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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
Hmm..Loved it Mina. Loved Angad's grand entry here. I can imagine filmy scenario. So Angad knows why he is here. Angad likes Pragya.. Excited for the coming story, how will Dadis' plan work.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
I can imagine the scenes in MM.Abhi is super jealous that his wife is admiring someone.
Thank you Mina for the update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update Mina. Loved it.
Ah Abhi is supper jealous of Angad πŸ˜† .
Continue soon plz.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
Angad and Pragya are attracted to each other?! 😲 Did she forget Abhi already?! πŸ˜† Speedy she is, not. Feel sorry for Abhi here for some weird reason πŸ˜•...Now the plan is what I am curious about...Tfs :)...
Edited by Mystery1 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Jus when abhi thought things couldn't go worse - enter Angad Rathore!! πŸ˜† Whoa, kya grand entry tha πŸ‘πŸ˜³ Abhi was initially happy seeing him, only to turn green with jealousy when angad helped pragya!! Loved loved our jealous rockstarπŸ˜†

Abhi's mind voice is something on these lines --
Abhi - No one is listening me!! They are all reacting as if I dont exist!!
Voice - Koi baat nahi, kabhi kabhi hota hai rockstar, take a chill pill!!
Abhi - What happened to my dadi and my wife?
Voice - Uh? They seem fine to me?
Abhi - You are off tangent - they aren't reacting to "ME".. Which part of that sentence didn't you understand?
Voice - All of it?
Abhi - And as if that wasn't enough - this traitor..
Voice - Wait, right there, rockstar - traitor? Kaun traitor? You?
Abhi - Angad Rathore!!!!!!!
Voice - Angad? But he is your cousin na?
Abhi- Cousin my foot!
Voice - Ab samji, cousin ab traitor ban gaya! I get it!! You continue rockstar, you continue..
Abhi - Haan, where was I?
Voice - Traitor?
Abhi - Yeah, that traitor enters my house - oh wait- how could I forget was royally invited to my house by my own dadi and dasi? How dare they do this to me?
Voice - Isme kaunsi badi baat hai rockstar? Invite hi toh kiya hai na?
Abhi - Didn't you see how he was blowing his own trumpet of how Indu daasi invited him and he came running?
Voice - Huh?
Abhi - What's wrong with you? How could you not notice how many times he proudly gloated he was invited to my house by my daasi?
Voice - Three err., maybe., Four times?
Abhi - Exactly! Who does that? And Daasi how could she?
Voice - Daasi also happens to be his daadi, rockstar?
Abhi - Whatever! I mean clearly the guy has to get a hold of himself, don't you think?
Voice - If you say so rockstar, if you say so!
Abhi - You are not understanding...
Voice - And clearly you are talking in circles! Rockstar, tell me what exactly is your problem?
Abhi - He helps my wife? I mean "my" - "Rockstar Abhi's" wife? How dare he?
Voice - You got to admit you were err., how do I put this lightly? A little slow to react there?! And I liked angad helping pragya - it looked like a scene out of a typical bollywood movie, you know? They looked good together.. Err., okay okay rockstar don't glare at me..
Abhi- Argh!!! No use telling you.. Let me deal with my wife first..
Voice- Good idea, Pragya is a safe bet - but deal? Kaisa deal? Kaunsa deal?
Abhi - Yes deal - how dare she gaze at him - that traitor? How could she admire him? When I "The Rockstar of the nation" - her husband is standing right here?
Voice - Waise toh Angad err., traitor mujhe bhi bahut pasand hai.. And I think she is impressed with him, Rockstar! Didn't you notice how she looked at him?
Abhi - But she never looks at me like that?
Voice - Wonder why, though?
Abhi - Hey wait.. Impressed? What do you mean impressed? No one can impress my wife beyond me?
Voice - Sorry to burst your bubble rockstar, but traitor is handsome - not that you aren't, but defo a little bit more than you.. And by impress I mean - he respects dadi, saved your wife, err., should I go on?
Abhi - Nooo, thanks!
Voice - Come on rockstar, at least accept it to me!
Abhi - Get Lost!
Voice - See, you are running away from the truth! But shouldn't you actually be running to dadi already? She called you remember?
Abhi - She did ignore me you know? Now she calls me? As if the drama wasn't enough, don't know what more she has in store for me.
Voice - You are still stuck on the ignoring part? Tujhe kuch nahi ho sakta, bas!
Abhi - Hmmm..
Voice - Cheer up rockstar, you will know only when you go? Time for some route change rockstar - first stop dadi before meeting your soon-to-be-divorced wife?
Abhi - Divorce my foot! Sab ke sab pagal ho gaye hain! Tu bhi aur mera parivaar bhi.. Ho kya gaya hai sab ko?
Voice - Hum sab nahi, tu paagal ho gaya hai.. Didn't you hear what dadi said? Both your and pragya's divorce will happen along with remarriage.. Rockstar, guess now you need hearing aids too!
Abhi- Get one thing into your thick head and I won't repeat it again "Divorce kabhi nahi hoga, aur main kabhi hone bhi nahi dunga" Pragya is, was and will always be MY wife, samji tum?
Voice - You are telling me or convincing yourself rockstar? Main kuch samji nahi?
Abhi - Argh!!! Tujhe baad main dekhlunga.. Ab mere pyaari budiya ke paas ja raha hoon..
Voice - Lets see rockstar, lets see.. I am having so much fun you know!
Abhi - 😑
Voice - 🀣 🀣

Pragya rean on seeing Angad was nice - confusion, recognizing him as a celebrity, thanks to bb - then thinking of him as fren of her dear hubby - wanting to fulfill wifely duties for the guest who entered home - until she puts the pieces together and finds out that dadis' wanted her to marry angad.. Way to go pragya! Admiring angad and thinking he his handsome only to come shocking back to reality as she looks at the angry face of her dear hubbyπŸ‘

Already love your angad! 😳 He kinda likes pragya already and is fully into the mission.. Great going for him!! Totally Awesome update!! πŸ˜›πŸ˜†

Edited by frenzyy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Frenzyy!!!! You've written a drabble for my fic. I LOVE ITTT!!! πŸ˜† 🀣
thank you. more thoughts later (no seriously eventually I will tell you some more thoughts πŸ˜›) πŸ€—

And thank you to everyone else for your thoughtful and much appreciated feedback as well. Frenzyy made me temporarily break my once-a-day rule for setting time aside for replies but I will be back this evening to reply to your comments 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -mina-

Frenzyy!!!! You've written a drabble for my fic. I LOVE ITTT!!! πŸ˜† 🀣

thank you. more thoughts later (no seriously eventually I will tell you some more thoughts πŸ˜›) πŸ€—

And thank you to everyone else for your thoughtful and much appreciated feedback as well. Frenzyy made me temporarily break my once-a-day rule for setting time aside for replies but I will be back this evening to reply to your comments 😳



Aww, really glad to know you loved it!! πŸ€— Couldn't resist after the way you made the splendid entry of Angad - typical bollywood style helping pragya, add in dadi and dasis and all this under our dear Rockstar's own roof - "The Rockstar of the Nation" was reduced to a mere spectator and that too by his own family?!! πŸ˜† Totally cracked me up!! 🀣 So, wanna our rockstar to share his thoughts err., vent his feelings with someone, who better than his mind voice?πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
@italics - Shall wait for your thoughts πŸ˜³πŸ˜› I am also glad I made you break your own rule, although temporarily!! 😳 See your Abhigya & Angad can do this to you I say? πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78


πŸ€— It is really exciting for an ff writer to see this within minutes of putting up a chapter...thank you 😳 πŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: anamika.vg

Res :)

Unres :)
I was like this πŸ˜ƒ, while reading the chapter..
Abhi's shock on seeing angad ...& pragya's realization of angad's visit ..loved it ...so angad knows truth abt pragya & indu daasi's plan ...good..so sweet of him!!.glad to see abhi like this πŸ˜†...like a cornered mouse !!

Mina, don't make us wait...update the next chapter fast πŸ˜›



Heehee!! I am glad I could make you grin πŸ˜† Abhi as a cornered mouse??? Now there's an interesting idea! Cornered he certainly is but mouse I am not so sure. I'm happy you liked Pragya's quick realization of why Angad was there and that you are finding Angad sweet!! He really is a good boy, as Indu Daasi will be eager to tell everyone...πŸ˜‰. Next chapter will be Saturday and you know na Viji, 3 days is super fast for me!! Any faster than that and you would have to ask yourself if it's Mina posting or an impostor 🀑

Thanks for reading and commenting <3
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: Pragz10

Awww, I loved the update Mina! I could just picture IK holding Pragya in the RK pose that Abhi had held her on the staircase once. Abhi black with thunder πŸ˜† So he knows there is a plan and thats why he is there, but at the same time he's attracted to Pragya and doesn't think that marriage would be the worst? Hmm, I wonder what the plan is!

I love it, can't wait for more! πŸ˜ƒ



Oooh! It's so cool to know your imagination produced that picture for the scene. I love it! You will soon find out about the plan, it's not my intention to keep it a mystery πŸ˜† Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts on this chapter ❀️ πŸ˜ƒ

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