Abhigya OS Broken Trust

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Posted: 10 years ago
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So I got bored and decided to write something down. Hope you like it... I am tired with this track as well as you guys and hope its over soon. This is just a OS. Im not planning in writing more to it. But I hope you like it!! Do comment!!


Pragya was ready with Suresh about to go start the wedding ceremony and rituals. Deep inside the only thing Pragya wanted to do was to run away from this fake happiness as far away as possible. She was tired with this compromised life. She wanted to live life the way she wanted but here she was, getting married to one she wouldn't even dream of. In fact the one she wanted was probably out partying with his girlfriend and sister celebrating that he had gotten rid of the worst nightmare in his life. Her.

She had begged not to make her do this but when Suresh turned up agreeing she felt no reason to argue. She was tired, of trying to prove herself even though no one was listening to her. She just let them do what they wanted with her. She watched all the preparations in silence. Everyone always expected her to do what they wanted and now that she was they were still asking her what the matter was. There really was no pleasing some people. They were about to take the saath phere when a voice stopped them. They all turned to see Abhi walking in.

Now what did he want. He had already ruined her enough, what else was left. She stared back blankly waiting for the next insult. Characterless, no he had already said that as well as a gold digger, heartless, not worthy of love, ugly... What else could he be here to say? She waited listening to what he had to say but when she saw that he was crying she noticed something was wrong but for some reason she didn't feel sorry for him this time. She looked back at him and he spoke first.

"I love you Pragya, please come back" Said Abhi. He explained how all of this was a plan made by Aliya and Tanu and he only just found out because he heard them speaking in their room. He said he only loved her and who he thought he loved had used him.

"I am sorry Pragya." Said Abhi. "Please forgive me." He looked down in shame still crying.

"Sorry for what. After all I am characterless, a gold digger, heartless, not worthy of love, a chashmish, ugly, a bhenji... The list is long. Then why are you sorry."

"Don't say that." Said Abhi. "I misunderstood, Im sorry."

"What do you think I am?" Pragya shouted this time. "A toy... that you can keep when you want throw away when you get bored. No! A few minutes ago you didn't want to see the sight of me and now you love me. How am I meant to trust this forever changing mind of yours." Pragya felt angry and she ran into her room locking the door blocking out all the noise from outside. She had had enough, she was not going to answer any questions. She sat and stared at the wall with numb eyes for the rest of the night.

Outside Abhi knew that whatever happened he was going to get his chashmish back. He would make her trust him and love him once again. He knew this was going to be hard but he would do whatever he could to win her back.

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TheAutumnFizz thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ohh.. Love it!! Hope something like this happens in the serial as well..
Beautifully written.. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I love it ...superb and amazing OS ... you're right we are waiting for the end of this track ...also your written is fab...I looked forward to read more story from you
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Posted: 10 years ago
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aww nice work simi!! glad pragya stayed angry with him and pointed out about his untrustworthy forever changing mind! waise it's nice as a one shot but you must know i'd love to see more ;)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you simsim!!!! Wonderful ... I loved it ... really want Pragya to torture Abhi ... for a long long time ... before giving in 😈!!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was nice to read pragya didn't forgive him so easily.loved it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice os yaar. I would lik to see something like this in one episode. I dot get one thing yaar. Abhi gets to go around with his gf even after marriage but still calls pragya characterless. hops yaar. Hopeeless yaar. I really swish tat she dot forgive abhi so easily.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great OS simi...
Please do write more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome and Emotional OS
Pragya's pain is well written
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Posted: 9 years ago
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re-reading this post as it was so cute updates

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