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noorya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#391

Originally posted by: Pearl29
Nice part.....................sweet one................Adi's part was long but Sukk's part was just the best part....................nice sweet moment with each other..................continue soooooooonnnnnnnn..................with a nice long part with Sukk's wedding fixed..................

thanks sweety😛

i know adi's part was long but though for a change..coz im always writting about sukk😳

well sukk shaadi will be fixed very soon then i'll write a loooonngg part about them😉

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Afreen

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Posted: 16 years ago

#392

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! kia likhoonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn..................
kuch samajh mein nahiin a raha hai
u are such an amazingggggggggg writer dear
so this is for u
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

mindblowing........superb..........excellent part dear
totally loved it..............this part is sooooooooo sweet and cute
and su to sach mein bahut hi bada darame baaz hai
didn't i told u noorya to save my poor kk from su's drama
but u didn't😭😭 and u made my poor kk cry.............
but i liked the way he get really worried for kk
how sweet of su to ask forgiveness from kk
i could imagine kneeling down and holding his ears
chooooooooo sweeeeeeeeetttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
thats why i love him soooooooooo much

and woh ru thori dear i mean sukk ke
kiss ke baad phone nahiin kar sakta tha
well better luck for next time.......
that srk conv was really good
and su don't compare ur self with srk
sorry if i will hurt any of u...but i think su is a lotttttttttttttttt better than srk

and ye su and ru ne to us adi ki kitni taang khichi
and woh bechara itna bhola and cute hai ki
sab kuch usne apne monh se bata dia
sahi mein yaar ye su bahut he nautak baaz hai

overall OUTSTANDING part dear
keep it up with ur amazinggggggg work
do cont soon to carry us in sukk dreamworld.......
ab jaldi se next part likhna
love afreen🤗

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noorya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#393

Originally posted by: juhuti
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! kia likhoonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn..................
kuch samajh mein nahiin a raha hai
u are such an amazingggggggggg writer dear
so this is for u
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

mindblowing........superb..........excellent part dear
totally loved it..............this part is sooooooooo sweet and cute
and su to sach mein bahut hi bada darame baaz hai
didn't i told u noorya to save my poor kk from su's drama
but u didn't😭😭 and u made my poor kk cry.............
but i liked the way he get really worried for kk
how sweet of su to ask forgiveness from kk
i could imagine kneeling down and holding his ears
chooooooooo sweeeeeeeeetttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
thats why i love him soooooooooo much

and woh ru thori dear i mean sukk ke
kiss ke baad phone nahiin kar sakta tha
well better luck for next time.......
that srk conv was really good
and su don't compare ur self with srk
sorry if i will hurt any of u...but i think su is a lotttttttttttttttt better than srk

and ye su and ru ne to us adi ki kitni taang khichi
and woh bechara itna bhola and cute hai ki
sab kuch usne apne monh se bata dia
sahi mein yaar ye su bahut he nautak baaz hai

overall OUTSTANDING part dear
keep it up with ur amazinggggggg work
do cont soon to carry us in sukk dreamworld.......
ab jaldi se next part likhna
love afreen🤗

heee sweety u read it😃................aur upar se u like it😛..
THANK U SOOOOOOOOO MUCH for your lovely comment yaara😳..
yaara sorry couldnt save kk from su's dramebaazi....voh kya hai naa su mujhse pehle poonch gaaya tha😆😆...

im glad u liked the srk convo.........and yaar i LOVE srk😆...for HUand SRK are same😉
will try to post next part very soon sweety

Love u🤗

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noorya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#394

Hello guys!!!.....here i am with the next part😛...
okk guys iss part mein bhi adi ka track kuch ziada hi ho gaaya....but i promise next part mein sukk ziada honge...so dont mind hun😳...
and one more thing...i think this part is quite long aur iska credit jaata hai Naz Di ko....kyunki kuch dimaag se hata ne ke liye maine yeh part likha.....so agar yeh lamba hai tho its all because of her😆😉......but sorry guys voh baat kya thi voh keh nahin sakti.....personnel baat nahin hai par yahan keh nahin sakte😳...........Naz Di tumhe tho baat samajh mein aayi hogi naa😆.....anyways here is the part

precap : sukk have a lil fight at cofee shop and su apologize...then they have a sweet moment in a park
adi have a "date" and ru and su want to know who is the girl so they followed adi

Part42

adi is driving his car and su is following him with ru....after some time they reach a restaurant
adi gets out of the car and goes inside...ru was about to do the same but su stops him

su : ek min ru

ru : kyun kya hua?

su : hum aisa andaar nahin jaa sakte....varna adi hume pehchan lega...

ru : haan yeh baat sahi hai.......lekin hum karenge kya?😕

su : yeh!.....he shows something to ru..

ru : yaar tum tho sach mein bohut intelligent ho!

su : thanks......

ru : haan mere baap srk se bhi acha ho!..(su smiles)...lekin tumhe yeh srk ka chakkar mujhe batani hi hogi

su : haan bataounga lekin ab chalo andaar

they go inside and.......................................................................they were wearing nakli mooch😆, cap and glasses....they saw adi....and sit at the table just behind him...su and ru were murmuring to each other so that way adi couldnt hear them (the mooch nakli mooch idea Naz Di gave me..thank u soo much Di)

ru : bhai tho yahan akela hai😕

su : haan lekin ziada der ke liye nahin...dekh kis tarah voh har 5mins apni watch ko dekhta hai...matlab voh sach mein kisi ladki ka hi intezaar kar raha hai

ru : yaar mujhe tho yakeen hi nahin ho raha....bhai has a date yaar!!!😃......par kahin sach mein koi aunty naa ho!😆 (ru and su laugh)

they keep laughing and su sees that adi waves to someone....and when he could see the girl's face he get shocked and lost his smile......ru noticed and asked him whats wrong

ru : su kya hua?..tum itna shock kyun ho?😕 (su without saying anything turns ru's face..and when he saw the girl he had the same reaction)!!!

ru : yeh tho...........................😲😲😲😲

su : JIYA!!!😲😲😲😲

ji : Hi!

adi : hi....kaisi ho?

ji : main bilkul theek hoon...tum kaise ho?

adi : well...im fine😃...........tum itni khush kyun lag rahi ho?...mujhse milne ki khushi hai?

ji smiles : nahin aisi koi baat nahin hai...........i mean tumse milke khush hoon lekin ek aur bhi waje hai

adi : kya main jaan sakta hoon?

ji : haan...lekin tumhe tho pata honi chahiye😕.....su ne tumse kaha hoga naa?

adi : kya?

ji : su ke ghar vaalon ne kk ka haath maang liya😃...aur mom dad ne haan bhi kar li!

adi : really?!!!.........mujhe pata nahin tha

ji : su ne tumhe abhi tak bataaya nahin😕

adi : nahin......voh hum aaj kal mile bhi nahin..lekin voh ghar aaya tha aaj shayad yahin bataane....(ru is shocked to hear that)

ru : bro....tum log rishta maangne gaaye the aur bataaya nahin!!

su : main batana chahta tha lekin mauka hi nahin mila😕.....ab dekho naa aaj mile hain lekin hum jassusi karne mein busy hai...

ru : right...........(back to ji and adi)

ji : pata hai Di ke chehre mein bohut dino baat yeh khushi dekh rahi hoon.....(su smiles)...akhir su aur kk ek ho hi gaaye

adi : yeh tho hona hi tha....kyunki su aur kk ek doosre ke kismat mein the...tho kisi naa kisi tarah voh dono ek ho hi jaate...(and they smile to each other)

ji : vaise adi....tumhe yaad hai tumne mujhse kaha tha ke tumhe kisi se pyaar ho gaaya hai....kya tumne uss se kaha?

adi : nahin abhi tak tho nahin kaha.....(ru and su are shocked to hear that)

ru : bhai ko kisi ke pyaar hai???😲.........iska matlab voh ji nahin hai😕

su : nahin ru..mujhe tho yakeen hai ke voh jiya hi hai....kyunki agar voh koi aur hota tho adi yahan ji ke saath kya kar raha hai?...aur usne abhi tak apne pyaar ka izhar bhi nahin kya...so im sure voh ji hi hai...

ji : kyun? tum usse bata kyun nahin rahe ho?

adi : pata nahin....dar lagta hai ke voh bura naa maane.....voh meri ek bohut achi dost hai tho dar hai ke meri galti ke waje se humari yeh dosti hi khatam naa ho jaaye

ji : agar tum uss se sach mein pyaar karte ho tho u should tell her......aur agar usse tumse pyaar nahin hai tho im sure tum dono ki dosti khatam nahin hogi...kyunki tum bohut ache ho😃..tho agar meri baat sunoge tho...........tum usse batado

adi smiles : bataounga.....bohut jald bataounga...thanks

ji smiles : adi i think hume jaane chahiye...ghar mein kuch taayariyan karni hai kal su ke ghar vaale phir aayenge........btw kal tum bhi aa jao😃

adi : yeah not a bad idea😃......okk main aounga

ji : tho phir chalein?

adi : lets go....(they leave)

su : ru chalo hum bhi chalte hain......varna adi humse pehle ghar poonch jaayega

ru : haan chalo (they also leave)

ru was talking with su while walking and wasnt looking in front of him.............and he bumped into adi😆 he gets scared)

ru : sorry bhai😕

adi confused : bhai?....aap mujhe....?

su : sorry bhaiJi!...voh yeh mera chota bhai hai...blind hai😆!!!

ru looks at su : kya?😕

su : haan!!

ru : haan!...he's right...im blind mujhe kuch dikhayi nahin deta😆😆

adi : nahin its okk..............(then he think for a while)....lekin apko pata kaise chala ke main ladka hoon?

ru : voh.......voh.....

su : arre bhaiji...yeh bachpaan se blind hai tho chuh kar isse pata chalta ke kaun ladka hai aur kaun ladki

ru : exactly!......aur maine yeh bhi feel kiya ke app apne body ka bohut khial rakhte hain

su : ziada feel mat karo😆🤣

adi : anyways.....hum chalte hain....take care (he turns to go but saw something fishy😕 so turns back and looked at ru again)

adi : excuze me

su : ji?

adi : voh...aap ke bhai ke mooch.....voh...(su looks at ru and is shocked)

su : apni mooch hold karo! girne vali hai!!!😆😆(adi looks at them quite confused)....voh...isse mooch bohut pasand hai...tho nakli lagata hai😆!!! (adi smiles and just leave)

ru : yaar hum pakde gaaye!..im sure bhai mujhe pehchan liya😕

su : shut up! aisa kuch nahin hua......chalo hum jaldi chalte hai varna usse chak ho jaayega

su and ru leave from there and of course reach the house before adi. adi saw them and smiles

adi : are tum dono yahan ho?

ru : haan kyun? tumne hume kahin dekha? (su hits him)

su : iska matlab hai.....hume kahin hona chahiye tha?

adi : nahin bas aise hi pooch raha tha.......(he sits with them)..vaise su.....tumhe kuch kehna nahin hai?

su : kya?😕

adi : kuch bohut hi important....shayad bhool gaaye batana....(su understands)

su : haan..........kal mera aur kk ka rishra pakka ho jaayega😃...............lekin tumhe kaise pata?😈

adi : voh.......main........

ru : ji ne bataaya?😃

adi surprised : tumhe kaise pata?

ru : nahin voh....tum dono ache "dost" ho naa....tho "dost" hone ke naate ek "dost" apne "dost" se yeh baatein share karega

adi : haan............(he looks down and saw something stuck on ru shoes)...yeh tumhare joothon mein kya hai?😕 (ru looks at it took it and both ru and su got shocked)

ru : yeh........voh...

adi : yeh nakli mooch hai naa?

ru : haan voh........main aur su ek game khel rahe the:s...bollywood actors ki nakle karna...(he was soo scared that he wear it....adi looks at him and was thinking..su understood what he was thinking about)

su : utharo isse!! (ru does so)

adi : nahin ru wapis pehen no ek baar.....(ru does it....adi keep thinking for a while).....yeh chehra.......kisi ki yaad dila rahi hai....😕

su : haan.....voh...Anil Kapoor ki🤣🤣🤣

adi : nahin...ek min...(and he remembered the restaurant accident and got shocked)😲😲😲..........TUM!!!!!!! (he stand up..so do ru and su)

ru : nahin voh main nahin tha bhai

adi : voh tum hi the....voh blind man!.....(and looks at su) aur tum uska bhai!

su : nahin...yeh tho tumhara bhai hai😆....

adi : tum dono vahan kya kar rahe the?!

ru : tumhari jassusi😆 (su looks at him agrilly)

adi : kya?...kyun?

su : voh adi.....(adi looks at him)....i think i should go😆

adi : jab tak tum dono nahin bata the ke meri jassusi kyun kar rahe the koi kahin nahin jaayega! (then he looks at ru coz he never lies )

ru : bhai voh hum dekhna chahte the ke tumhari date kiske saath thi aur issi liye su ne tumhara picha kya....

adi looks at su : su.....is that true? (su looks at ru then at adi and then..............Marjaani marjaani
Marjaani marjaani
Oye khasma nu khaaye marjaani....his phone rings and he gets happy)

su : phone!...mera phone hai (he answered and then) maa ka phone tha....mujhe ghar jaana hoga😃

adi : theek hai jao....lekin baat yahan khatam nahin hoti (su leaves........adi looks at ru who smiles cutely......and then runs 😆adi runs after him)
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Its evening su is in his room and as usual called kk......kk anwered but her voice was sad

kk : hello😒

su : hi

kk : hi sumit😒

su : kya hua kk itni udass kyun ho?

kk : nahin kuch nahin bas aise hi

su : mujhe bhi nahin bataogi?

kk : nahin voh...main idols dekh rahi tho aur mera fav contestant Rajdeep out ho gaaya😒😭

su : ohh im really sorry kk......are u okk?

kk : nahin.......pata hai voh sab se acha gaata tha..................mujhe tho lagta hai zidagi mein aage jaane ke liye hume ek bura insaan hona chahiye galat kam karna chahiye tab hi hum zindagi mein kuch kar sakte hain kyunki acha insaan jo bohut mehnat karta hai voh kabhi kuch kar nahin sakta!😡

su : kk yeh tum keh rahi ho?.......kk tum khud humesha khud se pehle doosron ke bare mein sochti ho...apne problems bhool kar tum doosron ki madat karti ho.....jab koi pareshani mein hai tho tum uski pareshani khud ki samajh kar usse door karti ho.....tho tum yeh kaise keh sakti ho?.......kk bura insaan galat kam karke kita bhi kamiyabi kyun naa paaye lekin akhir mein voh ekela hota hai...aur tum jaise insaan zindagi ke safar mein bohut saare mushkilon ka samne karte hain imteha dete hain lekin akhir mein voh sirf khushiyan hi paata hai...kamiyabi paata hai aur in lamhon mein voh kabhi akela nahin hote......

kk after a pause : thanks...

su : kis liye?

kk : mujhe samjhane ke liye...😳

su smiles : humesha tum mujhe samjhati ho tho iss baar maine bhi vahin kya:d.....anyways yeh batao kya kiya aaj?

kk : kuch nahin maa papa ghar pe nahin the aur ji bhi bahar gayi thi tho maine.................

su : tumne kya?😃

kk : maine srk ki movie dekh li😃

su : haan.....iske elawa tum kar bhi kya sakti ho😔

kk : su ab naraaz mat ho...main bore ho rahi thi!...(just then someone knock at the door)...su ek min koi hai (to the person) kaun hai? (it was her parents)

Raj : beta hum hai

kk : papa aaye naa (they enter and sit on her bed she put her mobile on her bed also)...kya hua? aap dono iss waqt?

raj : beta hum tumse kuch baat karna chahte hain

kk : kahiye naa papa

raj : beta tum tho jaanti ho ke Whadwa pariwaar yahan kyun aaye the......tumhara haath maangne (kk loks down with a cute smile)....aur humne haan bhi karli kyunki hume lagta hai ke iss rishte se tum bohut khush rahogi

madhu : haan beta Whadwa pariwaar bohut hi ache log hai....aur su bhi bohut acha ladka hai

raj : lekin beta....agar tumhe yeh rishta manzoor nahin hai ya phir tumhare dil mein kisi aur hai tho hume batao....hum tumhare saath hai:d

kk : nahin papa...aisi koi baat nahin hai......main janti hoon aap dono jo bhi faisla loge meri ache ke liye hi hai....

ma gets happy : matlab tumhe yeh rishta manzoor hai? (kk smiles and loosk down😳)

raj smiles : dekha madhu maine kaha tha ke kk maanegi...akhir meri beti hai

ma : haan haan apki hai...ab chaliye isse araam karne dijiye (they stand to go but kk stops them)

kk : maa papa (they turn back)

ma : kya hua beta?

kk : maa mujhe aap dono se kuch kehna hai....

raj : haan bolo...

kk : papa voh..........aap ne poocha naa ke mere dil mein koi hai?

raj : haan😕

kk : maine apko sach nahin kaha...mere dil mein koi hai (they get shocked)

ma : kk.......beta kaun hai voh?

kk : maa voh...........voh...su...sumit (they get confused)

raj : matlab?

kk : papa.....kuch dino se main aur su...ek doosre ko ache lagne lage hai...aur yeh shaadi ki baat su ne ki hai apne ghar vaalon se (raj smiles looking at kk then kissed her forehead...su was listening all this quite tensed)

raj : beta yeh baat hume bata kar tumne sabite kiya ke humne tumhe achi parwarish di hai (su smiles)

ma : aur rahi baat su ki....tho tumhari shaadi ussi ki saath ho rahi hai...tho hum tum dono ke liye bohut khush hai (kk huged her mom and dad and they leave. kk took her mobile)

kk : hello

su : i love u

kk smiles : yeh kis khushi mein?

su : maine sab sun liya......kk apne parents ko sach bata kar mere dil mein tumhare liye izaat aur bhi bhar gaayi

kk smiles : apne maa baap se kaise yeh baat chupa sakti thi main...

su : pata hai jab tum aisi baatein karti ho tho mujhe tum par aur bhi pyaar aata hai...

kk : aisi baatein ka kya matlab?....main roz bevakoofi baatein karti hoon?

su : arre meri itni himaat main aisi baat kahun...

kk : aur karna bhi mat..varna chorungi nahin tumhe

su : tho chorne ko kaun kehta hai.....mujhe tho tumhara saath humesha ke liye chahiye😉

kk smiles : main phone rakhti hoon hul kal milte hain

su : good night

kk : good night

su : ek min kk

kk : kya hua?

su : tum kuch kehna bhool gaayi

kk : kya?😕

vahin....jo maine kaha

kk smiles : good night su (and she disconects)

su smiles and to himself : i love you

kk smiles : i love you too sumit😳 (and she goes to sleep)

Hope u guys enjoyed it😛........and once again sorry if adi's track ziada hai but pakka next part will be more about sukk😉

Edited by mdtafan - 16 years ago

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soundsofcedar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#395

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG BOHUT ACHA PART THA yaara👏👏👏...I mean I loved everything about it...from nakli mooch to phone convo...You are an amazing comic writer jaan...I mean itne ache ache jokes...main toh haas haas kay mar gayi...I loved the CIA roop of Su and Ru...hehe🤣🤣🤣...And the blind bhai hehe...OMG Ru is so CUTE and clueless...Sumit toh badha intelligent nikla yaara...GOOD IDEA Naz Di...Nakli Mooch I imagined Sumit in his Salim get up hehe😆😆😆...OMG feel kar ke paatha chal jata hai kay man hai yaan woman hehe...Bohut zayaada bhi na feel karo...you are TOO FUNNY🤣🤣🤣...then Ru looks like Anil Kapoor...Awww Adi ko paatha chal hi gaaya...OMG Sumit has my FAVORITE RINGTONE...Mar jaani😃😃😃...Also Jaanu the phone convo was sweet as always...Awww she is sad about her Indian Idol...So sweet of Sumit to comfort her...Ohhh Kumkum is SUCH A GOOD PERSON...she told the truth to her parents...Sumit you picked an AMAZING girl yaara...Noorya please keep on adding comedy because you always uplift my mood with your funny scenes yaara...I loved Adi, Su and Ru scenes...Can't wait to see what happens when Wadwa's go to Kumkum's home...Update SOON...Thanks for updating with such a CUTE and FUNNY part🤗

Luv Alwayz Sahar😳

Edited by KumkumisGR8 - 16 years ago

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Nazmien aka Naz

@NazNgs

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Posted: 16 years ago

#396

😆😆 Noorya meri Jaan...

waaki mein tujhe wo baat apne dhimaag se hatane ke liyee

bahut zyada likhna para

chalo kuch to faida huwa meri *uss* baat ka..🤣

aur mujhe achhi tarha se patta hain kaunsi baat 😛

par tum to jaanti hoon na..ab main bhi kya karti wo din hi aisa tah..

aur mere dhimaag ko kaun rokta..main khud nahi control karpa rahi thi 😆

achha chalo main comment likhti hoon warna mera dhimaag phirse shuru hojaayegi😆

par first i want to say sorry yaar..

sorry for commenting so late and reading so late

par reason tum to jaanti ho na

wo JuSach ki shaadi ke excitement se meri Dhimaag kuch karne ko tayar hi nahi tah

meri dhimaag to sab kuch jhor ke Jaipur mein tah aur

Juhi aur Sachin ki shaadi imagine karne mein lagi huwi thi

ab shaadi hogayi, maine pic aur vids dekh li tab jaa ke chain mila mujhe

aur dhimaag phirse kaam karna shuru kiya..

to lo maine FF read ki aur comment bhi kardi..😆

First OMG OMG OMG

yaar kya comedy hain.i really love the RuSu jodi

ufff ek ek lafz jo tune Ru ke liyee likha na wo mujhe

Gaurav ki awaaz mein sunai deti hain

uff and Su dialogues also

amazing yaar

and awww used the mooch wala part

ur most welcome for the idea sweetie..

and omg itna mazaaa aayi na Ru Su aur Adi in restaurant

main to has has ke na roo bhi diya..

i coulld imagine all how Ru Su with mooch and the nakli get up

how they were whispering behind Adi and then Jia comes

and their shocked looks....😆 amazing yaar

and the talk btw adi ji ru su shifting was also superb

and omg omg omg omg

🤣

when they leave and ru bump into adi

and su says its his bro and he is blind

🤣

omg i laughed soooo hard na...im sure meri neighbours sun liya honge

god that is sooooo funny yaar

🤣🤣 bahut zyada feel mat karo i almost fall from my couch

and then his mooch almost falling 🤣

uff me also rollin on the floor like this emoticon yaar...

and when Adi comes ru su are before him at home

uff love the comedy totally

enjoyed each dailogue u wrote for Ru coz i could hear Gauravs voice in my head

ufff bahut mazaaa aaya

OMG they way Adi caught them

🤣

yaar haste haste mujhe pyaas lagayi thi..god ur sooo funny

aisa scene to maine kahin kisssi serial mein bhi nahi dekhi yaar

sachi ur comedy is MINDBLOWING....

Su ki phone yaar omg marjaani marjaani awesome ringtone

love that song sooo much

iska matlab jo ringtone Ru ne lagaya tah Su ke liyee Su ne change kardiya..?

yaar awesome tune hamari sadness FF mein likh diya

wo rajdeep ko idol se eliminate hona mujhe bhi bahut dukh huwi thi

to Kk ko bhi huwi soo cute...

yaaar jo Kk ki dialogue thi naa..

wo to aaj kal mere dhimaag mein bhi chalrahi thi apni zindagi ki pareshaniyan dekh kar

par yaar jab maine Su ki dialogue read ki na

wow u said that so correctly yaar..every word u wrote in that dialogue is so true

mujhe pe kaafi assar ki tera ye dialogue..

thanks for that...

yaar and the kk with her parents convo was also very emotional

and soooo good and well written

overall this part was also fantastic

there was comedy, emotion and pyaar

uff just perfect..aur kya kahoon main..

plz don't stop with the comedy and the pyaar..

anyways...waitin for next part

Love u

-Naz-

Edited by RuhaanSimifan - 16 years ago

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nitya

@preethi

Sparkler

Posted: 16 years ago

#397

very well written noorya
liked su ra part kk ka bhi
waiting fr next part thoda zaaldi

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Priya

@Pearl29

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#398

Love the comedy between RuAd & Su..............kya CID detectives bana tha...............loved the cute fight between them..............

Sukk parts r always sooooooooo good..........& most importantly like Su i too loved the way KK told her parents the truth about her & Su..............this was the best part..............ab jaldi Sukk ki shaddi karva do .......................can't wait 2 attend their wedding.................

Also waiting 4 Su 2 teach a good lesson 2 Arjun(hopefully the name is right)................usne kk ko itn tang kiya hai.................i want 2 c him in avery very bad state.............