ff: mohabbat ( juhi sangeet preperation on pg60)

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Afreen

@-Afeelicious-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

hey,
tsaian
really very nice, cute, sweet, starting
i really liked it
It look simple but a very cute starting
totally loved it
i simply love this sentence " isho dekhnay kay bd to yehi lagta hai k koobsurti ishsay shru hoker ish per hi khatam hai"..................
and i agree with u, kumkum ke jaise pyari, charming, beautiful, cute ladki kkoi nahiin hoge duniya mein.

really loved ur ff
i would really love to read further
please write the next part soon
will wait........................

love,
sukk

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ambreen

@-Amby-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

fisrtly thansk for the pm

lovely start

so kk is a sweet girl form a rich fmaily

and su from middle class

hmm

great

continue soon

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maheen hanif

@maheen55

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

very good start i am waiting for next part

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Annie

@Annie4Juhi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

Oh My God

Aimen di app ne likha

Woowwwwwwwwwwww

Thst Amazing

i loved it

Hats off too u

Luv u

Annie

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norzar

@norzar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#15

hi

thanks for thsi

loved the title

interesting intro

waiting to read what happens next

keep it up

norzar

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muskan mittal

@muskan087

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Posted: 16 years ago

#16

wohhhhhhhhhhhh aimen its gr8 dear 👍🏼👍🏼

intro is very good ..now waiting for next😛

keep it dear👏

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Aimen

@tsaian

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Posted: 16 years ago

#17

thanks alot friends 4 encoraging me

soon i will post the second episod

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Aimen

@tsaian

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Posted: 16 years ago

#18

episod no: 2

then sumit go and join his gang and kk go to sara

sara to kumkum: kahan rah gai thi

kumkum : kahin nahin yahi hoon

sara: kk tum bi na pata nahin kahan ghaib ho jati ho aur ab rokhi kyun chalna hai ajj hamari first assembly hai aur ajj principle haim apni frist speech bi sunahin gay

kumkum. haan sara mujhay yaad ahi waisay ajj tumhain kafi intrest hai principle kay speech mai

sara: mujhay aur intrest nahin bilkul nahin mujhay to sirf assebly hall jana hai aur waisay i meray janay k baad kon speech sunay ga

saray student mujhay hi dekhain gay after all i m the best

kumkum: acha ab rehnay bi di aur chali ab dair nahin horahi.

sara : tum jao mai zara washroom ja ker apna makeup set ker ayoon

kumkum ;ok

now sumit with his gang

gang: kahan rah ghai thay sumit

sumit : kahin nahin yahi pay tha

gang: acha yeh bataioo hotty kaisi thi kuch baat hoi

karan: aray kahan yar patya nahin kia samajti hai apnay apko kafi proudy hai . lakin fikar mat ker agar usay maza na chakaya to mera naam bi karan nahin .

gang : haan zaroor

karan: ohay sumit kahan khoya hai . maza chakana hai na us larki ko

sumit: kisko

karan : aray usi proudu larki ko

sumit: haan yar . chalo yar assebly haal chaltay hau

sumit was little bit tensed k kahin inlog kk k liyya koi problem na keray

now sumit with his gand and kk both reached to assembly hall

sumit to karan : tum lg agay barho mai ata hon

karan : ok yar

sumit is trying to search kumkum

karan sees kumkum and he made a plan with his gang

karan go to kumkumand said that its atradition of a collage that a new enterant have to go to stage and sing a song 4 all the students