthe ho...haye😍

ok now this is becoming an essay. 😆😆can't wait for the next epi. come soon ok😊

Originally posted by: juhuti

Amazing Di!!!!!!!!

haiiiiiiiiiiii aapke is ff ne to mere hosh he uda diye hai
hoosh mein aai hoon to reply back kar rahi hoon
sorry for the late reply.............

Di, i am seriously speechless.......
mujhe samajh nahiin a raha ke kia likhoon
what a great part........totally loved it
super.....mindblowing......excellent part di
kia dialogues likha hai aapne
toooooo god di.......toooo good

aur ye simmie ka college su se jaldi jane ka raaz
bhi pata chal gaya......
to ye apne raj se mil sake, use dekh sake😳
😳ise liye woh su se pehle jati hai...........
iska matlab su late nahiin hota
hamari simmie he raj ke liye jaldi ghar se nikal jati hai
Awwwwwwwww thats soooo sweet😳😳😳

really liked simmie and raj ph conv
it was really nice, cute, sweet and romantic
i like that pehle tum rakho, to pehle tum rakho
are raj and simmie.....kahiin ye phele tum-pehle tum
ke chakkar mein tumhare life na nikal jaaye
ab bas bhi karo aur kkoi ph to rakho
thanks to our su..........k woh aya and simmie ne ph rakh dia
and then raj bechara bana raksha🤣

woh dining table sukk scenes
wahan to mere khud ke hoosh ur gaye the
to su to akhir su he hai...........jo kk ko dekh karke
apna hoosh kho baitha
it was realy nice scene❤️............
thanks god k su ne kk ka naam nahiin lia tha
warna us bechare ko na jane kitne sawaloon ke jawaab dene parte😆
and ye dadi ma le rahi thi apne pote ka side
phir khud poochti hai ki kkoi ladki hai ya nahiin unki zindagi
it was really funny..........and i loved it

ab dekhte hai sukk kab dobara milte hai
jaldi se unhe milana

really lovely part di
do cont soon
love afreen🤗

Originally posted by: RuhaanSimifan

Wow Annie sweetie u also read it..

haila im so happy u love it

thank u so much sweetie for reading it...

and ya had to put all the fav couples in my fanfic..

im really glad u love it also so much...

thanks hun

Love u

-Naz-

Hey guys

here is part 3 of my FF..Tera Saath Hain Kitna Pyaara
hope u guys like this part also..😃

Part 3

The next morning like everyday Renuka along with the other friends Ravi, Raksha, Ajay and Raj are waitin for Sumit at the enterance of the college. As always Renuka is again whining about Su late comings.

Renuka: Yaar ye Su bhi na, God knows kab on time aana shuru karega..

Ravi: Renuka, tum kyon harbaar uska intezaar karte ho, usne kal hi to kaha hain ke tum sirf uski achhi dost ho..tum maan kyon nahi leti…

Raksha: Haan Renuka, Ravi theek kehraha hain..kahin tum uske hamesha aise hi wait na karte rehjawoge aur wo jo waaki mein tujhse pyaar karta hoga tere haath se nikhal jaaye..

Renuka: o come on guys, tum sab jaante ho ke main hi ek ladki hoon jo Su ke doston mein hain, main hi hoon jo sab kuch jaanta hai uske baare mein. Aur main jaanti hoon ke Su bhi mujhse pyaar karta hain lekin usse abbhi patta nahi hain..

Raj: theek hain baba tum wait karo..guys main abhi aata hoon..

Ajay: Kyon tum kahaan jaarahe ho..abhi to aaya hain..

Raj: wo kya hain na ye Renuka ka pacing dekh dekh ke na mujhe pyaas aur bhoog bhi laggaya hain ..toh bas cantine se kuch laane ko jaa raha hoon..tum sab ko kuch chahiye..

Everyone nods no only Ajay wants something

Ajay with a smile: haan yaar mere liye ek sandwich, ek chips, ek apple, ek cooldrink aur ek donut aur ek slice of pizza bhi..aur haan yaar no green apple, mujhe sirf red apples pasand hain..

Raj amazed: my god…kitna khaate ho tum..itna kaafi hain ke aur kuch bhi chahiye..?

Ajay thinking and then with a cute smile

Ajay smiling: Nahi yaar aaj itna hi..waise bhi lunch mein to hum cantine jaayenge na to burger or fries lunch mein hi khaa lunga..tu jaa yaar bahut bhoog lagraha hain..

Raj shaking his head and goes away and all the other friends laughing..

Ajay teases Renuka: Hee Renuka yaar tum bhi kuch khaa lena..patta nahi aaj kis time pe buddy aane wala hain..

In the cantine

Raj walks to the cantine. As it is early not many students are in the cantine. Some girls reading a book, some of them copying each others homework. He sees Simmie sitting in the corner at a table looking at her watch. He slowly walks over to her and from behind closes her eyes with his hands. Simmie smiles and excitedly says

Simmie smiling: Raj..tum aagaye..?

Raj smiles and removes his hands from her eyes. She happily turns and smiles to him and both hug.

Simmie: I missed u so much..

Raj: I missed u to jaanu..

Simmie: I thought u would not come..

Raj: aisa kabhie hosakta hain..tum bhulaye aur main na awoon..

He kisses her forehead and Simmie smiles and blushes..and both sit holding each others hands and gazing at each other..

At the college entrance where Renuka is still waiting for Su and the guys teasing her continues, Suraj arrives. He walks over to his group of dosts and stares at Renuka

Suraj at Renuka: Arre meri jaan.,.main to aagaya ab kyon apne watch pe dekh rahi ho..

Renuka gives him a angry look

Suraj: Arre baap re…itna gussawali look, hain..mirchi to tum ho wo to malung hain..meri jaan main tumhe kabhie itna wait nahi karati..

Renuka: wait.. aur tumhare liyee..wo to kabhie nahi hoga..

Suraj sarcastically smiles: dekhte hain meri jaan..tum kaise meri wait nahi karti..

Renuka angry turns and ignores him..

Suraj and his group whispers something and they go inside the college

Ravi: Renuka mujhe lakta hain ye Suraj waaki mein tumse pyaar karta hain..

Raksha: Haan dekha aate hi wo sirf tumhe hi dekh raha tah..

Ajay: haan aur tumne uss bechare ka dil thod diya..ab to wo ghaa raha hoga..dil ke tukde tukde karke tum muskurate rehgaye..

Renuka turns and wants to say something to Ajay but hears Su arrive on his bike. He parks his bike and walks over to the guys and Renuka quickly walks over to him..before she can say anything Su starts talking..

Su: Renuka..please yaar ab tum roz ki tarha phir mat shuru hojao..Su tum late kyon aaye main tumhara wait karrahi thi and wagayra wagayra..

Re: Su..tum bhi na..

Sumit smiles: By the way tum sab to aagaye..Raj nahi aaya abhi..dikh nahi raha hain..

Ravi smiles: Wo aagaya hain..wo bas cantine gaya hain..

Raksha smiles and cutely slaps ajay on his head

Raksha: Haan aur ye shaitaan usko jo apnni lambi khaane ka list jo dediya hain wo bhi to usse laana parega na..

Sumit smiles and knows the list of Ajay very well. He himself had that list of Ajay many times..

Sumit: Ajay mujhe samach nahi aata tu itna khaa kaise lete ho..

Ajay smiles: arre buddy moo se khaata hoon just like u all..

While the friends are talking a car arrives and Kumkum and Ashu steps out of the car and walk towards the entrance of the college. While walking Kumkum looks back and waves to Ashmit who dropped them off not lookin infront of her and Su behind her takes two steps backward while discussing to Renuka and bumps into Kumkum..he quickly turns and wants to say sorry, but is stunned to see that again he bumped into Kumkum who also quickly looks infront of her to say sorry. Both are stunned and smile to each other..

Su: I'm really sorry..wo main tumhe nahi dekha tha

Kk: no no i'm sorry..mujhe saamne dekh ke chalna chahiye tha..

The friends are watching this sorry ka silsila of SuKk. Re not happy of course wants to butt in but Ashu is before her,

Ashu: O my god, yaar tum dono na kal se hi ye bumping ka silsila karrahe ho, Kk mujhe lakti hain ke humko apni introduction dedena chahiye..future mein bumping ho to tumdono ke liyee asaan hoga sorry kehne mein..

Everyone starts laughing except Re. Su and Kk look at each other..Feeling little awkward and Kk smiles shyly.

Ashu: To chalo main hi shuru karti hoon. Guys main hoon Ashwariya, Rai nahi but Singh. Ashwariya Singh, but doston ke liyee main hoon Ashu, so its Ashu. Main Kk ki best best friend hoon aur uski sister. Maan lo ke main uski bodyguard hoon..aur koi meri Kk se panga nahi leena warna mujhse bura koi nahi hoga.

Kk embarrased: Ashu..tu bhi na..ab bas karo apni dadagiri meri ma..

Ashu: ok ok tum kehti hoon to isiliye

All Su friends smiles and say in chorus: Hi Ashu..

And they introduce themselves. In the meantime Raj also comes back from the cantine with Ajay's food

Su to Kk: Hi, main hoon Sumit, Sumit Raichand

Kk: Hi main hoon Kumkum aur sorry meri paagal friend ki baaton ke liyee, uski to aadat hain dadagiri karne ko..

Ashu smiles to Kk

All friends of Su also say hi to Kumkum. Ashu and Kumkum both stare at Ajay who take all the food from Raj. Ajay notices and smiles

Ajay: arre baba aise kyon dekh rahi ho tumdono..achha wait pehle intro to kardoon apni..

He puts his food and walks over to Ashu and Kk..

Ajay: Main hoon Ajay..Ajay Khanna…aur I love food…

Ashu: wo to hum dekh rahe hain..

All friends and Kumkum smiles.

Renuka comes also to say hello to Kk..

Re: Aur main hoon Renuka Mehta, Kumkum tumne apni last name nahi batayi..?

Kk's smile vanishes and she gets a sad look on her face. Ashu butts in when she notices the negative and not so friendly vibe of Re…

Ashu: Last name mein kya rakha hain, last name se to nahi pukaro ghe na..par tum jaanna chahte ho to her last name is also Singh ok.

Kk looking confused at Ashu when she says that Kk last name is also Singh.

Ashu: Kk chalo aaj ke liyee itna introduction kaafi hain..

Ashu says friendly bye to Su and his friends and not so friendly look at Re, while Kk sadly smiles to Su and both walks away to find their classroom. Su looking at Kk and wondering why she got sad.

Re: o my god itni attitude..maine to sirf last name hi poocha na…jaise maine uski khandaan ke baare mein pooch li thi.

Su gets annoyed by Re behaviour..

Su: Re tum bhi na kuch bhi kehti rehti ho, tumhe dhiyaan rakhna chahiye kis se kya sawaal karti ho…

And Su walks away irritated also inside the college followed by his other friends..

Renuka all suprised: Arre wah, isse kya hogaya, aisa maine kya kehdiya..aur itni pareshani ek ajnabi ke liye..? Mera to hamesha log mazaak urate rehte hain par Su ko to kabhie bura nahi lakta ulta wo bhi unka saath deta hain..to aaj ye Kk ke liyee itni pareshani kyon..?

And she also walk inside the college with the questions in her mind.

While walking to their classroom Ashu is talking to Kk about what just happened

Ashu: Kk main kehti hoon tum uss Renuka jaisi bhala se door hi rehna, mujhe to wo ek churail lakti hain..churail..

Kk sadly: Ashu tu bhi na..aisa kya bura kardi usne, bas meri last name jaanna chahti thi na ab usse kya patta ke main…hee par ye batao tune usse kyon kaha ke mera last name bhi Singh hain..?

Ashu: Dekh yaar uss waqt jo meri dhimaag mein aayi wo maine kehdiya aur tu jaanti hain na koi bhi tujhe sad kardeti hain to mujhse bardaash nahi hoti aur wo ladki to mujhe trouble lakti hain…tum bas usse baat mat karna..aur tumhari last name jaan ke wo kya karegi…waise bhi hamari last year hain na…to usse dosti kyon karen hum..kyon batayen hum unko wo baaten..wo bhi aisi ajeeb ladki se..

Kk: Ok meri ma..main nahi karungi khush..? ab to smile karde, jaise tujhe meri sad face pasand nahi hain waise mujhe teri ye gussa wali face pasand nahi hain…jaanti ho tum gusse se dekhti ho to main darr jaati hoon. Kitni bayanak dikhti ho tum..

Ashu smiling knows that Kk is teasing her: teekh hain teekh hai..lo main smile karti hoon aur meri bayanak face tere liye nahi hain wo to uss Renuka ke liyee hain..

Both laugh and hug each other

Ashu smiles and says: Par haan wo ladka mujhe achha lakta hain..Sumit..kaise tujhe dekh raha tha..apni cute aankhon se, tune uski smile dekhi kitna sweet hain na..tum usse zaroor baat karna..

Kk shyly smiles: Tum bhi na…chalo… ab class ke liyee dheer nahi horahi..?

Ashu smiling and teasing Kk: hee par batao na wo ladka he is cute right..tune uss ki look notice to ki hogi…wo magical look to koi bhi notice karsakti..hai aise dekh raha tah jaise tumne koi jadoo kardi ho us pe..

Kk: Ashu tu bhi na..aggar tu..

Ashu: arre yaar..ab uski ghalti to nahi hain na ke wo aisa tujhe dekh raha tah..ab tum ho hi itni khoobsurat to wo bechara karega kya..

Kk: uffo phirse shuru kardi tune…maine koi look wook notice nahi ki ok..aur tujhe itna pasand hain wo to tuhi notice karo na uski looks

Ashu: jhoot mat bolo..jaise maine uske look notice ki thi waise hi maine tera sharmana bhi notice ki thi..hai kya sharmaayi thi tune..sharmaayi thi right..

Kk: Ashu tu ek aur word kahoge na tum meri haath ki pithai khaane paregi tujhe..

Ashu: achha theek hai baba..kuch nahi kahungi..par sach mein usme kuch to baat hain..

Kk laughing and grabs Ashu on her arm: chaloooo baba.. ab bas bhi karo..

And both leave in search for their classroom laughing and smiling..

To be Continued