Abhigya: Sajda..!! Part 3 page 3

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Sajda..

Location : London

Speaker : The businessman of the year award goes to Mr. Abhishek Prem Mehra, Owner of Mehra Group of Companies.. Give a huge round of applause everyone. May I have Mr. Mehra on stage please.

A man in his late 20's gets up from table and move towards stage adjusting his blazer with a smirk on his face. A man who has the most charming smile and well built body on whom every girl will die on. When he walks every guy stares at him with jealousy and aggression and every girl with love and dreams. The most eligible bachelor, successful business and a great son of blessed parents. Ignoring every state of jealousy and maintaining his aura he reach upto stage but before climbing the stairs he closed his eyes and smiles. After 2 minutes opens and climbs on stairs and receives award.

Speaker : Now I would like to call Mr. Mehra on Mike to speak few words.

Abhi : Thank you. Thank you som much. Tha love you showered on me I m great full to all of you. I m highly obliged. I don't have any words to express my gratitude. Thank you.

After saying this he started to leave the stage. Every reporter trying their best for just one bite fro Abhi but his guards stops everyone.

Reporter 1 : Mr. Abhi how are you feeling after receiving this award ?

Abhi : I am very happy. Thank you.

Reporter 2 : Mr. Mehra after two years you are going back to India. How are you feeling ?

Abhi : I am feeling great. Thank you.

Reporter 3 : Just one last question sir please. Saari duniya aap pe pyaar luta Rahi hai.. Yeh pyaar paakar aapko Kaisa lag raha hai sir ? Apne chahne walo Ke liye koi message ?

[Reporter 3 : Just one last question sir please. Whole world is giving you so much love.. How are you feeling after getting so much love ? Any message for your fans ?]

After listening to reporters this question Abhi stops at his car gate and after opening his gate replies to that reporter.

Abhi : Main bas itna kehna Chahuga ki pyaar Sabke naseeb mein nahi hota.. Wo kismat wale hote hai jinhe unki mohabbat mil jati hai. Thank you.

[Abhi : All I would like to day that everyone doesn't get their love.. They are lucky who gets their love. Thank you.]

Reporter who asked this gets confused and every other reporter asked what did he say ?

Abhi after sitting in car closes his eyes and took deep breath and leaves from there.

Reporter 3 to other reporter staring towards particular where car is gone, "He said the truth." And smiles and too leaves from there.

Location : London Airport

Abhi directly reaches to airport to leave for India. He completes his formalities and boards the flight. After few minutes flight takes off and started to go towards its destination in its own pace, at its speed but Abhi.. He was all lost and was looking at his laptop and changing slides of his laptop screen watching her pic. After each slide change he gets more lost. After few minutes he start to write a mail which he will send after reaching to India.

But he doesn't know that this mail will change his life for forever..

xxx

Hey there.

A new story on Abhigya. My first try in writing. This part is incomplete but I will complete it very soon if I will get good feedback.

If you feel bored then ignore. But give it a chance. It will going to be a great story trust me as I am new here I don't know anyone here, I am writing this same story on other forums with different names. Help me and ignore any silly mistakes.

See ya!!

Index:

Part 1 : Page 1

Part 2 : Page 1

Part 3 : Page 3

Edited by Chumpkinpumpkin - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb dear.pls start your story😊
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Originally posted by: apratheba007

superb dear.pls start your story😊



Thank you!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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really nice start
waiting for the next part

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Sajda..!! Part 2

Note : Hey there. There is little correction in part 1. Abhi's flight got late so he was waiting at London airport only and started to work at laptop and at that time he saw her pictures. Afterwards he started to write an email. Please pardon me for the mistake.

Location : London Airport, Waiting lounge.

Abhi after seeing her pictures started to write an email. But he didn't knew that his this one mail will change his life forever.

Mail :

Dear Mansi Di,

How are you ? I know you will be fine.

Destiny has played a very cruel game with all of us especially with me. I know I shouldn't be talking about this but Di it's been two years that I didn't met with you all and her. Why Di ?

Everyone in whole world thinks that ABHISHEK PREM MEHRA is a successful businessman but no one knows that I am the most unlucky person existing on this dominating world, that I am a LOSER who saved everyone but failed to save his love.

Di I am coming back to India. I have got another mission but before going for that I want you to find out about her. As you only know that I am not just a successful businessman but also a undercover agent. A loser who saved everyone but..

Di I was in hospital from last two year it was you and Varun Jeeju who made me this successful just to save me. In real it's you who should get this award but me... Again me loser took this from you.

Di she was in front of my eyes. I saw her, met her but my responsibility towards my country and my profession of being undercover agent I lost her. I know her Di she will never complain but she want me as much as I want her. We want each other. She knew that we can never be together but still she want us to be together. Find her before I come back.

Give my love to Mom, dad, manasvi and Jeeju.

Bye. Take care.

Yours Abhi.

After writing the email and posting it he was about to shut his laptop he noticed the same reporter who asked him about love. He was standing in front of him smiling like an idiot. Abhi got confused and after shutting his laptop he stood up and walked towards him. Seeing abhi coming towards himself that reporter got scared and adjusts himself and starts to look here and there. Abhi after reaching upto him asked him in little angry and confused voice maintaining his aura.

Abhi : What ?

Reporter : Nothing. :)

Abhi : Who are you? What you want? Why were you staring me?

Reporter : Me? Staring you? No dude I was looking there.

Abhi hold his collar and this time asked him with little high pitch, "Who are you?". Seeing Abhi so much angry that reporter gulped his saliva in fear and speaker after getting out of 's hold.

Reporter : I.. I am Arju-Arjun Kirl-Kirloskar . Yo-your new part-partne in your new ca-case. Yeah. I was star-staring at you bec-because I hea-heard about you a lot. I am the same rep-reporter who ask-asked you abou-about lo-love. Yeah.

After listening to him seeing him in so much fear abhi calmed down himself a little and sighs and asked him to relax.

Abhi : OK. Calm down. Relax. I am not going to eat you. You should have told me before that CHIEF has send you. But why you acted like reporter ?

Arjun : I am sorry sir. Actually chief told me that you are little suspicious person. Like angry man wala type person. Sorry my Hindi is little poor. Hehehe. I acted like reporter because I wanted to know about you so, I should have told you about myself there only but then I stopped after listening your words about love so. I am really sorry.

Abhi smiled watching arjun confessing everything in very funny way. Arjun started to plead like little child. Abhi looked around people staring both of them. He felt embarrassed and told arjun to stop but he didn't stopped. After seeing that arjun will not stop so he hold his shoulder and asked him to stop.

Abhi : Stop it Officer Arjun. Everyone is watching us. Stop it and I am not angry with you. So stop it. OK?

Arjun : Sachii sir. You forgive me. Yaayy. Thank you sir. Thank you. Hehehe.

Abhi stared him in shock seeing arjun acting like a kid who gets his favourite candy. But controls himself and thinks.

Abhi POV : What the hell? Kaha phas gaya yaar main. Yeh kaisa officer dhoonda hai chief nee mere liye. I have to be careful around him. Yes I have to.

[Abhi POV : What the hell? Where did I got stuck yaar? What type of officer did chief found for me? I have to be careful around me. Yes I have to.]

Seeing abhi lost in himself arjun stopped acting like kid and asked him.

Arjun : Sir? Sirrr? What happened?

Abhi : Ha.. Ha kya? What happened?

Arjun : Exactly sir. What happened? Where did you lost? I was calling you from last 10 minutes. Are you OK?

Abhi : Yeah.. Yeah I am fine. Let's go. Our flight has been announced come.

After saying this abhi left from their towards flight. Arjun stood there and started to think.

Arjun POV : Should I tell him who I am in real? Should I? Na Na.. No Arjun Kirloskar shut up. Let it be. But I can't see him like this too Na. Hmm. Idea. Yeah. I should talk with him about her. Yes I should do this. Like this we will reach India and then I will tell him about myself. Yes this will be OK. Huh. God please save me and help me.

When abhi felt that arjun not behind him he looked around and saw him lost in himself and thought now what happened to him. He walked towards him and asks him.

Abhi: Officer Arjun? What happened? Come we ae getting late.

After hearing abhi's voice arjun got startled and stammers.

Arjun : Yeah. Ha. Yes yes. Let's go. Come come. We are getting late. Ufff sir you talk so much. Now come.

Abhi saw him in shock after listening to him and sighs and walks behind him silently praying to God to save him getting crazy from arjun. Hehehe.

They boarded their flight and plane took off to take abhi towards that place and to that thing which he never thought that thing will happen to him. He didn't knew that destiny to whom he was cursing few minutes back has planned something very beautiful and harshad was that way with which he will reach to that thing.

Hey there.

Another part done. Thank you everyone for your response on part first. Sorry for them who felt bored.

Keep supporting me like this.

Pardon me for any type of mistake.

See ya!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb part.its really interesting keep rocking dear😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shafoo

love your part 1 and 2



Thank you!! :)
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Originally posted by: apratheba007

superb part.its really interesting keep rocking dear😊😊



Thank you!! :)
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Do you guys want me to update furthur or not??
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Sajda.. Part 3.

Location : Indian Airlines.

Abhimanyu was sitting on his alloted seat and was doing something when from nowhere arjun came to him in full speed and by mistake spilled the hot coffee mug on abhi's hand. At that time abhi was using his phone and was seeing her pic. He shouted on top his voice on getting burnt and arjun was standing over there like if he will get a chance he will run away but unfortunately poor guy has to face wrath of Mr. Abhishek Prem Mehra.

Abhi : What the hell? Are you insane Officer Arjun? Can't you see and walk?

Arjun : I am sorry Sir. I am really sorry. Voh I was bringing coffee for you I thought coffee will get cold so I came running and then my leg got tripped and I fell on you with..

Abhi didn't let him complete the sentence and completed his statement on his own.

Abhi : With mug of hot coffee...!!!!! Right Officer? Now please give me my way I have to clean it up. Please be little fast because its burning like hell.

Arjun : Sure sir. whole way is yours sir.

After saying this and giving way to him arjun started to smile like fool and picked up abhi's phone victoriusly like if he got something for which he was waiting for so long and sat down on his seat holding abhi's phone and seeing her pic and started to say something with a lump in his voice and wetness in his eyes.

Arjun : He still loves you TINTIN. Your ROCKSTAR still loves you. Why you gave me this kasam wasam to not to tell him that who I am? Why? I cant even share his pain with me aur ask him anything as he is my senior and see what I did now because of you I spilled a mug full of hot coffee on him just to talk with your pic. Huh. You are very bad PARI. OK OK I know why you did all this but you saw na how much he misses you, love you. Promise me that after reaching to India you will come back to him. OK? Now wish me luck I am going to talk with him about you guys. BYE.

By the time arjun placed abhi's phone back. Abhi too came back from washroom after cleaning himself and taking help from medical department. Arjun took sigh of relief and composed himself and started to prepare himself to how to talk with abhi about them. Abhi sat on his seat and make himself comfortable. After settling down Abhi saw arjun in deep thoughts.

Abhi's POV : Now what happened to him? Stupid creature. Cant even see properly and walk. Ouch my hand its burning. But why is he so quite? Hold on abhi don't stress yourself so much thinking about him and concentrate how you will tackle him all way. Huh.

Arjun's POV : From where should I start? Umm what about his last mission. Yeah it will be great. No you dumbo last mission toh was with.. Arrgghh. OK let it be let me first ask him sorry and then will see from where should I start. Yeah it will be good.

Both stopped thinking and saw each other at same time and give each other small smile and again started to look around. After 5 minutes arjun decided to initiate a talk.

Arjun : Umm.. Sir.

Abhi : Hmm.

Arjun : Sir..Wo. Umm. How is your hand now? Is it still paining?

Abhi : Hmm.

Everytime arjun ask him anything he gives answer either in hmm or plainly no. Arjun got pissed off with this and finally asks him sternly.

Arjun : What do you think of yourself SIR? Here I am concern for your wound and you are showing me your so called bullshit attitude. Its not happening sir. Huh.

Abhi got shocked seeing arjun so pissed off so he ask sorry for his behaviour.

Abhi : I am sorry Officer. I didnt meant to hurt you or to talk with you rudely. I was thinking about something. I am really sorry.

Arjun realise his mistake and he too ask for apology.

Arjun : No sir. I am sorry sir. I shouldnt shout on you like this. You are my senior. I am really really sorry. Please forgive me.

Abhi : Oh No No Officer. You were concerned for me but I..

Arjun : I am saying na sir it was my mistake. OK fine let's finish this topic here because neither you will stop nor me. So its better that we should shut this topic here. OK?

Abhi : OK.

Both gave each other warm smile and again started looking here and there. But arjun again start talking.

Arjun : Umm..Sir?

Abhi : Yes Officer.

Arjun : Umm..Can I ask you one question please?

Abhi while sipping his coffee hmmd.

Arjun : Why you always call me Officer? I mean I have a good name by god's grace. Then why you always call me Officer you can easily take my name Arjun.

Abhi who was till now enjoying his coffee got suprised and looked at arjun with his one eye raised asking him why this question suddenly. Seeing abhi reacting like this to his question he asks.

Arjun : What? Why are you looking at me like this? Did I ask something wrong?

Abhi : No. Its not like that. I just that I never took any of my juniors name except Pur..

Abhi stopped in mid knowing what he was about to say and shut his eyes tight remebering his two best officers under him who were his friends, colleagues, family, juniors. Those who meant everything to him. To whom he lost when he lost her. Arjun already knew what he was about to say so he pushed abhi so that he can say furthur but to his bad luck, abhi excused himself from this question but arjun was admanant to talk to him about them so he again started to talk.

Arjun : Umm Sir?

Abhi who was till now got pissed off with arjun's rantings and with his stupid questionnaire answered him sarcastically.

Abhi : Yes Officer. Now what?

Arjun : Lets paly some game.

Abhi : What? Game? Are you sure Officer?

Arjun : Yes sir.

Abhi's POV : Is he crazy or waht? Like serously game? Argghh.. Long way to go abhi. Huh.

Arjun : Sir.. Where did you got lost? Let's play na!!

Abhi : OK.. Ok fine Officer. We will play. Happy?

Arjun : Very happy.

Abhi : Just top giving me this stupid smile. Tell me what is the game now?

Arjun : OK. The game is I will say one word and the word similar to it you have to say after listening to that work. For example.. Umm Yeah like I said Sun then next word which will come into your mind you have to say it so what word came after listening sun?

Abhi : Light?

Arjun : Bingo. You got it sir. Like this game will continue. OK sir?

Abhi : OK.

Arjun : OK. So Should I start the game then?

Abhi : OK.

Arjun : OK. So The first word is Badal [Clouds]

Abhi : Baarish [Rain]

Arjun : Phool [Flower]

Abhi : Khushboo

Arjun : Umm.. Thandi [Cold]

Abhi : Ice Cream

Arjun : Family

Abhi : Manasvi

Arjun : Manasavi?

Abhi : Oh she is my niece. My elder sister's daughter. She is very cute.

Arjun : Oh how cute.

Arjun : OK next word. Umm.. Hate.

Abhi : NIKHIL SOOD

Arjun : OK. Umm.. Love?

After listening word love only one person came in his mind and sub conciuosly he took her name.

Abhi : PRAGYA!!

After listening her name finally arjun smiled to the fullest because now he got to knew that he can initiate talk very easily because abhi will never say no for this person. Hmm interesting hehe.

Abhi after taking her name gets shocked and looked at arjun who was giving him mischivious smirk and abhi know that now he will ask him about her and there is no way to escape beacuse before also he is the only one who asked him about love.

Arjun : Sir. Who is this Pragya? Say Say. Hmm.

Abhi : NO one.. hehe..

Arjun : NO SIR. YOU TOOK HER NAME AS A PRAYER. NOW C'MON SPILL THE BEANS SIR.

Abhi : Officer stay in your limits. You are crossing your limits. You are not supposed to ask any personal quetion from your senior. Concentrate on game or forget it game is over I am very tired I am going to sleep. Bye.

Seeing his idea flop arjun said.

Arjun : OK fine sir I will not ask you anything about her but i would insist you should talk about her this will help you with your pain. I know sir how it feels when someone you love goes away with you.

Abhi : How you know that she is not with me?

Arjun : From that statement remember you said that they are lucky who gets their love. From there. Please sir.

Abhi : FIne i will tell you.

Hey there.

HERE is the update.

There is a good news finally in next part it will be going to reveal what happened in past with abhi, pragya and with everyone else. But there is a bad news too I am afraid to say but sadly this story is going to end soon. YES you heard it right its going to end but with happy note as you all wanted. So cheer up guys.

Guys I am not happy with the response, if possible then please comment and like!!

Those who need PM then buddy me or just mention in comment I will PM you from next time.

See ya!!

Edited by Chumpkinpumpkin - 9 years ago

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