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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: vlhs12993

Well aren't you on a roll
Wow abhi confess first in this, that's great.
Please update soon dear

Thanks honey... will update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anapneo3003

nice start👏

loved ittt😳

Thanks sweety...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: vidyasuresh

Good starting

Please update soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey friends thanks a lot for the lovely feedbacks.Here i am with the first chapter and hope you will like it.Enjoy reading and let me know your lovely feedbacks...
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CHAPTER:1

As the small hut was glowing with the cooling rays of the beautiful moon,pragya sat on the floor near the cot holding his husband's hand was laying unconscious from the blood loss and pain.Pragya know he is going to fine as she removed the bullet and thanked all the god she belives in for giving her the strength to do this.She remembered all the things he said thinking it was his last moment and pragya closed her eyes remembering the pain she saw in his eyes when he said that she was the one who he hurted the most and pleaded her to forgive him and not to think him as a bad person.Though she wanted to replay that he was a great guy she couldn't even utter a words coz of the feelings she is going through.But what he said the next moment literally took hr breath away in suprise .and still those words are ringing in her ears.

Before few minutes:

Abhi who was laying on the coat keeping head on pragya's lap took a deep breath after saying whatever he planned to say.Pragya on the other hand just sat their crying silently caressing his face as she didn't know what to do.
''And Fuggy i..i want..to tel...tell you something which is important more than all this.If i didn't confess to you now i can never forgive myself.''said Abhi and pragya listen to him.
''I...I ...lov...love ..you too Fuggy''said Abhi with a small smile and pragya looked at him shock not able to believe what he said.
''I love you too.Its took me this long to..realise.I don't ..don't want to die without telling this,beca...because i don't want ...you...you to feel unloved.I love you too Fuggy.Always will..Al...ways...will''said Abhi and closed his while pragya juts sat there few moment in shock and disbelief.But when she saw he is unconscious she started to panic and tapped his face.
''Abhishekh please open your eyes come on please''said pragya in between her sob but Abhi didn't even stir.Then pragya looked at the bullet wound and wiped her eyes with determination.
''I will not let you go without a fight Abhishekh.''said pragya and placed his head softly on the cot and looked around for a knife to take the bullet out.After few seconds she found one in a plate and then she kneeled on the floor and heated the edge of the knife in the fire from the lamp and took a deep breath and removed the bullet.Once she removed it she bandaged the open wound with the clothes and sat on the floor holding his hand with relief.But the next moment she remembered the last look he gave her with intensity and his last words which was full of passion and love.

Present:

Pragya thought she must have heard wrong or Abhi must have pronounced his words wrong because his weakness.But dammit the intensity she saw in his eyes when he uttered those words literally took her breath away and before she could react he closed his eyes leaving her to deal with all the emotional his last words stired inside of her.she was confused how he came to know about her feelings first to say''Too''after the three words she didn't even say it to him.
''Pragya stop over thinking about what he said.I am sure i heard him wrong or he said it wrongly coz of his weekness.so just leave it''said pragya to convinced herself.But after few moment she heard the voice which was she longing to hear and the felt some pressure on her hand which was holding Abhi's.
''That's where you are wrong Fuggy.you heard me right and i said what i wanted to.I am in love with you too''said Abhi in a weak voice and pragya looked him with wide eyes not beliving her own ears again.But seeing his awake looking her with a weak smile she forget all his confession and her confusion and smiled in relief knowing he will be okay.
''App theek hain na.How is the pain now?Do you want anything?'asked pragya and Abhi just smiled at her.
''Fuggy i am here confessing my love for you and you are just asking about my wound.Not fair Fuggy not fair''said Abhi with a disapproving face but inside he was happy to see how much she cares and loves him to ignore her feeling for taking care of him.
''Abhishekh please stop joking and tell me how are you feeling.All the other things and talks can wait''said pragya in a stern yet concern voice.
''Okay Fuggy.Just i am feeling much better now.But who removed my bullet?''asked Abhi .
''Can you see anyone except me here?''asked pragya and Abhi gave a nod negatively .
''Then ofcourse i am the one who removed it with this knife''said Pragya showing the knife and Abhi's eyes widen.
''KYA?You inserted this big knife into my body.What if its damaged any important vein and i died of blood loss fuggy''said Abhi and the next moment pragya covered his mouth with her softly.
''Please don't speak about your death even for fun Abhishekh.''said pragya with tears and the pain he saw in her eyes literally broke his heart.Then he removed her from his mouth and placed it on his chest.
''Sorry Fuggy''said Abhi and pragya just nodded her head.Then Abhi tried to sit and pragya immediately rushed to his side and helped him to sit by holding his shoulder.
''Kuch chaiye appko?''asked pragya and Abhi just gave a nod .
''I want to talk with you Fuggy so sit''said Abhi and made her sit beside him and once Pragya sat he took her in his and held it tightly.
''Pragya i know you must be in shock after hearing my confession.But whatever i said is true and from my heart.I love you pragya.I love you a lot and it the thought of loosing you made me realise this.When we got separated before meeting on the cliff i read your letter which was in my pocket and for few minutes i didn't know how to react thinking how a kind hearted girl could love a heartless guy who made your life living hell.But then i thought how much i missed you and worried about you till i saw you again and realised you are the one i am in love with as i didn't even miss or feel bad after breaking up with Tanu.Then seeing you standing infront of me ready to take the bullet i came to know none can love me like you do.But when the corporator was about to pull the trigger i know i can't live if something happened to you and i pushed you and took the bullet,coz after realizing my love for you death seemed to better than seeing you lifeless.But the only regret i have when i fell from the cliff was that i can express and confess my feelings for you.I don't want you ever to think you are unloveable pragya coz if someone is deserved to be loved unconditionally then its you.I know i hurted you a lot in the past,but i promise you pragya if you give me another chance i will live my whole life making up to all the pain and tears i caused you.''said Abhi with so much passion and love in his voice.Pragya on the other hand just sat there stunned after listening to his confession.She then without wasting a second hugged his tightly carefully not to hurt his fresh wound and started to cry as Abhi too hugged her back.
''I love you Abhishekh and i will be nothing without you.I love you a lot''said pragya and Abhi smiled and placed a kiss on the top of her with content hearing the three magical words from her mouth.Both of then in the same position for few minutes feeling complete and in peace after a long time.
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After few minutes Abhi broke the hug and placed a soft kiss on her forehead and wiped her tears.
''Fuggy is there any dress here?I really can't wear this dirty dress anymore''said Abhi and then pragya nodded.
''I will check in the cupboard''said Pragya and was about to get up,but Abhi pulled her again and she sat on the cot again and looked him in confusion.
''I love you Fuggy''said Abhi which bought a bright smile .
''I love you too Abhishekh''said Pragya with a light blush and went to get dresses for them from the cupboard.After few minutes she took a comforable shirt and pant for Abhi and a red saree for her.
''Here wear this''said Pragya and Abhi glared at her.
''Fuggy just coz i love you doesn't means i will let you make me look like a fool.How can i Abhi the rockstar can wear this type of dress haan''asked Abhi and pragya rolled her eyes.
''Well Mr.Rockstar from what i know ,i don't see one of Andy's designer shop hear .so for now wear this and i am sure if your fans see you in this dress in your dreams for just once nothing big is going to happen''said Pragya in annoyance and Abhi smiled at this.
''Okay Fuggy.I will wear this no need of getting irritated''said Abhi and pragya helped him to change his clothes.One he changed his clothes Pragya took his dirty clothes and dumped it in a corner and took her saree.
''I will be back having a bath.Till then you rest here''said pragya and left to take a bath.Once pragya entered the small room and closed the curtains Abhi carefully got up from the cot and moved out of the hut to get some fresh air.
As Abhi came out he closed his eyes feeling this cool air caressing his face and smiled as he felt like the most luckiest man alive after seeing his Fuggy's love for him and realizing his love for Fuggy.He never though pragya will love him after all the things he did,but he being the slefish rockstar was happy coz of this as he know if someone can love Abhi without any expectation it will be only his fuggy.After taking the bullet for pragya Abhi didn't think he could get the chance to shower his wife with love and make her feel the most loved woman in the entire universe.But now after getting a new life by his wife Abhi bcame more determined to keep his fuggy happy coz from now she is his angel who gave rebirth to him with her strong ,pure and unconditional love.Abhi didn't know how he is going to make up for all the hurts and tears he caused his wife,but the new found love for her made him determined to do it at anycost.
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Pragya who came out of the small room after the bath in a red saree and looked around the hut for Abhi.Once she couldn't find him she shook her head seeing his stubborness and left the cottage.As she came out she saw Abhi standing near the lake looking at the sky and walked towards him.
''What are you doing here Abhishekh?You must be resting now''said Pragya and Abhi turned only to lost in her natural beauty.Abhi menatlly slapped himself for not noticing her beauty before.Seeing her standing before him in the red saree without any jewels except her manglasutra and not a little trace of make up made his heart skip a beat and he felt butterflies in his stomach.God i am behaving like one of my fan girls now thought Abhi.But the next moment he pulled her closer by holding her waist and removed the hair which was falling on her face.Then he softly caressed with love and pragya heart started to race seeing the passion and love in his eyes.Abhi then looked at her rosy lips and got a sudden desire to know how it would taste.He then soflty caressed her lips and pragya breath quicken.After few seconds Abhi moved closer to her lips and looked at pragya silently asking for permission.Pragya on the other hand understood his silent question and just closed her eyes giving him the permission to steal her first kiss.Upon getting the answer he needed Abhi captured her lips in a soft kiss pulling her more closer .Abhi felt like he was tasting the most delicious wine and never wanted to pull back from the kiss.Pragya on the other hand felt like she was in heaven feeling her first kiss by lips on her and pulled him more closer and started to kiss him back expressing all the love and passion she was holding back.Abhi felt the love and passion in her kiss and he felt his heart will burst with happiness he was feeling now.After few minutes both of them broke the kiss and pragya just rested her head on his chest hugging him closing her eyes and Abhi rested his head on the top of her's hugging her back as both of them breathed heavily.Though both of them wanted to say a lot for now this silence felt like blanket which was comfort their soul and both of them didn't want to come out of this blanket soon.

-To Be Continued

With Love,
Scarlett.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow! Scarlet I say this every time but this was awesome! A cute read, it was sad when Abhi was talking like he was gonna die but then Pragya saved him and such great dialogues! <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing as always ...
Loved it...
Beautifully written...
I must say yu are a good writer...good is nt da word...you are amazing...lyk really amazing...

Take care...


Mariya
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Posted: 10 years ago
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too gud da...wa,8ng fr d stories aftr der confessn...loved it. .thnq
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you for the PM o always wanted Abhi to read the letter
It was fabulous. Their first I'm wondering what will happen you left me hooked
Beautiful scarlet
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great start dear
His confession is really beautiful
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow awsm update
loved it
cont soon

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