First SS for Abhigya..!!! Finding his love.. :) chap 4 in pg 4 on 12/5 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great start, please con't soon.
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Hey Sorry friends for being late in updating.. Was busy with my works...

And in KB the kidnapping trap isn't still over.. :( Waiting for Abhi's realisation of love for Pragya...

So here in the next update...

CHAPTER 2

Everyone are shattered to hear the doctor's words... Sarla cries and Purvi consoles her... Bulbul cries and consoled by Purab.. Aaliya fumes in anger seeing Purab and Bulbul..
Tanu is feeling happy...

Dadi gets worried and cries.. Aaliya tries to console her and calls out "Bhai!!! Look daadi!!!" Everyone are shocked to find the Rockstar standing like a stone without moving a little too...

Abhi had the scenes flashing before him... The first moment he saw his Fuggy... Their fight... Their marriage... tortures he gave to Pragya... till the scene where Pragya was shot instead of him...
He closed his eyes and tears were flowing.. He doesnt know what to do??!! Doctors words kept on repeating in his mind..."Have faith in God" ..

Purab walks towards him and places a hand in his shoulder and says "Abhi!!! Dont worry.. Nothing will happen to di... Please dont be like this" But Abhi started to walk leaving everyone sad.. Tanu and Aaliya are shocked to see Abhi caring for Pragya..

Purab says "Dont worry.. Have faith.. Di will be fyn.. I will go and see Abhi" and left the place followed by Bulbul.. Everyone prays for Pragya...

Abhi walks thinking about his Fuggy and sees the mandhir in the hospital and remembers about Pragya's faith in god.. He cries when he remembers an incident during pooja in which he says to Pragya that he prays to god that he wants pragya to be out of his life...

He kneels infront of god and says "Please.. Save her... I was the one who done more sins but y r u giving the punishment to her.. She always believe in you.. Please dont take her away from me.. Please.. On that day I said that i want her to get away from her but today im saying that I cant live without her.. Please give her back to me.." and cries harder...

Bulbul and Purab cries seeing the condition of Abhi.. Purab walks towards him and calls out "Abhi!!!"

Purab says "Abhi!!!! Dont worry ... Di will be fyn... She wont leave us... She will come back to you for sure.. She cant live without you because..." and stops... Abhi sees him and Purab says "Because we all have faith in god..."

Abhi says "Haan Purab.. I know she wont leave me but I dont understand y she came to save me when I tortured her...I treated her badly.. Really I dont know!!" .. Bulbul and Purab wants to say to him that Pragya loved him but doesnt know how to say...

Just then Abhi's phone rings and he picks it up.. While taking his phone the letter in his pocket falls down and Bulbul takes it...The call is from Polica and they inform Abhi that Neil is not saying anything about his partners.. Abhi says "I will come and see him.. He needs to answer me and I wont leave him for hurting my wife" ans cuts the call...

When he decides to leave Bulbul gives the letter to Abhi and says "Jiju!! You want to know y di gave her life to save you rite!! Then read this letter..." Abhi remembers Pragya giving this letter to him during Purab=Bulbul engagement and gets it from Bulbul and opens it..

" Dear Abhi.,
I didnt have the guts to say these things seeing your eyes and so I wrote it in the letter Abhi.. I wanted to say to you long back that I LOVE YOU ABHI.. I dont know from when I started to love you.. Maybe from when you by deal4real" style="border: none !important; display: inline-block !important; text-indent: 0px !important; float: none !important; font-weight: bold !important; height: auto !important; margin: 0px !important; min-height: 0px !important; min-width: 0px !important; padding: 0px !important; text-transform: uppercase !important; text-decoration: underline !important; vertical-align: baseline !important; width: auto !important; background: transparent !important;">saved the marriage hall or when you stood against ur sis for proving me innocent or maybe when you saved me or maybe during our first meet.. Everyone see you as rockstar but to my eyes your only MY Abhi.. The one who fights with me for silly things.. The one who saves me whenever im in trouble.. The only one who have the rights to hold me in ur arms.. the one whom I get lost seeing ur eyes.. the one who makes me jealous, angry.happy.hurt. and sometimes to blush also... I know that you love tanu and wont love me back.. It doesnt matter to me.. I want you to be always happy and I will do anything for that,, Sorry for everything and thanks for everything.. I LOVE YOU SO MUCH and WILL MISS YOU SO MUCH WHEN YOU LEAVE ME..
With love
Your Fuggy..."

Abhi eyes are full of tears with a shocking expression... He thinks "Fuggy loves me.. How can She?? When i tortured the most? And she loved oly me and not my money or fame... how can she love me like this??" and cries... He sees Rabul who is crying seeing him.. He ask them "How can she love me?? I made her life a hell!! How can she forgive me and love me so much?? i cant forgive myself but she forgave me and loves me a lot!!! I dont deserve her... She is having this much pain because of me.. How can i give more pain to her??" and cries..

Bulbul wipes her eyes and says "Jiju.. I know that di suffered a lot because of you... But Jiju she loves you more so that pain doesnt matter to her... Jiju your not that much bad as you say.. It ll happened due to misunderstanding... Dont feel bad Jiju.. I dont know whether you love her or not but while deciding just take the right decision jiju... Jiju we are not forcing you for anything.. Take a decision which will make you happy...It can be di or Tanu???" and turns to leave...

Abhi says "Bulbul!!!! Do you believe that I will keep your di happy???" with tears in his eyes... Bulbul says "Haan Jiju!!! I believe you because my di is happy with u.. I know that my Jiju will always protect my di... I now that you will make her happy always.." and hugs Abhi...

Abhi says "Thanks Bulbul!! I will surely protect her..." Purab smiles seeing them... Bulbul says "Jiju.. di will be fyn rite?? i cant see my di like this.." and cries..

Abhi says "Bulbul.. Nothing will happen to my Fuggy.. As I promised i will always protect her" and sees Kumkum in the mandir.. Abhi remembers the moments he filled kumkum in Pragya's forehead and her belief in it... Abhi gets the kumkum and rushes to ICU followed by Rabul...
Abhi says to doctor that he needs to go in but they refuse it.. After so much of begging from rockstar and Rabul they allow Abhi...

Tanu gets angry seeing Abhi caring for Pragya and everyone rushes to ICU and sees through the glass...

Abhi is shattered to see his Fuggy in this state... She is breathing through oxygen mask and operated by various wires over her small body...

Abhi slowly sits near his fuggy and sees her with teary eyes... He slowly takes the kumkum and applies in Pragya's forehead remembering his moments with her... Everyone gets teary eyed seeing Rockstar's love for his wife leaving Tanu and Aaliya to fume...

Abhi takes Pragya's hand and says "Hey Fuggy!!! Look as always wanted I applied Kumkum in your forehead.. Please open your eyes and see...Please.. Why did u do this fuggy?? U gave your life to save me but dont u know that I cant live without you.. Cant you think abt it.. Fuggy I didnt realise your presence in my life before but I felt hard when ur not with me.. Fuggy im totally incomplete with you.. I cant live without ur Chasma glares , ur boring lecture . ur colourful umbrella suits , ur morning prayers . ur care , ur beautiful eyes in which i will get lost.. I dont know what u have done to me but I know a thing that rockstar need his fuggy back.. Please open your eyes Fuggy.. Please" and cries harder..

Everyone cries seeing Abhi's breakdown and prays to god to bring back Pragya for Abhi's sake...

All of a sudden Abhi feels Pragya's hand moving and smiles.. He calls out "Fuggu!!Fuggy!!! Can u hear me??"

Abhi is happy when hears his name from Pragya's mouth "Abhisheck!!!!!"

TO BE CONTINUED...

WILL UPDATE SOONER...

COMMENT YOUR VIEWS FRIENDS... ::)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
What a gripping part! Thanks for this! So sad to see Abhi in this state! Really hoping for powerful scenes in the show!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fantastic update👏...
So much emotions of Rabul,Abhi...They need Pragya in their life...
Hope Taaliya doesn't do anything stupid...
Waiting for next update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Wow!! Great work especially when it is yr first story i believe 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
What an emotional update.
loved it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey everyone.. Thanks for your likes and comments.. So here is the next chapter... Hope so you all will enjoy it..

CHAPTER 3

Abhi smiles as his fuggy utters his name... Abhi shouts "Fuggy!!! Open your eyes... just open it and look at me once.."

Pragya hears his voice and feels comfortable but her eyelids are hard to open.. She feels the warm touch and hears his voice and tries to open her eyes...

She opens her eyes and sees her husband's blur image and tries to see him clearly.. Tears flows down from Abhi's eyes... All are happily watching it with tears ,,

Pragya finds her husband safe near near and ask "Suniye.. Are you okay??" with tears in her eyes.. Abhi is dumbstruck to see his wife's love for him.. Abhi wipes her tears and says "Im fyn fuggy... U scared me to death.. How are feeling now?? Are you okay??" Pragya nods in agreement..

Abhi smiles and takes her hand says "Dot worry Fuggy.. Ur rockstar husband will take care of you..." Pragya smiles hearing it... Doctor comes inside and says "Dont worry Mr.Mehra.. Your wife is out of danger.. She needs to take complete bed rest.."

Abhi smiles and thanks the doctor.. Doctor ask him to wait outside as he needs to check Pragya.. Abhi nods and looks at Pragya... He says "I will wait outside.. Dont worry" And Pragya nods her head in accceptance...

Abhi goes out and hugs his daadi and cries.. Daadi says "Abhi I said na?? Nothing will happen to my bahu because her husband will save her as he loves her so much.. Am I rite??" Abhi is dumbstruck to hear his daadi's words and thinks "Do I love her?? Is daadi saying truth??" but doesnt say anything...

Rabul are happy to see the love of Abhi for their sister and smiles... Tanu fumes in anger seeing this type of Abhi...She tries to talk with him but he totally ignores her... Aaliya is feeling tensed as Abhi with Rabul decides to meet Neil in Jail... Aaliya wishes to come but Abhi says to take care od Daadi... So he leaves without her..

IN JAIL

Abhi and Purab threaten's Neil and ask him the culprit who gelped him.. But Neil doesnt say anything... Abhi becomes furious and grabs his collar and shouts "Corporator!!! Your increasing my anger.. You shot my biwi.. She is in hospital because of you.. I will kill you if u didnt open your mouth now..." Neil is terrified seeing Abhi but doesnt open hs mouth...

Bulbul comes and goes near Neil and slaps him hard... Bulbul shouts "Shame on you.. You dared to shoot my di.. but u say that u love me.. do u know the meaning of it.. If u love that person means you have treat their family as yours but you... Your not fit to love anyone" and turns to leave...

Neil holds her hand and says "Please.. You dont say that.. I love you bulbul.. I didnt do anything please.." Purab and Abhi gets furious seeing Neil holding Bulbul and goes near him but are stopped as he says "Bulbul the idea of this kidnapping was said by Aaliya"...

Abhi is shattered hearing it and Bulbul ask Neil not to lie but he says "No Bulbul.. Im saying the truth.. The person who tried to throw acid on you was Aaliya.. but I stopped it.. Then she gave me idea to kidnap u so that she can marry Purab but we ended in kidnapping Pragya.. I thought of letting her go but that super model Tanu said to kill your sister and if i didnt agree means they said that they will kill you... please believe me..."

All the threee stood shocked after hearing the bitterest truth in their life... Rabul turns and sees the rockstarstanding like a stone whose heart is shatttered in to pieces and tears are flowing from his eyes.. Without saying anything all left the jail...

IN HOSPITAL

The trio enters the hospital... Rabul tries to convince Abhi but doesnt know how to console him... On the other hand remembers all the flashback where he stayed hungry to give food to his sister.. The way he married an innocent girl for his sister's life... He doesnt know how to control his anger.. The girls His sister and his girlfriend betrayed him.. But suddenly he was feeling something is wrong happening..

Abhi feels something is wrong and that His Fuggy is in danger... He turns to Rabul ans says "I feel something wrong.. Fuggy!!!" saying he ran towards her room followed by Rabul...

When Abhi enters Pragya room he is shocked... Rabul are also shocked...

Pragya is struggling to breathe and they notice that the oxygen mask is removed from her nose... Abhi rushes to her and keeps back the oxygen mask.. Purab calls out for doctor... Abhi becomes furious and shouts "Fuggy!! What happened?? Nothing.. U will be fyn.." and he sees the nurse and shouts "Where the hell you all went?? Cant u take care of my Fuggy!!!" Doctor ask all the three to go out and treats Pragya...

Rabul and Abhi are waiting outside praying for Pragya.. Doctor comes and says "Thank god Abhi.. You came at right time.. otherwise anything can happened.." Abhi thanked all the gods for letting him know it in right time.. The nurse comes and apologies to Abhi.. She says that she saw a nurse entering patients room and so she left without checking...

Abhi is thinking about something and rushes to docto's cabin with Rabul.. Abhi wants to see the cctv footage that happened in his wife room and doctor accepts it..

So Abhi with Rabul watches the cctv footage.. All the three are shocked to see TANU entering Pragya's room as nuse... Abhi clutches his fist and controls his anger... They see TANU talking with Pragya and they notice Pragya's face turning horrified... They doesnt know what Tanu said to Pragya.. Abhi is fuming in anger as Tanu is frightening His Fuggy...

Seeing the next scenes all the face changes into horrified... Abhi cant able to believe his eyes... The one he loved ONCE stooped too low like this...

Tanu removes the oxygen mask from Pragya's mouth and Pragya struggles to breathe... Seeing this scenes Rabula nd Abhi are fuming in anger... How can she try to kill Pragya?? My wife?? My biwi?? My Fuggy?? Nurse comes and says that patient gained consicious...

Abhi and Rabul runs towards the room.. Bulbul enters first and hugs her sister.. Pragya smiles and says "Dont worry.. Im fyn... Without knowing i removed my mask.." All the three are shockd to hear it.. Abhi and Purab enetrs the room... Pragya notices all their faces and understands something went wrong.. She sees his rockstar's eyes and notices various emotions... Pragya remembers when Tanu came and said that the kidnapping is the plan of Aaliya and she tried to kill me...

Pragya doesnt want Abhi to know it... Tears are flowing from Abhi's eyes.. He goes near her and hugs her and cries... Pragya is shocked to see her Abhi like this... She sees bulbul who says that Abhi knows abt Aaliya and Tanu... Pragya couldnt control her tears and breaks dowmn... Rabul leaves leaving Abhigya alone...

Both Abhi and Pragya hugs tight and lets out their tears out.. Both are feeling safe in the other's arms... They doesnt want to leave the other and go.. So they stays together for may hours and finally they driffs off to sleep holding their hands together...


TO BE CONTINUED SOONNN...

COMMENT YOUR VIEWS FRIENDS... :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Super cute! Loved it so much! Urgh, this Tanu!! So glad Abhi came on time!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice update...nxt part post it soon yaar
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow abhi realising prags love
Tnk for upD
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