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Mina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Baachu where is my reaction to the bhabhi convo?

And what made the stain?

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-Nimmy-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

di remember the fic i was stuck on i have decided to work on it

all thanks to the bhabhi drabble

and this is for bhabhi not for you

Edited by HARNIM - 10 years ago

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Mina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Well...good luck then, baachu :P

The stain?

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nitarata

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: -Martinski-
Yo! New arrival!!! Hello!

Mumma Twin! New baby for you!
Nimmy, I thought it was the wall, but was it tiles wala walll? Marble kya?

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: -mina-
Well...good luck then, baachu :P

The stain?

the stain

woh aisa hua ki

i was making puris and my sis called

so i forgot about the hot oil and left it on the stove for like 20 minutes and then it caught fire and since i was not at home but roaming outside my neighbor had to come to extinguish the fire

and now the wall behind the stove is black

have to clean it before mom returns that is after two days

lol she actually told me not to burn down the house while she was away

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nitarata

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Mina, last At pg 79 has a drabble with a I will kill you line... Lemme know what it makes you feel...

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-Nimmy-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: -Tia-

Mumma Twin! New baby for you!
Nimmy, I thought it was the wall, but was it tiles wala walll? Marble kya?

yup not marble exactly but gloss wale tiles

my mistake i din't specify it

brain not working 😕

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Mina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

tiyu, i read it at work, but don't remember, so will go back and look.

nimmy...burn stains, a badge of honor. forget about trying to get them off the wall, and tell mumma to be thankful you didn't burn yourself!!!

btw baachu i am relieved you and your house are ok, ok!! *hugglesquieshes pyromaniac lapadwahi baachu*

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-Nimmy-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

tia that drabble is sooo awesome

and the new and better version of the nose button game was so cute

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Mina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: -Tia-

Drabble: In the end...

Abhi and Pragya fall off of the cliff. Both are injured, Pragya more than Abhi.

Abhi somehow manages to get on his feet. He desperately searches for Fuggy. He finds her lying in blood a few feet away from him, half conscious, wincing in pain.

'Nothing will happen to you Fuggy, come on, let's go' he talks her to consciousness.

They both realize she can't stand on her feet, her legs are badly wounded.

Abhi succeeds to lift her up in his arms although his right arm is bleeding. He starts to walk in the direction of a distant light.

'Leave me here and please go. I don't want to slow you down', she says.

'Shut up and let me walk' he replies.

'It's not your fault that I got kidnapped. Please go. Daadi and Aaliyah are waiting. Your Tannu is waiting. My end is here but my wishes will be with you always. My body is giving up, I can't make it. Please listen to me. Go marry Tannu. Be happy always', she begs.

'One more word, I will kill you before you die', he yells. He brings her face closer and kisses her nose silently banning her from speaking.

He starts to walk faster in the direction of the light.

a lot of fun, maasi! i can enjoy abhi saying 'i will kill you before you die' here because it's not gratuitous, it completely fits the moment and anyone (with a certain type of mind) would say something like that 😆

also abhi carrying her though wounded himself is the stuff of epic drama/romance, ok, so many deep feels, i can't even tell you 😲