kumkum Bhagya from kidnapping (fan fiction)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys this is my effort to make drama amid kidnapping sequence of kumquat bhagya. So here it is and plz leave a comment to let me know how was I.
There are two courses which can happen so...
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Abih starts singing so that the roads are blocked and the kidnappers can't leave.
Pragya is unconscious but hearing his song get sub consciousness she tries to get her free, finally she does frees herself. She starts running and sees abih performing, abih who already set this live concert to search her sees her and get happy. But before she or he get to each other the kidnappers again tries to kidnap her but this time abih was determined he ran before her and later accompanied by bulbul and purab. He finally catches them and both purab and abih fights them. They get to know that corporator was behind all this but he holds pragya through her hairs and she starts struggling. He starts his bla boa that he want revenge and bulbul. But before he can do anything pragya manages to free herself and runs toward abhi soon she hugs him but corporator shoots thrice behind her leaving everybody shocked. When Pragya turns around it is found that bulbul has saved her and had all three shots in her. Bulbul falls leaving corporator shocked police arrives and arrest him while he shouts bulbuls name. Purab rushes toward her and takes her in his arms, while she is subconscious she ask pragya if she is alright. Pragya who is in a state of shock stand speechless where she was and then comes to her shouting why did she came in between, bulbul lastly see purab and says am I a good sister and when he nods yes she falls unconscious shocking all three of them. Abhi says to purab Rush her to hospital. And they all rush to hospital to save bulbul.



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice story... Yes it is too much drama.. Still nice.. Exited to know what happens to BB hope she is okay.. Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow very dramatic! Fab work! Wonder what will happen next do continue soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awww this is so fab...! This is really dramatic...I just loved it...!
Plz update soon...!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing 👏
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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purab with bulbul in his arms enter hospital panicking and yelling for doctor gets to the receptionist ask her to get bulbul alright. The receptionist ask what happen he replies he got shot. She says its police case wait until police arrive Abhi who is hearing all this I m rockstar if u didn't start treatment I will go to higher authorities. The receptionist arranges stretcher and she is taken in OT. Party who crying profusely says it's all my fault it because of me that bulbul is hear. Soon nurse gives bulbuls things to pragya (phone, personals, etc). The phone rings its Sarla calling bulbul to know about Pragya. Pragya sees abhi who says pick the call. She picks and sarla start saying is pragya freed, is she alright,etc. hearing these qs pragya starts crying, Sarla identifies Her and says is she ok. Why r u crying and where r u and when will u come home. Pragya says crying "maa bulbul". Sarla ask what bulbul. Then she tells her full story and sarla is shocked. Purbi informs abhi's family to arrive hospital. Hearing this amuses Aliya and tanu. They all reach hospital. All ask for bulbul just then doc comes out and says she is in critical condition and that we have called expert doc for treatment but till that we have to keep her awake or she will slip into coma. Purab gets in ICU and sees her lying subconsciou. He approaches her and sits besides her. She turns her face toward her and he says I am proud to be your fianc. He talks about their past memories just then Aliya enters and sees them and get annoyed but thinks bulbul will be gone so let it be and then leaves shattering false tears. Pragya and abhi enters and sits besides her.bulbul sees abhi and says my rockstar jiju while he responds to her saying my heroine salli. Bulbul says I am feeling sleepy, purab protest and says she cannot sleep (fearing that she will slip into coma ). Then purab ask pragya to tell her not to sleep as she follows her instructions. Pragya too says bulbul if you sleep today I will not forgive u, she says think about maa what will she do without u, then says if u sleep I will take whole kkb on my name and u will not get anything. Bulbul smiles hearing this and pragya cries and runs from there . Nurse says doc have arrived. bulbul is taken to OT in front of every one.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Doc struggles with bulbul while she keep dossing off. Purab seeing from the window says that hold on bulbul I won't let anything happen to you. Finally bulbul dozes off shocking the docs. They give her shock but when she does not respond they assume her dead and notify every body about it. Hearing this everybody is shocked while pragya in still shock while sarla faints. Purab gets In and start saying u can not leave me as u promised me he shout at her how can she break her promise. Abhi tries to console him but all in vain. Pragya sees her and starts acting ignorant and not believing what happen says she is just acting I know her she will wake and laugh at all of us making us fools. Abhi comes to her saying this time she is not acting.hearing this pragya cries voilently. Purab not believing still shakes her and hugs her while she breath slow. Abhi notices it and smile and says both the sis are same "fighters". Pragya sees her struggling says abhi to inform doc. Doc come and says its miracle. Aliya hears this and says ye dono behnain kya kismat let ker ain hain .
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awww...this was just amazing👏!!
You have brought all the feels so precisely...that it connects beautifully to the heart...!
Loved it...will be waiting for further...continue soon!!
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Bulbul is still in hospital but now out of danger. Sarla was admitted in the same hospital due to shock, but wakes and ask pragya (who is already sitting beside her) about bulbul. Before she could reply sarla leaves the room in rush to see bulbul. She gets in bulbuls room ( where purab is already sitting there) and sees her while pragya comes with her. Purab leaves sarla, pragya and bulbul alone. SArla comes to bulbul and says why did she did all this to herself and puts hand on her head. Bulbul wakes and sees her she says "maa" while Sarla puts finger on her lips and says how could she be so selfish how could she ever think about letting her mother cry for her whole life. Pragya hears this and the three cry. Sarla says she won't forgive her for this act of hers while pragya says she will too not forgive her. Bulbul jokes and says even if she dies. sarla and pragya both raises their hands to slap her but ends up hugging her. Pragya says to sarla go and meet dadi as she is very tensed about u. Sarla leaves while pragya looks angrily to bulbul. Bulbul says what did she do now. Pragya says why did u do this, if something would happened to u I won't have survived the guilt that because of me, my sister lost her life. Sarla enters and hears this she comes forward and bulbul again jokes " actually I took decision on last moment, I mean I first thought who is more dear to maa then the ans was pragya di, so I did this for maa that she would have survived without me but not u, waise bhi mein pardoos ki beti hon na. Sarla and pragya laughs and bulbul is relived to see them happy.

TO BE CONTINUED...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awww amazing work...!
Everything is really touching...!
I liked mother and her two daughter' s bonding..!
And affcos..Bulbul' s teasing to her mother about being pados ki beti...!!

Continue soon...will be waiting eagerly...!

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