UNTITLED ABHIGYA FF-PART [4] UPDATED PG 4 W/ TRANSLATIONS

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello guys I'm back! I am struggling with my writing but I will definitely try my best to be entertaining. For the first time I'm writing a FANFICTION. Wish me luck! I would like to get a good outcome from this piece of writing. Plz suggest any title as idk what to name it. So here is part 1.

PART 1

Abhi and Pragya love each other a lot but are scared to confess to each other.
A few days after the MMS drama, Abhi realized how much pragya loves him and his family and can see love for him in her eyes. He wants her to confess before he does, so he purposely challenged pragya to be romantic and propose to him as if he was her boyfriend. Abhi couldn't wait till she confesses. And today on New Years came that moment.

Abhi's POV
"Aaista aaista mann khone laga hai
Dil ko na jane kya hone laga
Dekha nahi tha tujhe kabhi inn nazro se
Tere nazro ka asar ab mujh par hone laga hai
(I am slowly getting lost
Don't know what happened to my heart
I never saw you in this way
Your eyes are now affecting me)
...(couldn't hear this line when she said it so I skip)
Kehte hai pyaar jaise vahi hone laga hai
Paas aao toh mushkil door jao toh mushkil
Tere na ho ab mera hone laga hai
Pad sakte ho toh aankhe pad lo
Lafz kehte nahi ki tujhse pyaar hone laga hai
(They says it's love and that's what happened
It's hard when you come close, it's hard when you go far)
If you can read, read my eyes
Words don't say that I have fallen in love with you.)
I..I lo..love ...uummm...", I was waiting for her to finish her proposal so I can finally tell her about my new found feelings.
"Kya hua ruk kyu gayi?!" (What happened? Why did you stop?) I asked impatiently.
"Kya? Khatam hua!" (What?! I finished!) She said as if she doesn't know and I was almost about to burst on her. He controlled his shock and was desperate to hear the three magical words. Suddenly he slips his hands around her waist and pulled her closer.
"Yeh aap kya kar rahe hai!? Chodiye mujhe Maine bola na ki khatam hua toh phir main jeet gayi!"(what are you doing? Leave me! I told you right I finished so I won!) " Aise kaise khatam hua? Tum aur kuch Bol rahi thi na ki u love...?"(How are you finished?! You were saying something right? That you love...?" "Woh main kehne wali thi ki I love..I love...woh.. "(That..I was going to say that I love..I love... That..)
"DAADI..!" (Grandma!!) She tried to leave my grip
"Aise kaise jaogi? Mujhe pata hai ki tum mujhe bewakoof banakar bhaagna chahti ho. Aisa sochna bhi mat! Ab bolo warna mai nahi chodne wala!..Ey plz bolo na!?"(How will you just leave like that? I know you wanted to make a fool of me and run away right? Don't even think about doing that! Now tell me or else I won't leave you! Ey..plz tell me..!) I almost whined.
"Ahem Ahem..."
I IMMEDIATELY move away from pragya knowing dadi was really there.
"Woh dadi... Aapko kuch chahiye kya?.." (Umm..Grandma..did you want something?) I said trying to ignore the embarrassment, but failed. I took a glance at pragya and saw her face looking down redder than a tomato. I smiled at the thought.
"Aap dono Mai jo maangungi, woh denge?"(you guys will give me whatever I ask for?)
"Aap bataiye toh sahi! Ham abhi dete!" (You first tell us! We will give it to you right away!) I declared.
"Mujhe na jald se jald apne godh mein ek parpota ya parpoti chahiye"(you know, I want a grandson or a grand-daughter ASAP!)
Pragya was redder than ever while I was blushing awkwardly.
"Uummm..Dadi aap so jaiye mai kal apko doctor ke paas le jaa raha hoon." (Uumm.. Grandma why don't you go and sleep? Tomorrow I am taking you to the doctor for your check up) I said trying to break the ice.
"TK TK mai abhi ke liye jaa raha hoon par meri baat ko seriously lena!"(Okok I'm going for now but take my talk seriously!"
"Tk dadi aap jaiye. Bi gn!"(ok..you go and sleep...)
As she left I saw pragya running into the washing room.

CONTINUATION FROM PRAGYA POV
I ran into the washroom out of embarrassment. I couldn't handle myself. I wonder what abhishek thinks?!
P: mai ab inse Kya bolungi? Agar woh phirse Mujhe pooche toh Kya karoon? I hesitantly left the washroom...Suddenly as I open the door I fall back with a fully muscular body on top of me...it was abhishek..
(Eye lock)
"Woh... I'm sorry mein darwaaze se tik kar khada tha! Mai tumse puchne hi wala tha ki tum thik ho ki nahi... Woh tum bohut dher se bhar nahi aayi na isiliye." Umm..I'm sorry I was leaning against the door. I was actually going to ask you whether you were fine or not..um.. You didn't come out for a long time so that's why)
"It's ok" we try getting up again but fall back down as the floor was slightly wet.
(Eye lock)
I see abhishek leaning towards me and I couldn't control my emotions so I quickly closed my eyes unable to bear the proximity. I can feel his breath on my ear. I hear him say, "Kal mai tumse apna proposal pura karwaake hi rahunga..(tomorrow, I'll make you finish your proposal,..) So be ready Mrs pragya abhishek mehra! He gave me a small peck on the cheek and got off of me and left leaving me blushing very hard with a coy smile on my lips.

Precap-ABHIGYA CONFESSION WITH A JEALOUSY SEQUENCE AS WELL DONT KNOW FROM WHO'S SIDE YET... Thx for reading and plz continue reading and I will keep you entertained.
Will continue in the next part...so how was it guys? The first part? Sorry it wasn't that long because I don't have time at the moment but u can expect more abhigya in the next part. Sorry for mistakes. I have NO INTENTION OF PLAGIARISM. 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow ur first?!
It is so good.
I loved that their r no MUs here &. Abhi also realized his love for pragya. Waiting for next part now.
Wanna read more right now.
Continue soon. Thanks for pm though.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sijay.is.real

Wow ur first?!

It is so good.
I loved that their r no MUs here &. Abhi also realized his love for pragya. Waiting for next part now.
Wanna read more right now.
Continue soon. Thanks for pm though.


Thank you so much!! It's not my first piece of writing it's actually third but yes it is my first Fanfiction though! I'll try to continue as soon as possible as I am a little busy...so yeah but thx for the comment 😛 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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super update plz continue soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's awesome please continue soon
Please give translation for hindi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That's awesome
I like jealous abhi😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: akshayaakshaya

It's awesome please continue soon
Please give translation for hindi


Don't worry I will make the translations and thank you I will continue ASAP.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nandhu123

That's awesome

I like jealous abhi😉


I'll. Definitely have jealous abhi thx for suggestion! I added English translations and will soon add next part.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys! I'm back with Part 2. I will try my best with the translations. I apologize for any mistakes for my Hindi. I hope you will like it. Here it is:

From last night, both pragya and abhi knew very well that they love each other. It was morning. Pragya was the first to wake up and saw abhi still asleep. She thanked the heavens for keeping abhi asleep. She decided she would spend the day at her mom's house. She quickly got up and as she was walking to the washroom, she drops a glass and closes her eyes tightly hoping he didn't wake up.
After a few moments, she took one small step, and heard, "Ey chashmish! Kaha bhaagi jaa rahi ho?"(Chashmish, where are you escaping?) He said with a smirk.
"Woh Mai washroom jaa rahi thi tho aap ud gaye."(I was going to the washroom then you woke up)
He spinned her around before she could go and locked his hands around her waist.
"Yeh aap Kya kar rahe hai! Mujhe washroom jana hai!"(What are you doing!! I need to go to the washroom!)
"Woh tumhara challenge hai na usse pura karo!"(You know your challenge,..complete it!)
"Teekh hai aap sunna chahte toh Suniye... I love...ROBIN"(ok! I wanna hear it? Then listen..I love ROBIN) her eyes widened and abhi left her immediately and looked back.
"Robin tum.."(robin you..) and he stopped realizing no one was there and turned back to see pragya gone! "UNBELIEVABLE MAN!"
Later on, abhi takes dadi to the doctor and everything went fine. Abhi couldn't find pragya anywhere in the house so he asks dadi.
"Usne tujhe bataya nahi? Woh apni maa ke ghar gayi hai aaj keh rahi thi ki bohut mann kar raha hai toh maine jane diya!"(she didn't tell you? She went to her moms house for the day. She said she really wanted to go so I let her!)
"Dadi Mujhe usse ek zaruri baat karni hai mai vahi jaa kar milti hoon. Tk?"(I have to talk to her about something important dadi I will go there and meet her. Ok?)
And he leaves to arora house...

SO SO SORRY GUYS I HAVE A LOT OF WORK AT THE MOMENT SO I COULDNT GET TO THE JEALOUSY SEQUENCE. BUT I PROMISE TO UPDATE TOMORROW AND I HAVE EXAMS AS WELL SO PLZ FORGIVE ME! SORRY FOR MISTAKES! Waiting for feedback!

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