An Abhigya SS:Birthday Surprise- For my Abhi ! - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: syazaibrahim

Please continue! It sounds interesting! :)


Thanks ! Hope you are finding it okay enough :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -kanishka-

Welcome to the forum dear and I'm glad u r posting yr story here..
Nice preview
Cont. soon



Thank you very much for the encouraging comment .hope you like the story :-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part Four

Now the only person remaining to be found is Vinay.. And no one knew how to contact him.. Last thing they knew was his doing his MS in Wisconsin . And this is when Pragya suddenly remembers that she has a friend Ramesh who also studied in Wisconsin around the same time as Vinay.So she tells them she will try her luck and calls Ramesh who has now settled down in Delhi after his MS there.

Pragya and Ramesh are very good friends and talk for a while about their respective families and then she asks him if he happens to know a Vinay Jain from his college. After thinking for a while Ramesh recollects that Vinay was his senior and that they have interacted couple of times for events in college.All of them are really happy hearing this as they are closer to finding Vinay now.

Pragya requests Ramesh to try getting Vinay's contact details and also where he is currently.Ramesh says he will try his best as some of his friends are still in contact with seniors who are Vinay's friends. Pragya thanks Ramesh for the favour and asks him to call her as soon as he gets to know anything about this. Ramesh says he will and they hang up.

Pragya and Purab get Anu's and Rini's numbers from Anu and give her theirs and decide to keep each other informed of the plan through phone next week. Pragya says she will inform them once Ramesh gets back about Vinay and then they will plan on how to proceed further.They leave the cafe and Pragya goes to Purab's place along with Purab and Bulbul and is all excited that she succeeded in finding two out of his three friends.She leaves for home after thanking Purab and Bulbul for the help.

Pragya on the way home thinks - "Just few days Abhi, you will meet your best friends "😊

After reaching home Abhi and Pragya have their usual nok jhok for sometime and after dinner Pragya gets a call from Ramesh. Seeing Abhi in the room she goes out and talks to him and gets to know that one of Ramesh's friends had Vinay's number and gets the number from him. Pragya is very happy that her plan is going to succeed and thanks Ramesh.She then calls Purab and shares the good news with him and gives him the number asking him to call Vinay as Abhi was there and she can't stay out for long as he might get suspicious.

Abhi comes out of the room to see to whom fuggy is talking to for so long (😉 ahem) just as Pragya cuts the call and turns with a big smile and finds Abhi there.

Abhi gets suspicious about why she is smiling so much and with raised eyebrows teases her "Oye Fuggy ,boyfriend ka phone tha Kya?"
Pragya who is not sure if Abhi had heard her conversation with Purab gets all nervous that she doesn't reply immediately to Abhi's question and keeps staring at him . Abhi decides to check for himself as to why she is so nervous and tries to grab the phone from her . She loses balance and just as she is about to fall he catches her and *Allah Waariyan* happens.

Pragya comes out of the eyelock first and then says "I had left my wallet in Bulbul's place and when I called Bulbul sometime back she wasn't home and she couldn't talk because of the disturbance in the line so she called me now to call Purab and tell him that he had to keep my wallet safe and..."

Abhi keeps his index finger on her nose -the pause button and says "Chup meri maa! I was just kidding .how much you talk !" and walks away muttering "What do you eat to gain so much strength to keep bak-bak ing fuggy"..

Pragya lets out the breath she has been holding and thinks "Phew that was close! but Bach Gayi 😃" and does a mini dance in her head and goes to sleep.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part Five

The next morning Purab calls Pragya to inform her that he succeeded in talking to Vinay who is now in Dubai but is fortunately coming to India next month to meet his family and he was only too happy and excited to meet all of them.
Pragya then has an idea and she asks Purab " Acha Purab listen, won't it be nice if we could get whatever pics you guys took during that time and make a scrap book sort of thing and give it to him?. All won't have all the pics right? So it will be kind of a memory book and we can add all comments beside every pic about when that happened and something special about that . What do you think?"

Purab :"Di I think Abhi is lucky to have you in his life .You are the best Di. This sounds great . Let's talk to those three and see what they have to say"

Abhi has a concert the next day so he is out in his studio practicing and so Purab and Bulbul come to his place and they decide to have a Skype call with Anu,Rini and Vinay. After letting them know about Pragya's plan ,all find it an awesome idea and agree to start hunting for pics . Fortunately for them Vinay was always the techie and he made sure that there was a backup of the pics they took and stored it online to be retrieved later. So they found most of the pics like that and Anu and Rini decide to go to their parents places to find old albums that they had.

Finally they manage to find quite a number of pics and along with the comments they decide to add for the pics ,send them to Pragya. Pragya,Purab and Bulbul then get the pics printed,arrange and stick them in the Scrap book and get it ready.

Pragya is proud of her idea as the scrap book turns out to be excellent and she is sure Abhi will love it .She asks Purab to keep it in his place as she couldn't risk Abhi seeing it if it was with her in their room.

Abhi's concert goes well the next day and this time Anu,Rini and Vinay make it a point to watch it(on TV this time and though Anu can go to the venue she didn't as she can't risk meeting Abhi there right?😉) and is proud of their friend.

Time flies and finally after all the planning and waiting and the excitement ,it was the day before Abhi's bday and Vinay and Rini come to Mumbai from Dubai and Bangalore respectively. Anu makes them stay in her place and they have one amazing dinner with loads to talk about and they are really eager to meet their Abhi the next day. They are all too happy that Abhi has found someone as sweet as Pragya as his life partner .

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part Six- Last Part

It is the Rockstar's b'day and Fuggy makes all his favourite dishes.The plan is that Aliya will take Abhi out to their favourite restaurant for lunch in the afternoon and then to their favourite place to hangout in,one that they always go to whenever they both are free,from the time they moved to Mumbai. By the time they come back , the trio was to come to Abhi's place and wait for him and surprise him .

Things go according to plan and Aliya makes Abhi come with him.Though Abhi wants fuggy to come along (which makes Aliya and Purab nervous as their plan can't fail) fuggy manages saying she has a mild headache and would like to sleep for a while and that they should have some bro-sis time as it's been long since they went out. Abhi asks her to take care and leaves hoping she will be better by the time they came back.

The friends come in the evening and after a while all of them hear Abhi's car in the driveway.All lights are switched off. Abhi enters and is puzzled to see no lights and asks "Hey Aliya power cut hai kya? Par we have generator na? Robin! Robin kahan ho tum ? Fuggy! Ab tum kahan ho?? Oh Aliya! fuggy wasn't well na and now light is also not there oh no !" And before he could continue his bak bak all lights are turned on and he is momentarily stunned at the sight before him with all shouting'SURPRISEEE'

And there in front of him stand his most favourite people in this whole wide world- Dadi,Rini (one gentleman beside her,probably her husband) ,Anu(with a gentleman and a kid ), Vinay,Purab,Bulbul,Aliya, and of course his Fuggy . He thinks he is dreaming and pinches Aliya who is standing beside him to check if it's real. "Bhaiii Kya kar rahe ho aap?! Aahhh!"
Everyone laughs at the typical Abhi they have known who hasn't changed one bit even after becoming the rockstar that the nation loves😆

His friends run to him and they have a group hug ,just like old times and Abhi finally realises that they are here and has happy tears .Seeing him Pragya has happy tears too and she thanks god that her plan succeeded . She then asks Purab to get the scrap book and all of them gift that to him. Abhi is overwhelmed with all this and he is not able to express what he feels.

He finally manages to ask, "How did this even happen?!"

And then all take turns to explain how Pragya made it happen-starting from Purab,Bulbul(about the initial plan) Anu(about how they got her number from Radhika),Rini(about how Anu called her),Vinay(about how Pragya bhabhi's friend Ramesh got his number) and Aliya about Pragya bhabhi's plan to take him out the whole afternoon so that they can execute the surprise properly.

Abhi couldnt describe what he felt at the moment when he sees Pragya standing there with a broad smile, looking at him trying to digest all this information at once, but he was sure it wasn't just friendship.He was reminded of all the moments they shared together right from their marriage ,how she took care of all his and his family's needs and was always there whenever he needed her,all their *Allah Waariyan* eyelocks and now how she managed to fulfill even that one missing thing in his life-his friends Rini,Anu and Vinay ! He realises that he actually fell in love with his selfless fuggy and as Dadi always kept reminding him ,her selection can never be wrong.

He gets up and slowly goes to fuggy and says "I really don't know what I did to get you in my life.. You have always been there for me and I am sure you will continue to be there. I promise you from now that I will fulfil every small wish of yours and keep u happy always. I love you Pragya and thankyou for such a wonderful surprise. This is by far my most memorable birthday" .

Pragya is overwhelmed to hear that her Abhi loves her and has happy tears .She wants this moment to last forever. She says "I love you too Abhi,always have and always will" and they hug each other.

All friends whistle and cheer for them as they are happy that Abhi has found such a lovely wife .

Abhi then talks to his friends,their spouses ,plays with Anu's kid for a while and they all take a big group pic and lots of selfies😃

Rini: "Guys you know what? I am reminded of the movie 3 idiots when I think of us. Atleast there, Aamir Khan was a scientist and its okay if people dont know him by face and so his friends not knowing it was him was acceptable but here,this Abhi boy is a celebrity with a nation wide fan following and still we managed to not notice that till now . We are the real 3 idiots!😃"

All laugh at that and they continue to have one wonderful evening,all thanks to Fuggy👏

And this is how Abhi and Purab vowed to stay in touch with their friends forever from now and not to let go of the wonderful opportunity that Pragya created for them.

Abhi and Pragya start their new phase of being lovers from best friends and all live happily ever after 😃😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey Guys!!
So we have come to the end of my story. Hope you find it a good read. Forgive me if you find it boring and I will try to improve the next time I write something ! Cheers 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey I liked your story very much.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Harini7

Hey I liked your story very much.


Thankyou very much :)!
Edited by anilu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice story...
Can't believe it was your first one... It was amazing.👏
Really hope to read more from you ...😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: anushka12345

Very nice story...

Can't believe it was your first one... It was amazing.👏
Really hope to read more from you ...😃



Wow thank you so much :-) check out the link in my signature :p I am writing some more currently :-)

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