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Posted: 16 years ago
aimoo will back soon sAf she ia bsy with her exam preperation
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ismk

aimoo will back soon sAf she ia bsy with her exam preperation

thanks for informing and all the best to aimen for her exams hope inshallah she get good marks or grade in her exams
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Posted: 16 years ago
OMG loved the part Aimen...its amazing..
They way u are revealing their dosti slowly its awesome.
love the way SuKk think about their past..
Girl u have really talent tobe a writer...Loved it totally,,
and haila Simmie ka bday..how geniusly u fitted that in the story..
amazing keep writing..
cant wait for the next part...
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Posted: 16 years ago
words are falling short to describe your awesome write-ups
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Posted: 16 years ago

thanks alot yar

and next part will be udated soon

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Posted: 16 years ago
love ur ff
plz cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

aimen waiting 4 another part

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Posted: 16 years ago

hi guys i m sorry 4 late update in my ff

as i was bzy in y paper

so i will update new part by tomarrow

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Posted: 16 years ago
RECAP:-
a sunny day day in acollage all sennior are happy as they are ready to welcome their jonior .
su is a brilliant student of zcollage and a heartrob of every student
a girl enter in collage . her name is kumkum . she is a very friendly and a kind herated girl .
as the time pass su and kk became a good friend . they helped each other . and support each other in every decison
one day kk give sumit him a doll as a friendship ki gift.
su see that and he knows that kk is none other ther his child hood friend
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Posted: 16 years ago

EPISODE # 16

SU is very happy as he know that kk is her childhood friend. and kk is very confused that what will be su reaction. what is thinking about me
su: kk tum ajj bi waisi hi hojaisay bachpan mai thi
kk: pata nahin su kia sooch raha hoga meray baray mai su : ajj mai kitna kuch hoon k meri dost nujhay wapis mil jahay gi kk : mujhay bohot dar lag raha hai kahin su ko bura na laga go su: thank u GOD kk: plz GOD sub sambhal lena
both kk and su go 4 sleep .in next morning su and kk are ready 4 collage
su was infront of mirror in a very happy mood . sumit is thinking: kia ajj mai kumkum to batadoon k mai kooi aur nahin wohi ho jiski dosti ki nishani usnay ajj tak sambhal ker rakhi hai
both su and kk reached collage . su was waiting 4 kk at the collage gate
kk reached collage . she see sumit. actually kk is very confused that how su will react
su got to kumkum
su was about to say hi
but kk close her eyes . and said: su mujhay maloom hai k tumhain mera gift pasand nahin aya hoga
tum yehi sooch rahay hona k yh kaisi larki hai . aur ish nay mujhay kaisa gift dia . kahin yeh larki pagal to nahin . to haan su mai pagal hi hoon . wo gutrya meray sub say pyaray dost ki hai . aur ab tum meray sub say achay dost ho . isi liyay mai nay umhain di hai
su is silently listen all this aur su ko shararat sujti hai . and he decise to teace kk as much as he can
kk open her eyes see su face
kk: hi
su: bye
kk: why
su: q class nahin leni
kk: leni hai
su : to jao aur mujhay bi janay do . hum yahan parhnay atay hai gupshup kernay nahin and he live
kk with her innocent face ok sumit . and su was happy that his is succeding in teacing kk
both kk nd su go to their class respectvily. they both take the class . then the brake start
kk in her class . jasmine and seema aske kumkum chalo yar canteen nahin chalna kia
kumkum; nahin yar aj tabiyat sahi nahin
jasmine: kk koi bahana nahin chalay ga cantten chali rahi ho tum
and she take kk in canteen
su is already in canteen with his gang . kk seee him . su also see him. su ko phir say sharat sujti hai
kk , jamine and seema go and sit with su .
su stand from her sit and he is going from there
kk: kahan jarahay hai app
su : kahin nahin paani penay jaraha ho
kk : ok
then su come back and sith with them
su start to talking with kk and ignore kk .
kk see and think : su ko pakha bura laga hai. kk to bi na kuch bi ddeti hai begair soochay samjhay
two student ( one boy and one girl) was sitting behind ther their table
they both were arguing
a girl says to sorry to a boy : girl said : acha sorry na ghalti hogai maaf kerdo
boy : mera mood nahin hora hai ish waqt koi baat kernay k liyay
girl : sorry
sumit , kumkum and other gang noticed this karan said look to that girl . i m surek mistake girl ki hi hogi
jasmine; wo tum kaisay kaisay keh saktay ho
karan: boy are always best . and girl are use to commite mistake again and again. q sumit mai sahi k raha ho na
sumit: hmm haan
kumkum: zarrori nhain k her waqt larki hi ghalat ho aur na yeh zaroori hia k larkay hamesha sahi ho
aur agar kisi say koi ghaliti ho jati hai to dossray ko usay maaf kerlena chaiyay
jasmine: bilkul sahi
karan : no boy are alwaysz right
jasmine: boys are always wrong girls are best
then whole canteen distribute in two side
one is of girl
and other is of boys
and start to argue that who is the best
them both kk ans su start to sing a song from humtum movie
larki q na janay q larkoon si nahin hoti
finally kk win
then kk go to su and said: sorry
su: kis liyay kk
kk: tum muj say naraz ho na k mainay tumhain aik doll gift mai di
su: tum nay sbah sahi kaha tha
kk: kia
su: k tum pagal ho, tum waqai pagal ho. itni achi gift denay k baad yeh soochti ho k mai tum say naraz ho
su said: mujhay gift bohot pasand aya
kk: to subah say tum ajeeb behaviour q adopt kia hai
su: tumhain tang kernay k liyay😛
kk : sumit tum nay meri jaan nikhal di and she is hitting su with her books
su was about to tell kk abt their childhood frienship . jasmine came there and said chalo kk shopping k liyya chalna hai
su: tum larkiyoon ko shopping k ilwawa kuch ata hai
jasmien: pata nahin . lakin ajj zaroori hai
su: aisa kia zaroori hai
jasmine: kk ki birthday 14 dec ko hai uskay liyay tyari kerni hai
su: oh ok
then kk & su both bye each other and kk leave with jasmine and seema
end
Edited by tsaian - 16 years ago

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