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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello mina di,
This is only for u and for ur writing.
The comments im going to give in this post is for ur wonderful work THE DIVORCE.
At first when i started to read this story i dont have a feeling to read it because i always love to read happy endings and fairytale love stories. But when i started to read it the depthness is so powerful and beautifully portrayed. The way abhi reacts to the divorce papers and towards lawyers suggestion is simply awesome.
And i love the conflict between taliyahs brain and daadis brain in abhi. And when he think back at the time where he leaves pragya at her house, the words u used is so superb. Atlast he gained the courage to find answers from purab is so abhi.

This is for now and when i have time i will post my comment here. This is simply powerful and i bookmarked ur works.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh my goodness!! How sweet! Thank you! It is so wonderful to know so many specific things you liked about the story. The bit with Taaliya vs Daadi in Abhi's brain is one line I really like too! 😳 😆 Thank you again for sharing your thoughts! You are always welcome to PM me directly also 😊 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow wow wow di this story touched my heart its really superb amazing. I read this story many times but still i want to reread this. Its such a wonderful quality about a writer. I really want to quote so many lines like abhis dilemma, his thoughts about suresh are hilarious. Especially when prags said that ma is so mad at abhi and he thought IM MAD AT MYSELF AUNTIJI its so funny. But i am typingin my mobile so i cant type many thins and post it. And i really loved A &P conversation. Pragya is so defensive in her nature and abhi is trying so hard to make her come back to him is so abhi. Then prags slap abhi is so cute pragya will never ever do that in kkb but u made her do it is really nice. Pragyas posseiveness is just like a normal wife have it for their husband. And abhis thought about tanu is the high peak in this story thank u for this wonderful story di.

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