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Posted: 9 years ago
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Epilogue

Abhi receives Aliya's text. He thinks that she is trying to trap him again. He throws his phone on the bed and sits on the couch upset. He remembers his good times with Aliya. He tries to get his phone. He then remembers Aliya confessing all her crimes. He remembers her calling him the worst brother in the world. He remembers her bring the reason for Bulbul's death.

He gets a call from an unknown number after few hours. He attends the call.

Abhi: Hello

Aliya: Hello bhai..

Abhi is about to cut the call.

Aliya: Please listen to me. Don't cut the call. I have to tell you something important.

Abhi: Don't try to play with my emotions again.

He cuts the call. Aliya calls from the same number but he rejects. She calls again. Abhi attends and shouts angrily.

Abhi: Do you want to go to ja..

Aliya: I have to tell you about Pragya.

Abhi: Pragya..?

Aliya: I know why she changed.

Abhi: I don't want to hear anything from you. Is that clear to you?

Aliya: The baby is not yours bhai.

Abhi: What?

Aliya: Yes bhai. It's Nikhil's baby.

Abhi: How is it possible? Is this a new plan of yours?

Aliya: I swear that the baby is not yours. If you don't believe me, ask Daadi. She knows it.

Abhi: What? Daadi knows that the baby is not mine. How does she know? If she knows, why didn't she tell it to me? You have gone mad Aliya.

Aliya: Bhai don't cut the call. Please listen to me for few minutes without asking any questions.

Aliya tells Abhi whatever that happened since Pragya overheard the truth.

Aliya: I am sorry Bhai. I know I have lost the right to speak to you as a sister. But I just wanted to tell this to you.

Aliya cut the call and she wiped the drop of tear that was about to fall from her eye.

Abhi goes to Daadi's room and sees Rachana with Daadi. He steps back and stands near the door.

Rachana: Pragya Di is struggling so much to prove the baby truth to jiju. Now Nikhil is also hospitalised. How can we catch them red-handed? Pragya Di is failing continuously.

Daadi: Yes but god will help her. She is on a mission to save her kumkum. She will win.

Abhi was shocked to hear them telling words like 'mission', 'baby truth' etc.

He goes to his room and waits for Pragya. He gets lost in thoughts and ends up sleeping. He wakes up and finds that it's past midnight. He hears Pragya sleep talking about her challenge in the temple.

He calls Aliya. Aliya wakes up and feels more than happy to see that Abhi was calling her.

Aliya: Bhai

Abhi: Thanks

Aliya wishes that she could hug his brother and cry. Abhi wishes that his sister could have changed a little sooner.
Edited by -Nive- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: hailly

Awesome os. Loved it.


Thank you 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yeh happy ending... Glad u added epilogue... Aliya telling truth that's what I expected from her from many months to help her brother... But SAd too see its not happening...
Nice ending
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nive!! This is one of my dreams for Abhi-Aalu!! Would love this to happen and hopefully the bro-sis bond to take a new birth this way.
Ty!
Edited by -Tia- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: jaydp59

Yeh happy ending... Glad u added epilogue... Aliya telling truth that's what I expected from her from many months to help her brother... But SAd too see its not happening...
Nice ending


Thank you JD!

Hope it happens someday in the show and we get to see Abhi with his changed sister!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: -Tia-

Nive!! This is one of my dreams for Abhi-Aalu!! Would love this to happen and hopefully the bro-sis bond to take a new birth this way.

Ty!


Thank you Tia 😊
I think they started ruining the bond after the end of kidnapping track. Hope they bring the sis-bro duo's charm back.
Edited by -Nive- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: anishapoudel

aliya can mend his relationship withabhi by exposing dadi


Exposing Daadi? 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
epilogue is good
love it
Keep it up
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Please Cv...please make Aliyah good. She would be one heck of a Mehra girl!!

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