OS : Passionate story

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Posted: 10 years ago
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The OS reflects Dadi slapping Pragya for accusing Abhi being the father of Tanu's child. Abhi with a heavy heart agrees to marry Tanu, will destiny again unite the love birds.

Purab : what are you saying Abhi?

Abhi : I am sure something is cooking in this girl's mind and I will find it what she is upto now

A voice of slap echoes in Mehra house

Pragya : what happened dadi? you are not able to hear the truth na

Dadi : how can you even think this filthy

Pragya : when your grandson did not feel guilty why should I feel bad saying it

Abhi : ENOUGH! Pragya, shouted

Pragya stares at him

Abhi : what are you trying to prove, you rejected me, fine but you cannot talk to my dadi like that

Pragya grabs Tanu's shoulder who is standing in corner and brings her in front

Pragya : Isn't she one because of whom you betrayed your family?

Abhi : Tanu, what is all this?

Tanu stammers and is scared to tell the truth

Dadi : Abhi, what is all this going on

Pragya : Dadi, you will get to know soon, and you (goes to Tanu) why are you so quiet, that day you were so much confident that Abhi want to live with you and he will marry you for the sake of you and your child, right

Abhi and everybody is shunned to hear it

Pragya : before I open your books of evil deeds, tell the truth

Tanu ; She is right, I am pregnant with Abhi's child

A hard slap echoes in the Mehra house, Dadi raises hand on Abhi when he confesses everything

Dadi : Now that you created this mess, you solve it by your way, you don't deserve girl like Pragya

Abhi : I know dadi (looks down)

Dadi : I am sure you know what you have to do next

Abhi decides to marry Tanu for the sake of his child.

Pragya starts packing her backs when Abhi comes in and begs for forgiveness. For the first time he ever saw a rage of anger in her eyes with lot pain she hide other day. She grabs his collar and burst out on him

Pragya : Do you know I never asked for big dreams, when my engagement was broken I closed all the doors of my heart

Abhi is listening to the pain of such a kind girl whom he tortured to the core

Pragya : When your dadi came to my house with the proposal, she wanted a middle class girl for you who can bring happiness in your life, that time even I realized that even I deserve to be happy once in life (cries soberly)

Abhi also get into tears hearing her plea and looking down cannot face her eyes who has endured so much pain due to him

Pragya : You got only one thorn when I rejected your proposal, did you even realize how did this thorn pained me till now, since that marriage night, I tried to hate you to the core but you did not let me hate you and made believe me in love again which I never wanted to come again in life (tightly grabs collar), during that promo shoot I felt like all my dreams came true but when Tanu told me that she is pregnant I came to my sense that I am never designed to be your love

Abhi does not say anything as his heart his broken into small pieces

Pragya : divorce papers are on table , congratulation for your marriage

Abhi felt somebody has stabbed a big dagger on his heart and he lost his world. He holds her hands when she is about to leave

Abhi : Before you leave, I want to tell you the last truth that I might be marrying somebody else but my heart will always beat for you and you are taking my life and happiness with you

Pragya drops her back taken aback by his words but stay cold hearted and sticks to her decision

Abhi : Nobody will ever take that place in my life, I will not tell you to stay back because I might not deserve to be loved by anybody (Says with a heavy heart)

Pragya : take care of yourself (leaves)

Purab sees Pragya outside the room when she is leaving

Pragya : dadi, I am sorry if I ever hurted you

Dadi : I should be the one to ask for forgiveness, but i have no words to say to you

Pragya : Dadi, I do not blame anybody for my state except myself, anyway you take care of yourself

Purab enters Abhi's room and finds his friend's hand with lot of blood who injured his hand with the bottle

Purab : Abhi, what is wrong with you? are you crazy

Purab tries to put first aid on his hand

Abhi : this injury is nothing that i caused to that innocent girl Purab, I broke her all hopes and desires (says devastatingly), I just punished the hand which raised on her face

Purab : Abhi, what do you think, hurting yourself will solve all your problem

Abhi : then what should i do Purab (says angrily)

Purab : Now that you have responsibility you will have to fulfill it, you cannot ignore it, I know what you are feeling. if I had not forced you the other day then the situation would have been different for you

Abhi : No Purab, you are right, maybe I am just born to do all my duties and not deserve happiness

Purab gets completely emotional looking at his friend's breakdown

Arora house

Bulbul : Di, I know you are hurt after all this but how will you live without jiju

Pragya ; I will live just how I was leaving like before marriage, but this time with my love's memories

Tanu is celebrating her victory at her house but Alia gets furious at her

Tanu : Finally I have achieved what is mine, why are you so upset Alia

Alia : because of you my brother is in state today, because of your lie

Tanu : Sometime a small lie can become a big benefit

Alia : My brother has become an insult in front of his own family

Tanu : well, if he would have agreed to marry me earlier he would have not even face this, but I will handle him don't worry

Alia : Now listen to me, because of this if mine and Purab's relationship affects then I will not spare you

Abhi talks to Tanu's parents about their marriage and fix their engagement and marriage dates. Abhi talks to Pragya's picture

Abhi : I wished if I could ever give you the happiness you deserved but I know you were better off without me

Purab ; Abhi your state is killing me right now

Abhi : what do you expect it to be, didn't you say that day Pragya loves me that much, you were right she made her image bad in front of dadi to make my way easier to get married to Tanu

Purab's POV : I feel that destiny was not with you that day but I know this time your luck will come back to you

Tanu comes to see Abhi who is depressed in thoughts

Abhi : what do you want to talk about

Tanu : I know what you are worried about but don't worry everything will be fine after marriage

On the engagement day Pragya shows up and congratulate both of them at Mehra house

Pragya : hey, why are you so shocked, I came here to congratulate you both, Tanu I have a best gift for you

Tanu : what are you upto now

Pragya : have patience,

Everybody is confused when Pragya calls the doctor who checked up Tanu other day making her scared

Tanu ; what is going on

Bulbul : Tanu, you consider yourself to much smart but you don't know who you have messed up with

Pragya : how smartly you came into my trap

Purab : di, why are you making riddles

Pragya : Okay, let me break up the suspense, doctor can you please do the honor of telling the truth

Doctor : Tanu came to my clinic few days ago and told me to make a fake report of pregnancy

Everybody is astonished to hear the bitter truth that how low can a girl stoop for her greediness'

Doctor : she is not pregnant

Tanu ; Abhi, she is lying, Pragya must have bribed her

Bulbul : you are right, but one difference, you bribed her for telling lie and we bribed her to tell the truth

Pragya shows everybody a video that she recorded when Tanu was talking to doctor during her last meeting with doctor

Pragya : shocked (says smilingly) I might be not allowed to come inside but I recorded this conversation

Dadi : then why did you create a big chaos

Flashback

Pragya : doctor, I heard the conversation with Tanu the other day, now you have to choose if you want save your license or money

Doctor : what do you want from me

Pragya tells the doctor to call Tanu again and make her confess everything

Flashback ends

Pragya : Dadi, when I heard her conversation with Alia the other day I left, I made a plan by telling doctor to call her at hospital and recorded their whole talk

Tanu's mother disowns her for creating a disgusting plan

Abhi :Till yesterday I was cursing myself for ruining your life but I know it was not your fault that I brought you into my life but before I kick you out just leave from here

Tanu : Abhi, please listen to me, I did all this for us

Abhi : don't make me lose temper, just get out from here

Later at night Abhi finds Pragya sitting near the pool side

Abhi ; I know you are still angry but if you feel if you can give me one chance then I will think I still have place in you heart, rest is your decision

Pragya does not say anything, Suddenly it begins to rain , Abhi starts leaving when Pragya hugs him from back

Abhi turns around and looks at her eyes full of red. She starts to hit him

Pragya : you are so bad at confessing, you call yourself a rockstar, and don't know how to propose your wife

Abhi : It hurts, and don't insult my profession

Pragya : why should I not, you call me boring but you are the most unromantic one who cannot confess in this beautiful rain, it is not easy to get rid of me this easily

Abhi : wait I will show you (runs after her)

After some light moments both share a passionate kiss in rain

Edited by ashpat3 - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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aww!! awesome fic ash! my favourite bit is that even tanu's mom is disgusted by her plot, haaye. so many good moments here, emotional dialogues and that lovely ending. thank you for posting!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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AWW AAASH! *hugs*

You fulfilled one of my visions on how Ta~nu will be kicked-out! That was was GREAT!!! Daadi slapping Abhi was AWESOME, too! Reality check, Bro! You need it like WHOA! Smart!Pragya - can we have this plan cvs?!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww Ash I would love it if the same happens in the show! I liked how they confessed in the rain just liked Pragya rejected him in the rain on the show, a better memorie replaced it! <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome dear
Loved it sooo much.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Such a good story! Definitely feel like you're airing a lot of people's frustrations with your concept! I hope Tanu gets similar treatment in the show!!! Really enjoyed reading this. Thanks x
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Purr-fect! 😳 Fuggi revealed Tanu's truth to everyone. AbhiGya together. Like it :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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ash, its a nice story.
pragya wow such a smart, pragy's teasing abhi for confession it so good

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