AbhiGya FF crazy zindagi

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SUMMARY: The tables have turned, After graduating from college abhi got an offer to work at sundara bhojana, Indians top restaurant. while he was on his way, he saw a girl kidnapped, he ran after the car and save the girl, not knowing that the girl he saved was the heirs to indians top restaurant , will abhi ever get a normal job? Will he be able to teach her that the way of life is not through her mothers money. come find out on crazy life


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pragya daughter of the owner, shes very expressive and confident. lets not forget a trouble maker, she hates anyone that interferes in her business and will stop at nothing to get rid of them.

abhi, a young man whose always humble. when he lost his mother he never blamed or hate life for it. instead he understood and move on, he was giving the opportunity to work at sundara, but what he didnt expect was to become the body guard of his boss daughter

other characters will be here soon






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  2. Scene 3&4
  3. Scene 5&6
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Part 1








Sarala was sitting at the dinner table smiling at her guest, "i don't know why shes so late, usually shes always on time" , the guests with rich clothes just smile reassuring her that it was alright. sarla opended her phone and got up " wait a minute, i just have to make a call" she said, when she was out of ear shot, sarla called her daughter, she waited and waited but she didnt pick up. " I swear she will never learn, this is her twentieth marriage proposal and shes ditching it again" she said angry

" calm down, mom, i'm pretty sure she has a good reason for being late", bulbul said

" for how long are you going to take her side" she asked

"for as long as i live"

sarla sighs, " why did you give me two trouble some girls, god", she said while looking up to the ceiling.


Elsewhere, abhi step out of the hospital after visiting his grandmother, he was happy that her health was getting better, after so long. he didnt know what he would do if she had died. after all his grandmother was the one who took care of him and helped him survive. After he graduated he didnt know what to do with himself, if it wasn't for his grandmother advising him to apply at sandara, he would never have been hired.

He was happy that she believed in him, and his skills and was even determined to do his best to aid her. smiling he walk down the streets until he reached the crosswalk. while waiting for the light to turn green a car passed right in-front of him. If it wasn't for his 20/20 vision he would never have seen the girl with her mouth taped, and her hands banging on the window. without thinking, abhi ran after the car. the man who was driving the car saw abhi and nod his head before speeding. "crap he's getting away" he said

abhi search for a short cut before deciding to take that route. He knew their would be a red light soon, so he quicken his speed and reached the other side before the car. panting he saw the car stopped and the mans running out with weapons. they ran towards abhi, trying to harm him, but abhi was quick on his feet. he jab one of the guys in the stomach, and upper cut the next guy behind him. this fight continued until abhi heard someone clapping , and the next thing he knew someone punched him in the face knocking him out.

To be continued...




Preview

Abhi was starting to wake up, while awakening he heard voices around him.

" i think he's waking up"

" i'm sorry mam, i didnt mean to hit him that hard"

"jeesh, i told you guys to take it easy, not try to kill him" she said pouting

He shuts his eyes and opens it again, to see three faces around him, surprise he got up before looking at them " who are you people?", just when he was about to say something else he recognized the girl next to him.



Sorry guys this story is going to be very short, instead of my usual long pages
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start! I am very interested to see what happens next! I love Abhi's character already, Pragya a troublesome girl seems fun too! Great work! <3
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Amazing start .plz do continue soon.
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Part 2



Sarla bites her lip, she was worried that her daughter was in some kind of danger. Usually she would pick up, but she hasn't been picking up any of her calls. Sighing she didn't know what to do. "Bulbul"

"Yes mam"

"Can you take pragya place until she comes" she said

Bulbul frown " but..mam, we should probably wait a little longer for her" she said

"I'm sorry bulbul, we waited enough and these people have been so generous. I just don't understand your sister, he is a nice boy and rich too. Why would she do this to me", bulbul touch her mother's shoulder, before smiling "I get it mam, i will take her place. Please don't be mad at her later on"

"Thank you my child" she said, she drag bulbul to the table, getting the guests attention. She smiles before introducing bulbul. When the guest saw her, they were surprise by her beauty "your daughter is very beautiful, but why does she look different from the picture" the female asked

"Well my eldest daughter is trapped in traffic so she won't be able to make it, so bulbul will take her place" she said, before sitting down, while sitting she noticed their son missing "where is your son?"

"Oh he went to use the restroom, he will be back shortly"

"Ok"

Bulbul was panicking, she seriously wasn't ready for marriage, and she wanted to finish her school before thinking about settling down. She asked to be excuse, and got up. Grabbing her phone she walk away from them to call her sister, "come on Didi, pick up" she said

Elsewhere, pragya was in her hotel room pacing around, "what do we do, what if he's dead. Mam will kill me...maybe we can put him in a sack and you guys dump him somewhere" she said

"But mam, you told us to do it, maybe you should hide him"

"No, I'm too important to go to jail. Besides do you want my mom reputation to be tarnish" she said, the two man thought about it for a second before agreeing, they knew if sarla found out she will faint from obesity, not to mention she would make sure pragya never get out of jail. On second thought, maybe she should find out, they thought, making pragya glare at them "don't even try it" she said scaring them

Just when she was about to suggest they hide him in the closet. They heard a wimp coming from the bed, the two men back away scared for a second. Pragya on the other hand walk to the bed and kneel down.

Abhi on the other hand was starting to wake up, while awakening he heard voices around him.

"He's alive"

"I think he's waking up now"

"I'm sorry mam, I didn't mean to hit him that hard"

"Jeesh I told you guys to take it easy, not try to kill him" she said glaring at both of them

"Well at least you won't be going to jail mam" one of the man said

"What"

"Nothing mam" he said nervously

Abhi shuts his eyes and opens it again to see well. When he opened it for the third time he touch his head trying to remember what happened. "Why does my head hurt so badly" he said, when his vision became clear he saw three faces around him, quickly he sat up "who are you people?" he asked, just when he was about to say something else he recognized the girl next to him. Soon his memories came back, "that's right, you're the girl that got kidnapped"

Pragya bite her lips "well I wouldn't say I got kidnapped, we were just having fun" , abhi confuse continues to watch her " fun... I actually thought you were in some kind of danger, and now because of you, I probably already miss my orientation" he said yelling a little

"Look I never asked you to save me, I just needed to get out"

"Out of what?" he asked confused, pragya smirked before ushering him forward, she leaned like she was about to tell a secret "the thing is, my gangsta boyfriend found out about my marriage and decides to force me to married him. I didn't want it, he kidnapped me" she said sadly "if it wasn't for these guys who saved me, I would have been a gangsta wife" she said

While listening to her story abhi felt guilty, he shouldn't have yelled at her like that, "I'm sorry" he said

"No I was at fault, I should have told them not to hit you"

"Are you gonna press charges on us" one of the man said

Abhi thought about it before saying no, they cheered happily, we'll all accept pragya "could you do me a favor"

"What is it?"

"I don't want to be alone when I explain this to my parents, so could you tag along" she said innocently, abhi being a gentlemen agrees, not knowing what pragya is up too.

To be continued...

Preview

While pragya and abhi were on their way, bulbul phone rang, she was happy to see her sister name pop up, looking at the screen, she was ready to answer the call when she bumped into someone, making them both fall on the floor " I'm sorry" they both said

Scene 2

Sarla raced out of the house, to see pragya. She looks at her mom sadly before running up to her "mam"

"Beta what happened to your clothes"

"I was on my way here, when I was kidnapped", when she said this everyone was surprise

"what... why?...who would do that" she asked confused, as soon as abhi stepped out of the car, pragya pointed at him " he did" she said making everyone turn to look at him. Angry sarla walks up to him and slaps him in the face "how dare you show your face here




why do you think pragya was telling the truth about being kidnapped? who was the man that bulbul bumped into? and will abhi ever get to his job? all these questions and yet to be answered

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Nice update, plz do continue soon.
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Amazing poor abhi stuck with pragya family poor thing get slap slap from her mom
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Part 3



While walking pragya notice her phone vibrating, she quickly opens it to see her sister calling. Cursing under her breath she picks it up. "Yeah bulbul"

"Didi where are you, everyone is going crazy searching for you" she said

"I'm sorry bulbul, I was caught in the moment" she said glancing at abhi, who was walking beside her, " But I'm on my way now" she finished, pragya could hear a sigh from the other end, she paused waiting to hear her sister speak, when she didn't say anything she quickly made an excuse and hang up.

"Who was that?" abhi asked out of curiosity

"It's just my sister, she was worried about me"

See the thing is abhi didn't quite believe pragya story. I mean he had so much questions to ask like why she was banging on the window, if they were there to help her. Why did she said she didn't tell them to kill him? Does that mean she command them to fight me, he thought, he was so busy in his thoughts that he didn't hear pragya get in the car or one of the man's calling her by her last name.

Elsewhere, bulbul tries to reach her sister again to tell her something important, when she bumped into someone. Knocking her phone to the ground, making it break. " are you ok" he said, getting up, bulbul stares at her phone and glares at him " look what you did to my phone, do you know how long it took me to get this American phone" she said brushing his hand aside and getting up.

"I'm sorry, if you want I can pay for it" he said

"No thank you, jeesh I will just have to buy a new one" she said harshly looking at him dead in the eye, the man was looking down, like he got scold from his mom. Since she wouldn't take his offer, he decides to give her his business card. "What is this supposed to do" she said

"I am deeply sorry mam, my company we cell phones and new brands. If you need a new phone we can give you discounts" he said, bulbul stared at the man for a long minute, making him uncomfortable. Then she giggle, and that giggle soon become louder "you should see your face" she pointed out, "you looked so sad like a puppy"

The man was lost for words, he didn't understand what was going on. He knew one minute she was angry at him, but now she's laughing at him. "Why are you laughing? I thought you were mad"

Bulbul stopped her laugh, and return to giggling "I'm not mad, I was just messing with you"

"Why would you do that?"

"Because it's funny" she said, when she was his confuse look she puts her hand on his shoulder "anyway, don't worry about my phone. I have an extra", when she said this she took out the phone and showed it to him, making him understand, " I see", he was about to comment when both of them heard someone calling their name. They both turn to see their mom, rushing to them "bulbul why did you take so long. I actually thought you ran away" she said

"I'm sorry mam, I was talking to this ma-", and she stopped herself when she realize she didn't asked for his name, she turn towards him and asked. He just smiles and said "its purub" surprising them both

"Wait, are you mr and Mrs Khanna younger son" she asked, surprising purab, "yes"

"I thought you couldn't make it" sarla asked

"Well, I decided to finish my job early and come here to see the lucky bride" he said before turning to bulbul "you must be it than", bulbul shook her head and was about to reply when they heard a car screeching.

Earlier with pragya, while the group was on their way, pragya happened to see a sale for shoes. She stopped the car and went in the shop and brought it. This continued like this until they reached a traffic. Hot and sweaty, pragya got out in the middle of the road to argue with the driver before them, saying things like "your driving is blocking the road" and "my grandma drives faster than you", this upsets the man, when abhi saw the huge man stepping out the car, he quickly look at the two mans in the car "aren't you gonna do something"

"no mam, has it under control" they said, abhi turns back to the window to see the man's wife stepping out arguing with pragya, and they both started a verbal fight which led to hair pulling and ripping of clothes. On this hot summer day, abhi had never felt so annoyed, when he went to stopped the fight he was bitten by pragya, accidently scratched by the other women, and thrown by to the ground by both of them. The man that stepped out of the car felt pity for abhi, but was glad that he wasn't a part of it.

Soon the trio heard some people getting out of their car, yelling and beeping their horn. The two man in the car drove next to them and grab abhi and pragya. "let me out, that bitch deserve more beating" she screamed earning a glare from abhi " I think you've done enough for one day", he said sitting their exhausted. "Are you saying it's my fault that this happened" she said, sitting up

"Yes that's exactly what I'm saying. Not only did you cause a fighting scene in the middle of traffic, you made the lady bleed on her lip"

"Next time she won't insults me", when she said this abhi shook his head

Five minute later when they were almost to pragya house, pragya realize there was a car following her. She asked the two mans if they saw it and they look in the mirror and shook their head. Pragya soon recognized whose car it was and gave the guys the signal to drive fast when they reached a corner. Abhi not knowing what was happening had to hold on to something in the van. He almost had an heart attack. "Why are you driving so fast" he screamed, pragya turned and look at him "sorry hero, but its personal reason" she said

They made some turns and dodged traffic, avoiding the red car as possible. Once they were near the house the driver halt the car, making abhi fall and landed on pragya chest. When he was ok, he realize what he was doing and quickly tries to apologized, only to be slapped by pragya "I never knew you were a pervert", abhi rub his cheeks and tried to explain but pragya refused to listen. She turned from him and look out the window to her house, than she got up, before she left she told him to wait there for five minute before coming out the car.

"Why" he asked

"Just wait"


To be continued...




Preview


"you have to believe me i'm innocent" abhi screamed while the cops take him away, pragya avoids his eyes and looks down on the floor, suddenly finding the ground interesting.

they took him to the car and drove away, than sarla took pragya inside to comfort her daughter. After abhi left purab came out, confuse on whats going on. His brother told him he will fill him on what happened later

Scene 2


pragya had a dream, and in the dreaming he saw familiar faces telling her to tell the truth, and that abhi is a good boy


scene 3


sarla walks in the jail asking the cops what happened to the man that was sent their, " mam he was released not to long ago"

"by who?"

"sorry mam i cant tell you" he said, sarla walk out of the jail feeling guilty, pragya who was in the car asked her if he was free now, but sarla refused to speak to her After finding out the truth.


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Aha this Pragya! Just imagining her as a lively trouble maker makes me laugh! Love it!

Aww poor Abhi, he is such a gentleman!

Pragya! Up to tricks again next as well, let's see what happens!

Did Bulbul bump into Purab? Or not?

Can't wait to find out what happens next! <3

Edit -

Oh I didn't see part 3! Yay!

Edited by --simmi-- - 10 years ago
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Okay so a lot is happening and a lot is hidden I feel from part 3? Aww poor Abhi! So who bailed him? Hope you update soon! <3

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