FF: Ab Dil Par Kaabu Na Raha (NOTE:Pg6)NO MORE UPDATES - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Superb Chapter Yaar please continue (:
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Asma-

beautiful first chapter
"Pehle main torta hun, fir marorta hun, fir tor for ke firse jorta hun."

Can u translate the line ? 😳


Thnx
It means "{first i break, then i twist and then after i break and twist, i join it again."
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arjittaneja_fan

Superb Chapter Yaar please continue (:


Thnx dear
will try to updt asap
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thnx 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Superb update.
loved it
thanks for pm
pls update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb.
Loved it.
Can't wait to read what is going to happen next.
Thank you for the pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow superb amazing
loved it plz continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28

Chapter: 2 Love, Jealousy and Suspicion

Merely a week had passed and after that incident, Pragya had become a close friend of Abhi, Bulbul and Purab. They formed the coolest group in Delhi University cuz of Abhi being the lead singer of the university band.

Abhi had also grown a liking for Pragya, his chashmish. Maybe it was her cute and enchanting smile that made Abhi's heart melt. But he wasn't sure of his feelings.

There beautiful feeling and thoughts were brewing in Pragya's heart.

She didn't know if it was a girl's first crush or true love. But whatever it was, those feelings were nice.

But then someone's jealous and cruel eyes had an evil sight on their unsure love.

In the canteen...

"Hey Abhi, where are u going?" asked Bulbul who was sitting there with Purab and Pragya.

"I'm going to meet Tanu in library." said Sid as he walked away towards library.

And after listening it, Pragya's blood boiled. She thought that Tanu was more than a friend of Abhi as he usually went to the library to meet Tanu. She decided to follow him. What can be done about jealousy and suspicion in love?? (LOLZ)

She followed him and saw Tanu in a mini skirt and a cut sleeves top already waiting for Abhi there.

She saw Abhi and Tanu standing close to each other and talking. Then they hugged each other for hardly two-three seconds and then they broke the hug.

Pragya was looking at this from a distance so she didn't knew what they were talking about. Her eyes were brimming with tears. She ran away from there, her eyes puffy and red cuz of crying.

Bulbul saw her red eyes and when she asked," What happened Prags?" She didn't reply but ran away from there too.

Bulbul was worried seeing her in such a condition that she went after her, calling her name.

Purab had realized that Pragya had feelings for Abhi but not sure of them.

But he also knew why Abhi was going their regularly in the library to meet Tanu.

He smiled but also was feeling bad for Pragya...

Okay, sorry RaBul fans for almost no scenes for RaBul but I promise that at least next 2 chapters shall contain lots of RaBul so cheers... Anyway, hope u liked it. Any appreciation as well as criticism is welcome. I'll be waiting for your feedbacks.

Love,

Adah

Edited by -kanishka- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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superb abhigya scense and also rabul scense. loved it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shreepatil.

superb abhigya scense and also rabul scense. loved it.


glad u liked it 😊

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