Thank you for such a great update! I had not had Chance to read and comment on the previous chapter so I'll start with chapter 2 first!
amazing!! Loved how you captures Pragyas feelings when they were in the boat! Poor gal can't catch a break! Oh and she's so selfless! Some thing about her character that can never be changed. Hard to not dislike tanu In this as technically she hasn't done anything wrong so I'm enjoying the different dynamics of this particular set up!
Abhi is being the typical man at this point and putting our poor Pragya in the bloody friend zone!!
Loved this chapter! Really enjoyed the development of the characters and the scenes you have put together to tell their story
Moving on to chapter 3!
So we got a small snippet of the fashion show! Looking forward to Pragyas grand unveiling! I feel so sorry for her feeling inferior! You have got Tanu's character down to. Tee - she is just as selfish as she always was!
All in all excellent updates! It's interesting to see where you go with this as there are aome familiarities with the film but you've cleverly put your own twist on things!! Well done it's wonderfully written! Looking forward to the next part! Xxx
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