Abhigya OS: A different Valentines - Updated 14/07/2015

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So it took longer than I'd anticipated...but its finally done.
There was an OTP Prompt from Mina on Abhigya/TiSha AT #169 that got this idea stuck in my head and as a challenge I decided to write it in less than 1200 words.

Here is what the original Prompt was:

Imagine Person A of your OTP sitting in a caf on Valentines day, alone. Person B sees them, and, feeling bad for them, decides to sit at the same table as Person A and talk with them. They almost instantly fall in love.


Mina Di here's your OTP Prompt Story :P Enjoy

Special shout out to Dhinglu(Diahh)!! Hope this makes up for not finishing your other request as yet!

And to everyone else who loves Abhigya.

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I did write two separate OS's on the same prompt. Please do let me know which you preferred!


You and Me



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Abhiya OS: When Strangers Meet


She was a lecturer, not a barista and currently that was what she was trying to explain to Bulbul. True the cafe was Bulbul's baby and she would do anything for her sister's happiness but not this.
"Please Di. I just want you to take orders and mind the tills. I'll make the coffees and it's only till Preksha comes in. I'll do whatever you want after di."
It was futile to argue with her. Valentine 's Day meant the cafe was full, but it also meant an emptiness for those that hadn't been so lucky in love. Leaving Bulbul short-staffed was not an option. Sighing, Pragya picked up the apron and order pad from behind the counter and got ready to embarrass herself.
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He had picked a table furthest from the crowd on which he'd carelessly placed the requisite flowers and chocolates. Shying away wasn't a normal occurrence for the rockstar, but for today he wanted the privacy.
Tapping an unconscious beat on the table, he looked at his phone for the umpteenth time since walking into the trendy cafe waiting for her to arrive. She'd been acting strange towards him for a few weeks now, true he wasn't as attentive as before but they were stuck in a rut that he didn't know how to get out of. What he did know was how to pacify her dissatisfaction, which was why he'd come bearing gifts.
He'd been sitting by himself for almost 20 minutes when he heard a voice "Excuse me sir, are you ready to place your order?"
The owner of the voice looked stressed, a nervous smile plastered on her face and thankfully no recognition as to who he was.
"I haven't quite decided what I wanted and I'm waiting for someone so if you could give me some time."
"Not a problem. I'll be back shortly to take your order."
For a moment the annoyance vanished as he watched her fluid gait as she hurried to the counter. Turning back, he checked his phone to see a message flashing:
Abhi I didn't know how to make this easy.
I'm not coming to meet you today.
I want different things in life. Sorry.
As relief washed over him, so did indignation; who was she to dump him?
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She walked back to his table to ask him if he was ready to order. It seemed strange that he'd been waiting for an hour and no one had turned up.
"Sir, your order?"
"I'll have a cappuccino, one sugar, sprinkle of cinnamon and a slice of the double chocolate fudge cake." He replied not looking up from the menu.
Pragya got the dish ready as Bulbul made the cappuccino and noticing that Preksha had walked in she told Bulbul that she'd finish serving this one last customer.
"Here's you go. Don't mind me asking, but your date didn't turn up?"
"No. She messaged to say it was over." He finally looked up to see it was the same woman from earlier. It seemed she'd finished her shift; the apron was gone and she had a purse hanging off her shoulder.
"Do you mind if I sit for a while? I haven't had a break since I started." She felt sad for him, having been dumped on the supposed most romantic day of the year, but she needed to show him the bright side as well.
"Good coffee. You've finished work?"
"Yes. Amazing coffee. Actually this is my sister's cafe. Staff problems so I was helping out."
"That's nice. Boyfriend didn't mind?"
"No. No boyfriend. Plus I think Valentine 's Day is overrated. Expensive gifts, flowers, cards is not the way to show love. What happened to your girlfriend? These were for her?" she indicated at the chocolates and flowers.
"Yes. She was big on gifts. Guess they can go in the bin now. She messaged earlier to say she wanted different things in life."
"Different?" she asked knowing that she was interfering but his voice enthralled her.
"Who knows? It doesn't matter. The spark was lost anyways. Whatever we had between us fizzled out. I'm just glad it wasn't anything more serious." he shrugged and started on the dessert.
Closing his eyes on the first bite of the decadent dish, he pushed it slightly towards the woman whose name he was yet to find out. She'd made him forget his problems and his annoyance at being dumped had vanished.
Pragya, without thinking, took a bite of the cake and mirrored his expression. It was heavenly and the first morsel she'd had since breakfast. Silently they shared the dish savoring each bite, thinking of how to prolong the conversation.
"I'll be right back." She spoke up picking up the empty plate and cup. She noticed that Bulbul had left for her dinner date and Preksha was working behind the counter. She got two more coffees and walked back.
Placing the cups on the table, "Here you go. I'm Pragya. And you are?"
Did she really not know who he was? Wanting to keep identity a secret he replied "Abhi...shek"
"Nice name. I like it. So Abhishek, my advice is plenty more fish in the sea; You're better off without her; You deserve better; She's not worth it...Ummm I'm all out of puns, but I see it has made you feel better."
"Thanks. I think it was the fact that she broke up with me instead of the other way around that's annoyed me."
"Why? A girl can't dump a guy?" She looked genuinely confused.
"No they can. But I'm..." He was not ready to reveal his true status just yet, "different."
"Abhishek, the end is important. You weren't serious about her. She obviously wasn't serious about you. Now you can move on, find someone you really like and give it another shot. Don't waste your time on small things like who dumped who."
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He finally noticed that they were the only ones left in the cafe. They had been so absorbed in talking to each other that the world had taken a backseat. It was getting late and he'd promised Dadi that he'd have dinner with her so even though he didn't want to, he stood up to leave.
"Thank you Pragya. For being you. Don't change." He wrote his name and number on a napkin and gave it to her.
"You too Abhishek. It was nice meeting you. You've made this Valentine's special." She stood up and turned to walk out when he grabbed her hand.
"Here, take these." He gave her the flowers and chocolates. He wanted to say so much more but it was too soon. "I know they were for someone else, but please. I've got to go. I'm meeting my dadi and she's going to be annoyed if I'm late. Call me. We'll catch up." He hurried off.

Clutching her first ever valentine's flowers she smile as she inhaled the sweet scent deciding she would take him up on that offer of catching up.

Edited by MinMinMehra - 10 years ago
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Abhigya OS: You and Me


He had walked in looking for a table. The flowers and chocolates reminding him of the conversation he just had with his now ex-girlfriend. Why she'd waited till Valentine's day to tell him she'd found someone else, he would never know but he was glad that she'd taken the first step. It meant that there was no reason for her to come back to him.
It was at his sister's insistence that he'd taken her out a year ago on the same day. She'd just been dumped by her then boyfriend and had been really upset. He liked her well enough. after all she came home to see Aliyah all the time, but there just hadn't been that spark.
He just wanted to forget that Valentine's day even existed. He wasn't heartbroken. No ways. But it was a very overrated custom which made it impossible to look relieved at being dumped. The lunch bar was full with no empty seats when he spotted a seat across a waifish woman with wild curls and big glasses. He started walking towards her.
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She'd just met with the twentieth potential that her mother had set her up with, who left with the excuse that he had a meeting to go to. She'd gotten tired of telling her that it wouldn't work. No one liked boring plain-jane's like her and she wasn't about to change her whole persona for a guy. She was just debating on whether to just have lunch whilst she still had a table or go back home, when a deep voice asked if he could sit down.
Her gaze shot up to find the owner of the unknown voice, dressed like an advertisement for a high end fashion store. She definitely didn't know him. Voicing her concern,
"Excuse me. I don't even know you? Why do you want to sit here?"
"There's no other seats. The place is full and I want something to eat. Do you mind? Unless you're meeting someone else?"
He hadn't been exactly rude, but he wasn't polite either. Noticing the flower and chocolates in his hand, she thought maybe he hadn't had any better luck than her, although that negated the notion that only plain-jane's got rejected because he looked plain from no angle.
"No that's alright. I was just thinking of whether I should have lunch here or not. You might as well have the table. I'll be off."
"Why don't you have lunch with me. Not like a date or anything, but we can share a table?" He didn't want to sit by himself. Not till he got rid of the gifts that he'd carried in. The last thing he needed was getting sympathetic looks from all the other diners.
That actually sounded like a good plan. She wouldn't have to go home early and explain to her Ma or Dadi why she was back so soon and she could honestly say she shared a meal with someone. Smiling, she nodded in agreement to his suggestion.
Placing the gifts on the table, he appraised the rest of her look. She was...different. She seemed comfortable being in clothes that didn't conform to the latest fashion.
" Hi I'm Abhi." holding his hand out, he introduced himself. Her hand fit against his perfectly as she shook his hand. "Pragya."
"So Pragya, you didn't answer my earlier question. Are you waiting for someone?"
"Not exactly. He came and left. I was supposed to meet a suitor, but he obviously saw this and decided I wasn't what he wanted. Looks matter but I'm not going to change for anyone. Too bad my mother doesn't understand." She didn't realise how bitter she felt at being left yet again till she told him what had happened. Not wanting him to freak out she added, "It doesn't matter. I wouldn't want to be with someone who can't accept me the way I am. Anyways, why are you walking around with a bunch of flowers and chocolates? Are you meeting someone?"
"Actually my girlfriend, ex-girlfriend found someone else. I'm kind of glad. I didn't know how to break up with her." He explained how he knew Tanu and how he'd ended up asking her out and how he couldn't break her heart.
They were interrupted as a waiter came to take their orders. They ended up ordering the same thing from the menu, with her opting for the smaller portion.
For a change sitting with a stranger didn't seem such a chore. Not having the pressure of liking someone for potential marriage made all the difference and she actually relaxed enough to continue having a conversation with him. She opened up and told him more than what most people knew about her.
His thoughts were on the same wave length. He was enjoying himself. He was just rising as a star, gaining popularity and people had started recognising him so it was quite nice to shed the rockstar personality and just be himself. The conversation flowed smoothly from topic to topic and he opened up more about his true self than he normally would.
They had finished their meals and had ordered another round of drinks as they continued chatting. He shared how his Dadi was unaware of his recently ended relationship and how she had started pressuring him to bring home a wife. She sympathised with him, telling him she knew how he felt, as she was getting the same pressure.
Their conversation was interrupted when her phone started ringing. Looking at the screen, she saw it was her mother. Cringing slightly she answered,
"Haan ma?"
"Pragya, where are you? How did you find Sameer? Did you like him? Should I tell his parents that we agree for the rishta?"
"Maa I'll talk to you later. I'm busy." saying that she cut the phone. Sheepishly, she smiled and explained, "Sorry that was my mother wanting to know how Sameer, the guy I was meeting, is? And whether she should say yes for the rishta. God how will I explain to her, that he left citing work and has probably told his parents no already."
"Isn't there a boyfriend or someone you can introduce to her?" he asked curiously. He was trying to be as unobtrusive as possible but at the same time he wanted to find out everything about her.
"Nope. I'll deal with it later. She will hopefully understand and just let it be for a while." Their meals had been cleared and as they continued talking to each other, he opened up the box of chocolates.
Their hands accidentally brushed as they reached into the box at the same time. Her skin tingled at the point of contact and she blushed slightly.
He noticed how soft her skin was and the contact had affected him as well. Their meal was long over, but he didn't want to leave so he talked of random things, till the waiter came to tell them that they were closing to clear up before the evening crowd came through.
Offering her a lift home as they walked out and down the street, he automatically interlaced his fingers with hers. It felt right and sighed when he finally let go to hold open the car door. As he started the engine, he passed her his phone and told her to give him her number, wanting to meet up again.
Waving till the car left, she was glad Sameer left; glad she stayed at the cafe; glad that it was full; glad that they met. She knew deep down that he was the one. Now she had to wait to see if he felt the same.
Abhi on going round the corner stopped the car to message Dadi:
I think I found the one.
Edited by MinMinMehra - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yay :)

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Kahan hai stories?? Kab ayega??
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Nice... I liked it how u did not make confess them on the spot or something.. I like the second one.. I like first one more then you and me... 😊
Edited by deepthi21 - 10 years ago
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Aww Min! Love the second one - detail comment later! :)
Unres - okay so wow Min! Lovely story or stories should I say 😉

The first one was sweet with Pragya making him feel better and all but I loved the second one more.

Both were very nicely written, you told a beautiful story in a short piece. The line where Abhi said 'well i'm different' he clearly didn't enjoy the fact that she dumped him and not the other way around, after all he is Abhi! 😆 So in character!

I liked the second part's end, the way both said 'i think i found the one' Aww!

Lovely stories! You are awesome Min!

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Edited by --simmi-- - 10 years ago
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Hi min! I like both stories..lovely :)
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Awww... Min one humble request... Please change both to two shots?
They are too cute to be left to ones imagination
Please?? Just till they propose or something? I am feeling so nice and warm inside after reading it.. Almost feel like actually believing in love for once
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Amazing!!!
Fantabulous!!!

Awesome!!!

Rocking!!

Bestttesttt!!!


UFF UFFF UFFF Min magic!!!! 👏 👏 👏
MinMin Mehraaa you already know how I feel about these two!! But going to comment here as well coz this is so so so adorbs!!! My favourite is the second one!

UFF I am so glad of Mina di's prompt and even more glad that you decided to give it a shot!! Thank you for this MMM!!! And well yeah these two Definitely make up for my other request-- for now! 😉 I am waiting!!

Lots of love to you MMM!!! And missed you loads!!! ❤️

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