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shafia Akhtar

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Posted: 16 years ago

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wowow it amezing part kind of sad to i feel soory for sumit

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Afreen

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Posted: 16 years ago

#202

hi noorya

my name is afreen

and i have just start reading ur ff....i really liked it...its really interesting and nice...i hope i will catch up with the part 30 soon...

lovee afreen

Edited by juhuti - 16 years ago

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noorya

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: Shafoo
wowow it amezing part kind of sad to i feel soory for sumit

thank u sooooo much yaara😳

haan i know poor su but dont worry dheere dheere everything gonna be okk😉

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noorya

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: juhuti

hi noorya

my name is afreen

and i have just start reading ur ff....i really liked it...its really interesting and nice...i hope i will catch up with the part 30 soon...

lovee afreen

Hey afreen....thank u sooo much for reading my ff😛....that means a lot to me😳

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noorya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#205

Hi friends!!😛.................jaise ke maine kaha that i'll post the part very soon so................here it is😉

Part 31

Next day everyone decide to go out but su wasnt in mood so he was in his room...so ru goes to call him. He knocks the door and enters

ru : hey bro😛........chalo hum sab jaa rahe hai

su : nahin ru...tum log jao mera mood nahin hai🤢

ru : su hum yahan ghoomne aaye hai tho mood kaise nahin hoga...(by then adi comes)

su : ru plz.........mera sach mein maan nahin karta

adi : kis cheez le liye tumhara maan nahin hai?

ru : bhai dheko naa su humare saath aana nahin chahta😕

adi : su chalo..

su : adi main...............

adi : su...yahan apne kamre mein akela rehne se tumhari problem theek nahin ho jaayegi (su is surprised)...pr ne hume sab bataaya................dheko agar bahar jaaoge tho iske bare mein ziada sochoge nahin (su finaly agrees and they leave)

Girls are talking between them and guys between them

adi : su plz itna tension mat lo tum

su : tho kya karun adi?....................ghar wapis jaate hi meri shaadi ki baat ho jaayegi😒........aur main unse yeh bhi nahin keh sakta ke main kk se pyaar karta hoon

ru : of course keh sakte ho...aur tum zaroor kahoge...........aur bakhi sab hum hai naa...hum kk ko ehsaas diladenge ke voh tumse pyaar karti hai😳

adi : haan su...........aur ab humara saath koi aur bhi de raha hai (su gets confused and adi points toward jiya then su gets surprised)

su : jiya?😕😲

adi : haan......usse sab kuch pata hai aur voh humare saath hai😳

After some time they go back to the hotel...the receptionist call them

recep : excuz me

ru : yes?

recep : actually aaj shaam ko hotel mein party hai....so u all are invited😊

ru : wow thats great😛...........vaise party kis baat ke liye hai?

recep : ek couple ki shaadi hone vali hai

ru : hone vali hai hui tho nahin...........meri bhi shaadi hone vali hai lekin maine koi party nahin rakha hai😆

recep smiles : haan magar usne apni girlfriend ko aaj hi propose kya.....tho aap log zarror aayega shaam ko 7 baje😊

adi : sure sure😊 (to ru) chalo idiot! yeh kya bhakvaas bolte jaa rahe ho

They all go to get ready. After some time boys were ready and were wating for girls........ru was very impatient so he knocks the door

ru to girls : ho gaaya?!!

pr : haan bas ek min

ru : peechle ada gante se yahin keh rahi ho!....ab agar ek min mein bahar nahin aaye tho main recep se darvaaza khulvaounga!😆 (finaly girls come out and boys were amazed by their beauty...)
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At the party everyone were enjoying excep su of course😔......the DJ asks everyone to get on the floor and puts a slow song......a man came to su

man : are aap bhi dance kijiye

su : no thanks im okk

man : plz.....yeh parrty maine rakha hai tho mere liye...😳

Finaly su agrees and ask kk for a dance....she agrees😛......the song "mere haath mein tera haath ho" was playing..su was lost in his world😳....the song ends but sukk were lost into each other's eyes...but soon kk comes back to her sense and leave su....su gets annoyed so goes and get a drink......adi and ru noticed that su is drinking so they decide to stop him

adi : bas kar su yeh kya kar rahe ho!

su : dhika nahin deta kya? pi raha hoon (to waiter) one more

ru to the waiter : no no more (to su) bro agar kk tumhe iss halat mein dhek liya tho?😔

su : tho kya?..hun?...tho kya??............usse koi fark nahin padega........kyunki voh..........voh mujhse pyaar nahin karti😭

adi : su tum......

su : adi plzzz................main bahar jaa raha hoon todi der ke liye

adi : haan tho main bhi tere saath aa raha hoon

su : nahin adi mujhe......mujhe akela rehna hai plz..........(and he leaves. kk sees it and asks adi where su is going)

kk : kaha gaaya su?

adi : voh todi der ke liye bahar gaaya

kk : aur tum log uske saath kyun nahin gaaye?

ru : voh akela rehna chahta tha...

kk : ru voh bohut pareshan hai aur...................main jaa rahi hoon uske pass (and she follows su. ru wants to stop her but adi holds him)

adi : ru jaane do usse....

ru : bhai agar usne su ko aisa dhek liya tho.....

adi : main janta hoon main lya kar raha hoon
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KK is looking for su and finaly find hm in a park behind the hotel. No one was there excep them

kk : sumit.....

su turns : kk.....tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?...wapis chali jao

kk : kyun? mera saath pasand nahin hai tumhe?

su : aaj kal mujhe kisi ka saath pasand nahin hai tho.....plz mujhe akele chod do😭 (kknoticed that su was drunk)

kk : su tumne...........😳

su : sharab pi hai................haan piya hai...tho tumhe kya?.............main sharab piyun, jiyun ya phir marun..........tumhe kya!🤢

kk shocked by su's words : su yeh tum kya keh rahe ho....................kal se hi tum mere saath aise behave kyun kar rahe ho? kisi baat ko lekar bohut pareshan ho tum.....mujhse koi galti hui hai kya?....plz batao mujhe...😒

su holds her arms very tightly : jaan na chahti ho...tho suno!.............ghar mein meri shaadi ki baat chal rahi hai!!! (kk is shocked to hear that)...dad ne mere liye ek ladki chose kiya hai..............ab tum batao....tumse pyaar karte hue main uss ladki se kaise shaadi kar sakta hoon........................kk main kab tumhe pasand karne laga hoon kab chahne laga hoon main nahin janta...aur kab yeh chahat tumhare liye ek gehri mohobaat mein badal gaayi..pata hi nahin chala (kk without saying anything looks down).....................main mar jaaounga lekin uss ladki se shaadi nahin karunga..agar karunga tho sirf tumse ya phir kisi se nahin..................................ab batao kar sakti ho meri madat?.....nahin naa....kyunki tum mujhse pyaar nahin k karti.......(then he asks once again) nahin karti mujhse pyaar? (kk looks at him but doesnt say a word....so su holds her more tightly)...agar main tumhe iss tarah chuhta hoon tumhe kuch mehsoos nahin hota? (then he comes very close to her and says softly)...agar tumhare itne kareeb aata hoon tho kuch nahin hota? (then he wants to kiss her)....agar main tumhe....(kk controls herself and stops su)

kk : su plzz...(su comes back to his sense and leave her)

su : im sorry.............kk plz mujhe akela chod do...(he turns his back to kk..she comes near him and puts her hand on his shoulder...su turns and tears were rolling down his cheeks😭..unable to control himself he hugs her and cried his heart out😭😭...after few secs kk feels that su was hot)

kk tensed : sumit...😲 (su leaves her)..su tumhe bukhaar hai!!

su : nahin kk main.......main theek hoon

kk : su plzz mujhse jooth mat bol...chalo mere saath (she tool su to his room)

su : ab tum jao apne kamre mein

kk : main tumhe iss haal mein akele nahin chodungi

su : kk...........

kk : su....main janti hoon iss waqt tum akela rehna chahte ho lekin tumhari tabyat theek nahin hai..tho plz su..(he agrees)

su lies on his bed and kk takes care of him. Soon su falls asleep and kk thinks about what happened in the park

kk thinks : tumhari yeh halat meri wajeh se hui hai...mujhe maaf kardo (tears roll down her cheeks....then she heared a voice)

voice : ro kyun rahi ho? (kk looks up and see herself)...su ko aisa dhek kar tumhe takleef ho rahi hai hai naa?

kk : haan main use iss tarah nahin dhek sakti kyunki uski yeh haal meri waje se hai😔

voice : tho phir usse itna dhukh kyun deti ho?.......................yeh baat main bhi janti hoon aur tum bhi janti ho ke tum su se pyaar karti ho aur usse khush rakh sakti ho....lekin darti ho iss baat ko maan ne se...

kk : nahin....main su se pyaar nahin karti....

voice : mujhse jooth bol ne ki koshish kar rahi ho?.....infact tum apne aap se jooth bolne ki koshish kar rahi ho....................lekin apne dil se kaise jooth bol sakti?.......bata do usse............bata do ke tum usse pyaar karti ho varna kahin der naa ho jaaye aur tum apna sacha pyaar kho na do...(by saying this she desapears)

kk starts crying and after a long time falls asleep...

sorry guys i know u wanted ke iss part mein sukk ka milan ho jaaye jo nahin hua..............but kya karein time to lagega naa itni jaldi kaise ho sakta hai😳.........but u guys dont worry woh pal ab bohut door nahin hai😉...tho uss pal ki aane waqt tak enjoy this pal......i mean part😆

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Simran

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Posted: 16 years ago

#206

OMG di.... wow!!!!🤗
I totally loved the scene between Su And Kk in the park....
The atmosphere and the way you wrote in sooo much detail it was like i was standing in the park watching it all happen......Awwww bechara Su... drunk and ill.....
Awwww kk bless her..... apne dil ki baat se aajan hai....
Can't wait for sukk ka milan......Milan Abhi Aadha Adhura Hai......

Edited by .x. Simran .x. - 16 years ago

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noorya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: .x. Simran .x.
OMG di.... wow!!!!🤗
I totally loved the scene between Su And Kk in the park....
The atmosphere and the way you wrote in sooo much detail it was like i was standing in the park watching it all happen......Awwww bechara Su... drunk and ill.....
Awwww kk bless her..... apne dil ki baat se aajan hai....
Can't wait for sukk ka milan......Milan Abhi Aadha Adhura Hai......

awwwwwwwwww thank u soooo much sis!!!!
i know milan adhura hai......but dont worry yaara not for a long time😉

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Afreen

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Posted: 16 years ago

#208

OMG!!!!!!!!
MINDBLOWING part
totally amazing
kk aur kitna time loge su ko I LOVE U bolne ke liye
jaldi se bol do

great part
do cont soon.

love afreen

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soundsofcedar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#209

Wow I am on the edge of my seat you are amazing....loved it Keep writing

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Nazmien aka Naz

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Posted: 16 years ago

#210

OMG....WOW..Noorya meri jaan ufffffff wah wah kya part hain yaar

👏

Ufff loved it totally from beginning till ending the part is MINDBLOWING

ur fanfic is so close to reality yaar...ufff kahin tu scriptwriter to nahin hain?😳..

Nahin hain to banjaawo ghi yaar..omg i'm totally amazed...really

im not kidding u can be a very succesful writer...ur so talented yaar😊

the dialogues are soooo perfect..

when reading i can hear Su and Kk saying those lines..in my mind ofcourse

totally wicked yaar...i'm speechless

and the scenes, the dailogues and the narration of the story wow just perfect

really loved how the boys are waitin for the girls while there gettin ready 😆

so much like it happens in reality..awesome dialogues there..🤣

and omg the part at the party where Su dancing and when Kk leaves

he like a true aashiq gettin angry and feeling helpless and going for the drinks..omg so real..

the dialogues there btw Su and his friends..ufff FANTASTIC...

like i was seeing a actual clip..

And when Su goes in the park and Kk follows him...

OMG the dialogues there yaara uffff so PASSIONATE and EMOTIONAL

omg yaara Su ki baaton se mujhe kuch kuch hone laga to Kk ko kaise nahi hua🤣

But seriously loved the dialogue there..i could see it all in my mind..

how Su would be holding Kk and saying those lines gettin all emotional and passionate..

aggar main tumhe chuhta hoon tumhe kuch nahi mehsoos hota

aggar main tumhare kareeb aata hoon tumhe kuch nahi hota,

Ufff MINDBLOWING dialogue yaar..

uffff could really feel the pain that Su is going throughand also Kk ki uldjan...

And then later when they r in the room and Kk sees herself talkin to her..

Kya baat hain..is like im watching a part of a movie..AMAZING

and then Kk all confused not knowing what to do ..cries and falls asleep

Uffff too good...

👏

Ur story has every ingredient..yaara.. its PASSIONATE, ROMANTIC, DRAMATIC, SAD, HAPPY..

Ufff and soooo much suspense....ur a terrific writer yaara

can't wait to read what will happen when they both wake up the next day..

will Kumkum finally find out about her feelings?, will she tell that to Su? what will Su parents do? are they going to except SuKk? What will SuKk do if they don't? will they run away and get married?

uffff so many sawaals in my mind makin me dizzy....

Anyways waiting for the next part ..

and plzzz don't mind my lamba comment...

next time ill try not to do so muuuuccchhhh bak bak...😳