Originally posted by: Marathi_Mulgi
its just awesome
the way you described ranbir is ditto how ranbir is!
and scene like show but going further giving us what we not get to see in show!
loved how you show every little details of ranbir character is simple superb! his liking for prachi, his care for her, difference he felt for prachi than other girls whenever he was around her! his prides, his own thoughts confusion about his feeling for prachi, his comfort level with her! how he get smile on his face when he found her relaxed and starring and sinking in her beauty. ranbirs mind conflicts for his own feeling about prachi are narrating very beautifully and accurately its perfect like ranbir character shown in show or should i say more deeply and clearly than show!
and just like show this prachi is also unaware of his feelings only shahana being her best buddy can see on his face.
wish we could have got such beautiful n detailed scene in show!
keep giving such pranbir scene drabble
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