Abhigya & Rabul FF : Life is a race Part 8(pg 8) updated - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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@Ash awesome part continue soon yaara 👏👏
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Great start 👏
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow new upd
Thanks for pm ash
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks guys for your lovely comments 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Something different and interesting, will be looking forward how it upfolds!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ritzee967

Something different and interesting, will be looking forward how it upfolds!!

Thanks, I will try to update it as soon as i can since i have other two stories too, there are few entries left yet before the real story starts 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 2

A girl jogs near the beach listening music with her headphone and is doing some kind of yoga. Somebody parks his bike on near a car parking. While Abhi tells the person to move his bike as it his parking. The person removes his helmet, It is none other than another charming personality named as Samarth who refuses to move his bike. People gather around when both of them argues.

Abhi : This is my parking

Sam : I cannot see your name anywhere, can anybody see it

Abhi : For your kind information I reserved this parking before you came

Sam : But now you can find another parking for your car

Abhi : Don't mess with me, you don't know me

Sam : are you a superstar? you don't look like

A small fight ensues between both of them when Sonia comes and stops the fight

Sonia : stop it, what is going on

Both of them are called to principal Saxena's office

Saxena : dishum dishum, I know boys love to fight when they have to show their strength , right

Sam : right Sir

Saxena : fighting, and everything else is against rules, now who will do the honor to tell me that what is the reason for this famous fight for the very first day

Abhi : Sir, he took my parking

Sam ; Is that your dad's parking

Abhi : Actually it is, the half college is built by my dad's trustee

Saxena : Okay, enough now, shake hands like gentleman come on

Both of them shake hands with tensed face

One endearing personality comes to college when all girls drools at him. Abhi plays basketball in the court when the ball is about to hit somebody but the guy catches it named Purab Khanna.

Purab : watch out dude

Abhi : Oh, sorry, are you here for practice

Purab : No, by the way I saw your performance yesterday. must say multitalented guy you are

Abhi : Thanks, but I am only born to be a basketball champ

Purab : I am Purab

Abhi : I don't think I need to tell you my name, Abhi

Later Sonia's roommate does not show up making her worried

Bulbul : what happened

Sonia : Nothing, I heard that warden is very much strict and punctual and my partner did not show up

Pragya : what is her name

Sonia ; I think her name is Purvi, I mean we were supposed to be in the hostel till evening

Later in the evening all the girls in the hostel come down at lobby for the meeting while Sonia still waits for Purvi. While warden comes and everybody gets scared hearing her sterned voice and there is silence.

Warden looks around and starts calling out the name and realizes one absence when suddenly a girl jumps in with a loud voice which makes everybody shocked. She tells her name Purvi

Purvi : I am so sorry, I am late (says smilingly)

When nobody responds she asks whats wrong

Sonia signals her to be quiet when Warden stares at her

Warden : If your comic commentary is finished can I say something

Purvi ; sure, its your mouth you can say whatever you want

Bulbul : this girl messed up with the warden very first day

Warden : I want to inform all of you that there are certain rules to be followed if you all want to live here

Purvi : obviously we will follow rules

Warden : 1st rule when I am talking nobody should say in between

Everybody looks at Purvi with confused face

Warden : Unless there are certain circumstance you have to inform me, everybody should come back to hostel before 10:30 and if you are late then you will be given warning first and should be taken seriously, all lunch and dinner will be served at scheduled time, is that clear?

Everybody nods

Warden : One last thing, I do not want any kind of loud music, party in this hostel and I want serious discipline here and whenever any problem occurs I expect you to inform me or any other staff, you all can leave

All the girls leave quietly

Sonia and Purvi goes to their room as well as Pragya and Bulbul

Bulbul : that girl is the one who is not scared of warden

Pragya : I know, she seems little bit overconfident

Sonia : I am Sonia, where were you

Purvi : Hey, I was stuck on the road and I woke up so late this morning after my jogging

Sonia : I hope you remember that we are in college now, thats why I am telling you don't mess with warden or she will throw you out from this hostel

Purvi : why are you so scared of her? everybody looks strict at first meeting and then they seem to forget it

At night Pragya opens the window and feels some fresh air

Bulbul : what are you looking

Pragya : Dreams?

Bulbul : what?

Pragya : You know I have only one dream to reach those stars, and I know I will do it one day

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Ash I love this story! One of my fav by you! Abhi is always Abhi na! Nice end! Pragya sure will reach them stars one day! <3
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Nice update, initial part totally reminded me of SOTY, like especially the dialogue half of the college is made by my dad's money, but then I guess SOTY can be only most inspirational story behind modern day Indian college prologue, okay so here Abhi is family man, like he has parents , good!

Finally Purab Khanna made entry..
Purab Abhi will become early friends, I guess, both are showing sorts of open hands towards each other, rather than any enmity. Affcos Purab is a like little sorted out types, doesn't prick fights in ego issues, so Abhi won't have problems in adjusting with him.


Purvi, warden drama, plus all the girls getting some rules for being there, total college stuff and is refreshing to imagine our all the girls adjusting in that environment.

Over all the youthfulness in the plot is endearing, really looking forward, how these characters who have just got introduced will mingle up with each other lives...
Edited by ritzee967 - 10 years ago
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Part 3

Abhi finds his room partner is none other than Purab. Both of them gets happy to be each other's partner

Next day everybody with a new ray of hope attends first day of college.

In hostel

Pragya gets ready at 7 am and does her prayer as usual, she hears Bulbul's alarm who is in deep sleep. She tries to wake her up and starts leaving for her class. Sonia also gets ready and sees Purvi still sleeping.

Bulbul and Purvi suddenly wakes and is shocked to see time

Purvi : Oh god, how can I be so late for the first day

Outside the college Pragya meets Sonia

Pragya : where is Purvi

Sonia ; I don't know when I left room she was still sleeping

Pragya : I hope these two are not late for class today

While Pragya clashes onto somebody and her papers flew, she is about to fell down when a strong hand holds her back none other Abhi. mesmerized by beauty of simplicity and gorgeous face he ever saw before.

Pragya : thank you

Abhi helps her pick up her paper and looks at the innocent eyes. Both of them interrupted when the bell rings. Pragya goes to her class leaving her pendal on floor which is noticed by Abhi.

Purab, Bulbul and Sonia are in same class. Bulbul quickly takes a seat in the class before the professor comes in. She sits near Purab when she sees there is no other seat available. Purab looks at her confusingly.

Sonia : where were you

Bulbul : Sorry, actually I woke up late again,

Purab : If you are so fond of coming late then why don't you join in military. you will wake up at 4 everyday

Bulbul : I am sorry, what are you trying to say

Purab : No I mean there are lot of people in this college who does not like to wake up early

Bulbul : I am an athletic not a army officer

Purab : Athletics uses their body more than mouth

Both stops arguing when the professor enters, Professor Deodar

Deodar : Class, I am your professor for economics

Abhi, Pragya, Sam and Purvi gets into same class. Sam and Abhi confronts again each other

Sam : don't think that if that day we shake hands we can be friends

Abhi: Our thinking are so similar, wow, I can say that same thing

Everybody settles down when the Professor enters the class with a stern voice. Abhi watches Pragya entering the class and sits across her seat. While the Professor comes in and starts to check the attendance. Purvi runs when the Professor Shukla calls her name.

Purvi ; Sorry Sir

Purvi takes her seat near Sam who sees her panting

Sam : take a deep breath and drink water

Purvi : Thanks, thank god I am saved

Sam : madam, not saved, because I heard he is the strict professor you will ever meet in this college

Purvi : WHAT (shouts)

Everybody looks at her surprisingly including Professor ,

Shukla : do you have any problem

Purvi : No problem Sir

Sam tells her to keep her voice slow

Purvi : are you trying to scare me

Sam : don't worry, I am sure this year your voice will definetly slow down till you finish this class

Shukla : Before I start I want to let you all know that I want total silence in this class and I do not want any type of shouting here, is that clear?

"Yes Sir" voice of students says

Professor Deodar gives tasks to the whole class for a project with a partner

Bulbul ; Sonia, how will we know who is our partner

Purab : I think you should get your ear checked

Bulbul : don't try to mess with me

Sonia : there is a list over there, lets go check

Buibul finds that her partner is none other than Purab making him shocked

Sonia : what happened?

Bulbul : I don't know who is Purab Khanna

Purab puts cotton in his ears and tells her he is Purab

Bulbul : why did you put cotton in your ears

Purab : because I do not want to become deaf at young age

Bulbul tries to hit him with book but Sonia stops her. After both class leaves Abhi tries to go to talk to Pragya but she leaves before he calls her

Purvi : Pragya wait where are you going

Pragya : I am going to library why

Purvi : nothing I was bored, and I don't want to go to canteen alone, do you want to come with me

Pragya : Sure, lets go

Sonia : Hey girls, how were your classes

Purvi : why do I meet strict people always

Sonia : So that you keep control on your mouth

Pragya : I think she will definetly do that because she tried to mess up again with professor

Purvi ; where is Bulbul

Sonia : She has meeting of hockey

Purvi sees a flyer and gets excited about it

Pragya : what is it

Purvi ; Musical show next month are the audition

Sonia : what are you saying

Purvi : Oh my god so exciting, I will be right back

Pragya : I am going to library I will see you both in evening, bye

Sam meets Sonia in cafeteria

Sonia : Oh hi, don't you have any work today

Sam : No, by the way that girl is amazing

Sonia : who purvi?

Sam ; yeah, I mean she seems tuff

Sonia : You going on wrong way, she is very dangerous

Sam : Leave that, tell me when is your sister coming

Sonia : I told her to finish the last year in this college, you know how stubborn she is

Bulbul goes to the meeting of her hockey coach named Yohan

Yohan : From tomorrow I want everybody to be in hockey uniform

Bulbul : Then what are we doing today Sir

Yohan : I am going to make you all run 5 rounds of the full grounds, and I want everybody to be on time and if you are late than be ready to run 10 rounds of this ground, today you all can do some warm up exercise and then I will dismiss you all early

Edited by ashpat3 - 10 years ago

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