Trials of fate: Abhigya and Rabul FF Part 50 (Pg 35) - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashpat3

why is nobody commenting? is it too boring? 😲


Nope..it's not boring ash !! We like all your stories 😊...
Sometimes due to time constraints, I couldn't comment...don't feel bad dear...always waiting for updates from u😛

Personally I wonder abt your ability of making proper part for all the characters in the story...remembering all persons & weaving story to bring them together is not an easy task .. continue soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: anamika.vg


Nope..it's not boring ash !! We like all your stories 😊...
Sometimes due to time constraints, I couldn't comment...don't feel bad dear...always waiting for updates from u😛

Personally I wonder abt your ability of making proper part for all the characters in the story...remembering all persons & weaving story to bring them together is not an easy task .. continue soon


I understand dear, most people are having the hectic schedule 🥱 so they can't comment
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
This story is damn confusing. Just jo relationships are clear as of now. How do u manage to get so many people in the story and connect them so well hats off for that👏
Well I loved bulbul pragya scenes aww😳 they r so cute sisters. Even I like naina's friendship with pragya👏
I loved how pragya was praised for her work ,she always does everything with perfection😉
So abhi's parents intend him to get married but he doesn't want to😲 surely AbhiGya have a past!😃
Waiting for the mysteries to come out. Even purab's life seems so stuck up.
I particularly liked the scene where the sisters talked of love marriage and arranged marriage. It relates with real life😆
Continue soon and so sorry for the late comments!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aayu27

This story is damn confusing. Just jo relationships are clear as of now. How do u manage to get so many people in the story and connect them so well hats off for that👏

Well I loved bulbul pragya scenes aww😳 they r so cute sisters. Even I like naina's friendship with pragya👏
I loved how pragya was praised for her work ,she always does everything with perfection😉
So abhi's parents intend him to get married but he doesn't want to😲 surely AbhiGya have a past!😃
Waiting for the mysteries to come out. Even purab's life seems so stuck up.
I particularly liked the scene where the sisters talked of love marriage and arranged marriage. It relates with real life😆
Continue soon and so sorry for the late comments!


All the character's life are stuck up and their life will have lot of inner turmoil, the mysteries will come out slowly, this time I promise all characters and all couples will have equal story
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
update the next part Ya soon it's very interesting, better than now a track of kumkum bhagya..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Purab's alliance fixed wid anjali. ...dis was unexpected. ..but it's making me more curious to knw Wats gonna happen next...waiting for Rabul first meeting nw :) may be purab will agree for d engagement just coz of his sisters n dad's pressure. ..😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing uodates , loved it.
Continue soon plz.
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Part 4

Ria takes Bulbul to her house and introduces to her mom

Sakshi : So you are Bulbul? I must say you are the same how Ria told me

Bulbul : Thank you for the compliment

Ria : And now till your work is not done you will stay with me

Bulbul : No I promised di that I will stay on our guest house, please Ria

Ria ; Okay fine (pouts)

Bulbul : don't worry I will meet you everyday. and chew your brains to go around the Mumbai

Ria : I will drop you later at your guest house, now lets go to meet my best friends

Bulbul : Sure lets go

Later in afternoon the best buddies meet at their regular place near a coffee shop.

Ria : Hey guys that is Bulbul, my friend

Anjali : She is that hacker

Bulbul : I am Masters in Computer and call me world's best hacker because there is nothing I can't do

Adi : overconfidence hun

Bulbul : Its self confidence my friend

"Overconfidence can be harmful sometimes" said Abhi

Ria : Bulbul thats Abhi, keychain of our group

Bulbul : so you are Abhi Mehra (shakes hand)

Abhi finds her face familiar and does not shake hands for initial seconds which confuses everybody. Adi signals him by hand.

Abhi : Sorry, yes I am Abhi Mehra

Bulbul : I must say you are charming as Ria told me

Abhi : Beware of me, because no girls in Mumbai can escape from Abhi Mehra's charm

Ria : Stop flirting with her Abhi (irritated) because nobody can woo Bulbul Arora that easily got it

Abhi : By the way where is Purab ?

Anjali : he said he is coming soon

In afternoon Bulbul is walking near the shopping mall while Purab is driving car in a tensed mood after fight with his sister yesterday. Bulbul who is crossing road is hit by Purab's car who drives rashly in a small street. Bulbul falls on ground and flowers from a cart falls on her. Purab comes out of car immediately.

Purab : I am so sorry are you okay? (goes to Bulbul)

Bulbul : Oh my god, if you don't know how to drive and stop driving from tomorrow

Purab : Excuse me, I said sorry na

Bulbul : Sorry? here you broke my leg, there you ruined his flower cart, rich brats like you in India don't care about anybody

Purab : Listen, don't go on my status, and seeing your clothes and behavior it doesn't look like you are from here

Bulbul : So what? at least I am not spoiled brat like you

Purab ; You are crossing your limit now (tries to go close )

Bulbul : Stay away from me, or can you see this pepper spray, it will not take a second to use it on you

Purab : why do you need to keep that spray? your sweet voice is enough for person to go away

Bulbul ; Shut up! I don't have time to argue with you, pray that you never come in front of me or else I will scratch your face

Purab : Ill mannered girl, even I don't want to see your face again (gets in his car and leaves)

Adi : what are you thinking?

Abhi : Nothing, I called dad and tried to explain to him but he gave me only one option

Adi : what?

Abhi : He gave me ultimatum to get either married or come back in London and i don't want to go back there

A girl comes from back and hugs him and it is none other than Naina whom he is supposed to get married.

Abhi : Naina? you ?

Naina : how did you find my surprise?

Abhi : But you went to Pune right? you came back so early

Naina : My work was done and I was missing you so I came back but you are not happy with my comeback

Abhi : No its not that, just got surprised seeing you

Naina ; okay listen dad called you for dinner tonight

Abhi : Okay I will be there

Pragya calls Bulbul and asks her about work

Bulbul : Di, I am missing you so much

Pragya : you know I am your shadow and always with you

Bulbul ; I will start my work from tomorrow

Pragya : don't worry I know my sister is a perfection

Later in evening Sakshi informs Ria about her brother's coming which makes her furious

Ria : I don't care who is coming

"Ria, behave yourself" says Sakshi angrily

Bulbul ; Ria, its okay at least meet your brother for your mom

Ria: but Bulbul

Bulbul : Please, at least sometime keep your anger aside and I will also meet him today

Ria : Fine, I will be right back

Sakshi : Thanks Bulbul for making her agree

Bulbul ; its okay, you know how stubborn she is, it will take time for her to calm down, you just see how she will get melt when she sees her brother

Sakahi : I hope so

Abhi goes for dinner at Naina's house and meets her father who is his dad's friend too

ACP : This is not fair, we live in same city and you don't come at our house for months, your dad will blame us for not taking care of you

Abhi ; Uncle, you know how busy my work is and I have hectic schedule everyday

Sakshi waits for her son Karan to come home but Ria loses her patience when he does not show till late.

Ria : I told you he will not come, its his old habit to cheat us

Bulbul : RIa, calm down he must have got some work

Ria : Work? was it so important that he did not care about mom's feeling, thats why I hate him because he does not respect mom

Sakshi : Please Ria, Bulbul is right he might have some work

"Fine, you stay loyally to your son but mark my words he will never bother about you even if something happens to you" says Ria in rage

Sakshi goes to slap her but is stopped by Bulbul who tells Ria to go in her room.

Bulbul ; Aunty, please don't get dishearten by her words, she is your daughter

Sakshi : I know dear, but I am worried for Ria's anger sometimes, she has so much hatred in her heart

Bulbul :It is all destiny, who knows maybe your family will be reunited again but can I ask you the reason why he left you

Sakshi : their father was against Karan's wish of joining police because he was very worried for him, but Karan took step against his father and left us forever, after that my husband got heart attack, he could not bear the separation of his son, and he also left me and Ria alone

Bulbul ; thats why Ria is always disturbed by his name

Sakshi : Ria hold her brother of the mess and created hatred for her brother

Bulbul : don't worry aunty, Ria might forgive her brother one day

Khanna house

Akira shares her happiness with Purab about the success of group who won for best dancing

Purab : I am tired, i want some rest

Akira : What is your problem Purab? what is disturbing you

Purab : You really want to know, then listen you are my problem

Akira : what?

Purab : You are dad's obedient daughter right but you never explained him to stop brother back, you let this family break but never tried to join it, you promised mom that you will take care of this family and you are asking me why am I behaving like this, you are solely responsible for the condition of this family

Akira : what are you saying Purab? (painfully asks)

Purab : You felt bad right hearing bad about you, and you have not right to tell me anything wrong about me and brother

Akira : and what he did was right, from 15 years of age i am managing dad's business which was brother's responsibilty, did he fullfill his duty? due to both of you brothers, I had to sacrifice my life, happiness everything so I can give you this lavish lifestyle

Purab : He is younger than dad, who does not make mistakes but why would you care, only think about business and your dream and are you trying to show off that you did such a big favor for making dad's business successful and giving his rich lifestyle

Akira : I am showing off, you are forcing me to say this

Purab : you know what, you could never became a good sister nor you could ever win my heart

Akira : You are right but one truth you should know is that you both never understood your sister's pain, I never asked anything from you and Bro but you both considered me heartless (runs away cryingly)

Edited by ashpat3 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Omg how abhi can marry naina 😳
Please make abhi and pragya meet for good.

Thanks for pm and splendid update 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Awesome update. ..
N RaBul first meeting n deir fight...
N my purab is in deep pain...its a Vry different v story n I am luving it 😳
Waiting for the next part nw

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