Pranbir ff: 'My sick beloved' - Page 4

Created

Last reply

Replies

47

Views

14.5k

Users

12

Likes

76

Frequent Posters

Miss-Behave thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 365 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 5 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: sim.07

Prachi’s kidnapping and ranbir saving her, during this prachi getting hurt and end up being in hospital and ranbir realising he loves her and can’t lose her...

Fab idea I can use too thanks ❤️. Does anyone else have any ideas that they might have that they want me to write? I only write specific scenarios/ scenes for my FF's, I don't write stories that require continuation with additional chapters.

Miss-Behave thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 365 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 5 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: arviabhigya

Wonderful one shot yaar❤️ You are so talented indeed👏 Please write few shots more ☺️

Thank you so much 🤗

I surely will! If there's anything you guys want me to write too as a one shot/ ff you guys can shoot me with suggestions, but I only do one shots that don't require story continuation.

I'm surely considering simi's kidnapping idea, but is there anything else you guys might like to see?

Sofna thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 5 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: sammy17

Fab idea I can use too thanks ❤️. Does anyone else have any ideas that they might have that they want me to write? I only write specific scenarios/ scenes for my FF's, I don't write stories that require continuation with additional chapters.

I'll pm you😛😆

Miss-Behave thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 365 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 5 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Sofna

I'll pm you😛😆

Sure thing!

Marathi_Mulgi thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 5 years ago
#35

its just awesome

the way you described ranbir is ditto how ranbir is!

and scene like show but going further giving us what we not get to see in show!

loved how you show every little details of ranbir character is simple superb! his liking for prachi, his care for her, difference he felt for prachi than other girls whenever he was around her! his prides, his own thoughts confusion about his feeling for prachi, his comfort level with her! how he get smile on his face when he found her relaxed and starring and sinking in her beauty. ranbirs mind conflicts for his own feeling about prachi are narrating very beautifully and accurately its perfect like ranbir character shown in show or should i say more deeply and clearly than show!

and just like show this prachi is also unaware of his feelings only shahana being her best buddy can see on his face.

wish we could have got such beautiful n detailed scene in show!

keep giving such pranbir scene drabble

Miss-Behave thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 365 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 5 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Marathi_Mulgi

its just awesome

the way you described ranbir is ditto how ranbir is!

and scene like show but going further giving us what we not get to see in show!

loved how you show every little details of ranbir character is simple superb! his liking for prachi, his care for her, difference he felt for prachi than other girls whenever he was around her! his prides, his own thoughts confusion about his feeling for prachi, his comfort level with her! how he get smile on his face when he found her relaxed and starring and sinking in her beauty. ranbirs mind conflicts for his own feeling about prachi are narrating very beautifully and accurately its perfect like ranbir character shown in show or should i say more deeply and clearly than show!

and just like show this prachi is also unaware of his feelings only shahana being her best buddy can see on his face.

wish we could have got such beautiful n detailed scene in show!

keep giving such pranbir scene drabble

Thank you so much dear for such a top comment. 🤗 Currently thinking of my second ff.

pranbirkridha thumbnail
5th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 5 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: sammy17

Thank you so much dear for such a top comment. 🤗 Currently thinking of my second ff.

waiting plz write it fast love you
Miss-Behave thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 365 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 5 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: pranbirkridha

waiting plz write it fast love you

I'm not sure why it's taking me so long to get the second one even started 😆 I literally haven't written a single line because all I've been doing is sketching ideas in my head. Oh well. Not sure god even put this much thought into creating humans as I am for this pranbir ff. 🤣

Edited by sammy17 - 5 years ago
Miss-Behave thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 365 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 5 years ago
#39

I think I might just write an actual romantic scene for pranbir as my next ff.

aynat-22 thumbnail
Posted: 5 years ago
#40

Oh God, this was such a beautiful story. Loved it😍😍😍

Related Topics

Kumkum Bhagya Thumbnail

Posted by: jasminerahul

6 months ago

Jo mere dil ko dil banati hai PraNbir TS

Jo mere dil ko dil banati hai(The one that makes my heart a heart)Part 1 Since the PraNbir Purvi Khushi track remained incomplete in KKB,I am...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".