Pragya AUs from May 5th Episode

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@putturani

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

So there was SO much potential in both the "I'll tell the world we never slept together scene" at the beginning of the May 5th episode and the closet scene at the end but I personally felt a little disappointed with both. Such a monumental line in the first scene and it was glossed over by the CVs.

And the closet scene too was very problematic. I think she should have rightfully flinched away from him or pushed him away after being slapped by him just the previous day. So decided to write some AUs for both scenes here, please contribute if you have any.

Street scene lines from the episode:

Abhi: I promise ke main tum iss rishte se hamesha aazad kardoonga...aur poori dunya se keh doonga ke hum husband-wife the magar hamare beech koi pati patni ka rishta nahi tha taaki tumhe future main tumhe koi problem na ho

[I promise that I'll free you from this relationship...and I'll tell the entire world that although we were husband and wife there were no marital relations (sexual) between us at all so that you won't have any problem in the future]

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Pragya1:

Steps closer to him until their breaths are mingling

Koi pati-patni ka rishta nahi tha? Toh phir isse aap kya kehte hai? Hamari saasein joh kab ke ek huwe hai? Hamare jaan joh kitne baar ek dusre se jude huwe hai, kya huwa agar hamare shareer ek nahi huwa toh?

[No husband-wife relationship? Then what do you call this? Our breaths, which intermingled ages ago? Our lives which have been bound together so many times, so what if our bodies haven't become one yet?]

Pragya 2:

Accha? Aap dunya se ke dohge aur dunya maan jaayega? Aisi baatein sirf mardon ki zindagi mein chalti hai. Hum aurton ki zindagi mein sab humare baare mein sirf bura mante hai. Jaise ke aap hamesha hamare bura mante hai.

[Really? You will tell the world and the world will listen? Such things only work in a man's world. In us women's world everybody only wants to think the worst of us. Like you always think the worst of me.]

Please add any that come to mind! Those were powerful scenes/lines that will hopefully launch a thousand fics/drabbles/AUs!

Edited by putturani - 10 years ago

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Mina

@-mina-

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

thanks for making the thread rani!

the closet scene:

P: Yeh hi baat aap door reh kar bhi keh sakhte. (You don't have to stand so close to say this)

A: Kyun? Mera paas aane se tumhe farak padta hai? (Why? Does my standing close do something to you?)

P: Mujhe kyun farak padne laga? (Why would it do anything to me?)

Edited by -mina- - 10 years ago

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Mina

@-mina-

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

A: I promise ke main tum iss rishte se hamesha aazad kardoonga...aur poori dunya se keh doonga ke hum husband-wife the magar hamare beech koi pati patni ka rishta nahi tha taaki tumhe future main tumhe koi problem na ho

P: Really? How will you tell the world? Will you make a press-release? Give an interview? To whom and how are you going to explain that this marriage was never real? Don't go causing yourself problems to help me out. No need to change our pattern when everything is ending.

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Mina

@-mina-

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

: I promise ke main tum iss rishte se hamesha aazad kardoonga...aur poori dunya se keh doonga ke hum husband-wife the magar hamare beech koi pati patni ka rishta nahi tha taaki tumhe future main tumhe koi problem na ho

P: Problem? Kaise problem? Aap aise keh denge aur pura duniya samajh jayega ke main shaadi ki layek hi nahin hoon. Hanh, phir koi problem nahin hoga. Good thought.

(What problem? If you say that then the world will readily understand I'm not even worth marrying, Yes, then there won't be any problem.)

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Mina

@-mina-

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

It's just really stunning that he's actually concerned with this aspect of things. Where did that come from?!! Feels totally left field to me.

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@putturani

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -mina-
: I promise ke main tum iss rishte se hamesha aazad kardoonga...aur poori dunya se keh doonga ke hum husband-wife the magar hamare beech koi pati patni ka rishta nahi tha taaki tumhe future main tumhe koi problem na ho

P: Problem? Kaise problem? Aap aise keh denge aur pura duniya samajh jayega ke main shaadi ki layek hi nahin hoon. Hanh, phir koi problem nahin hoga. Good thought.

(What problem? If you say that then the world will readily understand I'm not even worth marrying, Yes, then there won't be any problem.)

A: Kya matlab ki tum shaadi ki layak hi nahi ho? Tumne kaise sab gharwaalon ko apni jaadu mein phas chuki ho. Daadi ki itni khayal rakti ho, bunty aur bubli ke bhi...sirf mere saath tumne aisa kiya

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Mina

@-mina-

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

A: Kyun? Mera paas aane se tumhe farak padta hai? (Why? Does my standing close do something to you?)

P: Hanh, farak padta hai. Aapke pyaar aur aap ki aanewale kal dono Tanu se hai, toh mera pas aane aapka koi zaroorat nahin. (Yes, it makes a difference. Your love and your future are both with Tanu, so there's no need for you to come close to me)

With apologies for my overambitious Hindi 😆

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Mina

@-mina-

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: putturani

A: Kya matlab ki tum shaadi ki layak hi nahi ho? Tumne kaise sab gharwaalon ko apni jaadu mein phas chuki ho. Daadi ki itni khayal rakti ho, bunty aur bubli ke bhi...sirf mere saath tumne aisa kiya

Arre Rani! Your writing voice turned sympathetic to Abhi 😆 😉

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Krishna

@kubare

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

Rani and Mina...loved loved loved reading your AU's...

The thing I found more Problematic was the CV's making Abhi sprout the line "I will tell everyone that we never ever had a real hubby wife relationship...like a real hubby wife relationship just consist of Sex!!!!

And the whole announcing bit of it??? Like he may be an Enuch...but the ppl wont question that but will question her on not even being that attractive that your hubby accepted you??

The CV's truly just sometimes put words in for what??

We already had this talk about him thinking that a real husband wife relation is made behind close doors KC epi...so why bring that up again and all of a sudden???

The closet scene I really did not have that much of a problem with...😆😆😆 and wont have any if tomorrow Pragya bangs that door on his hand...😆😆😆

As for the closet scene...it was the need of the show..and to show us the difference in attitude of then Abhi MMS and Now Abhi...

Her being scared of him why?? Because of that one slap...No...Abhi as a person has never truly been Abusive Abusive with her...the violet kind of Abusive...

This was a one of slap which was more of a reflex thing from him on being hurt made a fool off...(I am not excusing it as I thought it was not needed and still condone it) but shows show such to make the man repent and feel remorse in leisure for that act...am still waiting for him to bang the door on that offending hand 😆

Edited by kubare - 10 years ago

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Mina

@-mina-

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#10

Oh krishu gonna have to disagree with you on slap thing. I hate abhi's violent dialogues and gestures in the past and hold them against him in relation to this. Pragya might not...but I do.

But on announcement thing omg bang on! And WHY did they suddenly have him say this, think about this??? GaHhh driving me nuts wondering! Hehe.