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First of all I love the rate by which this story is going..we have a new update everyday some times two and I woke up to find 2 new updates I feel like I'm in the heaven of fics now 😊
When I woke up this morning and found out that Tia updated and even Afrah added a new chapter I can't say what I felt it was not a good feeling anyway I wanted to go chapter by chapter with the story but then I discovered that this was the best thing that happened to me ..you know how we hate it when they cut the interesting hot scenes in the show? well I avoided that by reading these two chapters together and I was like thank God I missed Tia's update last night 😉
The 2 chapters completed and complimented each other and I have the best time reading them together and I have to comment on them together Tia and Afrah you two are excellent writers and to give us such amazing updates was not a surprise but I have to tell you again and again how I enjoy reading whatever you wrote it always gave me a great pleasure
Tia ..your update was a pleasure to my heart and my eyes ..yes I read it with my eyes ..not the words the scene it self .I was right there staring more than Pragya I had my fair share of ogling and drooling..loved the way you described him and described Pragya's thoughts and feelings ..loved the dupatta move and to make her initiate the intimacy was brilliant I loved it more than having Abhi doing it
Afrah what you did with the kiss scene was amazing..how she was kissing him how he felt how he reacted why he reacted like that all that was brilliant brilliant like I loved it when Tia chose to make Pragya initiate the kiss I love that you chose to focus on Abhi during the kiss ..when he bent his head to spare her from standing on her heels to reach him that was an AWW moment for me..I believe that when Abhi and Pragya finally get the chance to live their love in the show Abhi is going to be a very tender lover so whenever I found a moment like this in a fic it just make me feel warm and so satisfied
and the MU you create at the end of the chapter a true KKB MU and very very genius and you gave our AP a challenge to work with if she chose to but she may surprise us with a new twist it will be great to find out and I'm sure she will do good
AP all the best dear I trust you and I'm sure you will give us a great update
great job so far girls 👏 👏 👏
When I woke up this morning and found out that Tia updated and even Afrah added a new chapter I can't say what I felt it was not a good feeling anyway I wanted to go chapter by chapter with the story but then I discovered that this was the best thing that happened to me ..you know how we hate it when they cut the interesting hot scenes in the show? well I avoided that by reading these two chapters together and I was like thank God I missed Tia's update last night 😉
The 2 chapters completed and complimented each other and I have the best time reading them together and I have to comment on them together Tia and Afrah you two are excellent writers and to give us such amazing updates was not a surprise but I have to tell you again and again how I enjoy reading whatever you wrote it always gave me a great pleasure
Tia ..your update was a pleasure to my heart and my eyes ..yes I read it with my eyes ..not the words the scene it self .I was right there staring more than Pragya I had my fair share of ogling and drooling..loved the way you described him and described Pragya's thoughts and feelings ..loved the dupatta move and to make her initiate the intimacy was brilliant I loved it more than having Abhi doing it
Afrah what you did with the kiss scene was amazing..how she was kissing him how he felt how he reacted why he reacted like that all that was brilliant brilliant like I loved it when Tia chose to make Pragya initiate the kiss I love that you chose to focus on Abhi during the kiss ..when he bent his head to spare her from standing on her heels to reach him that was an AWW moment for me..I believe that when Abhi and Pragya finally get the chance to live their love in the show Abhi is going to be a very tender lover so whenever I found a moment like this in a fic it just make me feel warm and so satisfied
and the MU you create at the end of the chapter a true KKB MU and very very genius and you gave our AP a challenge to work with if she chose to but she may surprise us with a new twist it will be great to find out and I'm sure she will do good
AP all the best dear I trust you and I'm sure you will give us a great update
great job so far girls 👏 👏 👏
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