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Posted: 9 years ago
Tia,
Thanks for this story. I relished it. Also for giving me the kind of Abhi I always wanted to see in the soap.

On the lighter note, Abhi's leap of faith dialogue worked magic and he got lucky on his wedding night 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
It's awesome ,tia 😊
It was nice to see tht it was his surprise plan to visit pragya with the marriage proposal :).. The reason he gave for their two years separation was so matured... His trust in her tht she will be there for him ...nice...

His naughtiness ☺️

Thanks for giving us such a wonderful read as a gift,Tia 🤗

Do Write more ..your stories are treat for us ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi dear thanks for this amazing ff. 😛
Just loved it a lot. ❤️
You are really awesome . 👏
Plz write more when you're free. I really Loved to read your works. Waiting for your next work.
And sorry for late reply.
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Posted: 9 years ago

And then I had entered Abhi's home as his wife, a dream that I always wanted to see but was afraid of not coming true.

Like any girl who would feel. I like how real her insecurities were in this story 👍🏼...

"I know, but what can I do? There is a lot I want to do but..", he said mockingly, sitting up, and resting his back to the headboard.

"I will do something and you will tell me tomorrow.. you know.. that I used you for bed and all.. I don't really like to hear that", said Abhishek looking everywhere else but me.

Liked the fact that he didn't forget especially when it comes from the person who means the most. I'll say most because Pragya and Music he put them in one category. Don't know about Daadi and Aliyah as both of them were not mentioned as much but he did mention to her near at the start that she cares like his Daadi. So does Daadi and Aliyah fit in that same cateogory I am assuming?!...

"OH MY GOD Abhishek, you are still holding on to that!? I thought you married me because we were beyond that fight", I said shocked.

"Of course we are beyond that and I married you because I love you to death. But this bed and all, I am not comfortable now. I don't want to "use" you, you know?", he said stressing the word use.

Loved his answer to her here as he mentioned the love before her. So he puts their's and his love first...

In fact you have all the rights on me and "use" me the way you used to do. I don't mind at all", I said in a stretch and he was looking at me without blinking eyes.

"Which way? Hmm?", he asked biting his lips that I was flustered.

🤣 Loved the way she said that and he kept on teasing her 🤣...

Bless the couple, 😃...

"Fine, if you don't want to use me, it's okay. but I want to use you", I made a statement not looking at him.

"Haaww, you want to USE me? Use me? Hmm", he said almost breaking into a grin.

This was Gold 👏...I loved it even more...

"Ahaa Chashmish, use me then, I am all yours. I won't even accuse you of using me tomorrow. Promise!", said Abhishek as he locked his hands behind his head laying on the bed properly, not taking his eyes off of me.

Basically all along he wanted her to use him. He definitely knows her and how to get what he wants from her. He has done that even when they were together at college...

As I sat removing my bangles and necklaces I could feel Abhi's eyes following me. My dupatta was way too heavy and it was pinned in so many places that I slowly undid the pins so that I could release it from my head and undo my bun, which was almost giving me a headache now. While doing so my dupatta slid off of me and I heard Abhi say "you have gained some weight at the right places, babe", having me blush all the more.

This is an innocent question. Due to my curiosity, I need to ask 😆. Which places were the right places that she put weight on that he referred to?! 😆...

"Abhishek", "Come, use me, Chashmish", he whispered seductively.

He got her to do all that so she can do what he wanted off her, something he may wanted her to try and for himself to see her dominating him but it never took her that long to get him back on it 👍🏼 😆 and she wanted to try this time too something that she knows he would want and enjoy also he has tried to before. At the same time I like how you mentioned she wasn't comfortable before marriage trying this because it is in character, I feel...

All this stood out for me...

My Abhishek was back

Finally we were one and I knew it was forever!

"I missed you so much", he sighed several minutes later as we cooled down in each other's arms.

"Don't ever walk away from me, again", I said adjusting my head on his chest further.

"Do you think I ever wanted to?",

"You wanted an identity for our relationship. And I had no identity for myself. I couldn't have given what you wanted at that time. .

And eventually I discovered music was the way I could achieve it. And then you came to my life. And I grew fond to you beyond measure. But I couldn't give you what you wanted two years ago. I worked day and night, Chashmish, worked on every note a 100 times to give my best. And after over a year, we had an album in hand and they launched me. You know the day my album was launched was the day I missed you the most. I wanted you to be by my side, but I didn't want to approach you, until I earned success, until my dream came true, until I knew my album would be a hit.

Because I was not only achieving my dream for myself anymore, I was achieving it to attain you. I was going to treat myself with you the day I achieved my dream. And once I was successful you know what happened, I got Daadi to get us married, but it took me a while to convince her too to make her believe in my choice", he explained.

Why did it took him to convince Daadi to believe in his choice?!...

"Abhishek, how I wish I was with you when you achieved your dream. I am so sorry, I troubled you like that", I hugged him.

"Hey, I am the one to be sorry. I was the one to walk away. I hope you will be able to understand me for it and forgive me. But you know may be it was required to get us where we are today. But do you know something? I knew I will get you back. I knew you would wait for me. I knew you would never stop loving me", he said smiling.

"Of course I wouldn't have allowed you to become someone else's, Chashmish. But before that you would have come to me. I am 100% sure you would not have married anyone else.", he pulled my cheek.

"You trust me so much, you believed in our relationship so much?", I held his face.

"Of course... I don't know what it was, I just had faith in us", he sighed.

"May be you were right. If you were to meet me on that restaurant date you had given me, that Tuesday, remember.. I would have requested you to take me back, live in, live out, whatever, because I couldn't live without you anymore", I admitted.

"And I was dying to have you back in my life, Chashmish", he kissed me.

"I love you", I said kissing him back.

"I love you too. And I want to make love to you again", he whispered between the kisses, as his unabashed hands were all over me, again.

And I melted into him, yet again.

It was happy love!

THE END

I love everything about this chapter. But I wanted to quote some of your stuff and ask questions in grey. Also in blue which has won me and the blue underlined has won me the most. I know kind of cheezy 😆...But you made me feel better 😊...

I love the faith he had in their love and in his love. I loved the fact he fulfilled his dream for her and for their future. I like the fact that he knew her inside and out. I like her restlessness about their future. I like how she cared about his career. I like how she lived independently. I like how both made a career. I like how they loved and missed each other. Both characters were so real. I loved them both equally. Thank you for the treat for this fic...

And have a great holiday with all your loved ones 😊...

Edited by Mystery1 - 9 years ago
Mysterious7 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Tia-


Hope the story did not break your heart!:-(


No, no, no not at all...Sad and Happy, it's ending na, for now 😉 😆...
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Posted: 9 years ago
LMAO, Nadia.. the putting on weight thing, I can't answer, it's left to Abhi's taste and your imagination!
Abhi loves Daadi and Aaliyah a lot too, although his love for different people/music etc can't be measured in the same scale and his interactions are different with each of them .. he just loves them all..

Daadi cares about Abhi dearly, but it was mentioned there are differences in opinion about what Abhi wants in life and what Daadi wants for him (similar to how Pragya was initially.. because Abhi was chasing the rainbow indeed).

She still isn't a fan of Abhi's music as such (just not her cup of tea)... and when he said he found a girl for himself.. Daadi was like at least ladki toh meri choice ki honi chahiye thi (let's assume she had some girl in mind from Ludhiana).. lol. but then she figured out she wouldn't find better than Pragya..It took him a little while to convince her he has found the best..
Edited by -Tia- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Tia-

LMAO, Nadia.. the putting on weight thing, I can't answer, it's left to Abhi's taste and your imagination!

Abhi loves Daadi and Aaliyah a lot too, although his love for different people/music etc can't be measured in the same scale and his interactions are different with each of them .. he just loves them all..

Daadi cares about Abhi dearly, but it was mentioned there are differences in opinion about what Abhi wants in life and what Daadi wants for him (similar to how Pragya was initially.. because Abhi was chasing the rainbow indeed).

She still isn't a fan of Abhi's music as such (just not her cup of tea)... and when he said he found a girl for himself.. Daadi was like at least ladki toh meri choice ki honi chahiye thi (let's assume she had some girl in mind from Ludhiana).. lol. but then she figured out she wouldn't find better than Pragya..It took him a little while to convince her he has found the best..


My imagination might take me elsewhere though 😆 I didn't mean as in measurements way. I was just wondering how close he is to them in your story, that's all 😆...

Thank you for replying 😊...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey folks! This is gonna be a gift to Nadia! Will write this up when I fly back to the US.
Edited by -Tia- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow nice. The banner looks quite interesting.
Hmmm..i think this is gonna based on jealousy. 😆(nevermind,my imagination nothing else).
Update soon. Enjoy your journey. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Omg, Tia 😲 You serious?! 😆...
That is sooo sweet. Thank you for the gift 🤗...

Love the banner and Interesting Title...

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