Abhigya FF: Some Days Last Forever (finished) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
This was amazing.. I like that Abhi is the one agonizing over Pragya for a change. I honestly can't wait for you to continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12

Some Days Last Forever, Pt. 2


"Why do I love such a stupid man!?"


Pragya's emotions have veered between fury and despair since arriving at her mother's house but underlying both emotions is a deep well of sadness.


"Why didn't Abhi trust me just a little? I've been proven innocent of every accusation thrown at me but those two dayaan still have his ear." Pragya sits on the edge of her bed, rubbing her temples. She feels a sting behind her eyes and sits upright. No more tear-soaked sleeves!


She will continue to look for the source of the MMS. Or rather, proof of the source. The curve of Pragya's generous lips tightens. She knows who produced it. And when this is all over and Pragya returns home, Aaliyah is going to find out exactly how sisters fight.


Pragya picks up her phone and taps in a number.


"Daadi? Aap kaisee hain?


Pragya was able to sneak into the house to see Daadi two days after she woke from her coma. Between Aakash and the sister cousins, all other family members were maneuvered into leaving the house for a one hour window. And even then Pragya had to come in through the kitchen, feeling remarkably like a thief. Daadi and Pragya had only half an hour to reassure each other of their affection and trust in each other. Aakash had to whisk her out of the house well before anyone came back home.


"Main theek hoon, beti," Daadi replies.


"Bunty aur Babli?"


Pragya is very concerned for the children. Their father is still in jail and their mother ... well, their mother is Mitali. And Pragya would not trust Taiji to take care of a houseplant.


"I am keeping an eye on them. Robin is taking extra care as well."


Pragya sighs, "And Abhi? How is he?" Being able to ask Daadi about Abhi is the only reason that she remains strong enough to refuse his phone calls.


"Mere beta. He is fine. Voh khusha nahin hai ... lekin okay. He spends more time in the studio than he should. He misses you, I can tell."

"But it's no good Daadi. I wish I could come home but I can't until I have the proof he wants."

The same evening as her visit to Daadi, Pragya, Aakash, Bulbul, and Purab met in the Arora sitting room.


"My Di wants my idiot jiju back so -- "


"Bulbul!" laughs Pragya. "You shouldn't...well."


Bulbul laughs as Purab pulls her back into the couch with his arm around her shoulders.


***

What it finally came down to was luck.


The proof simply fell into their laps or, rather, fell on the floor in front of Aakash.

***

Aakash walks into the dining room just as Tanu dumps the contents of her purse on the table.


Something bounces off of the table as she riffles through the piles with quick, angry motions. She snatches up her keys and shoves everything else back into the purse.


"Why is Abhi not paying attention to me? He broke up with me but I absolutely don't believe it!"


"Tanu, you dropped something."


Tanu brushes him aside.


"Leave it! Aaliya! Let's go!"


"Kamini," Aakash mutters as he bends to pick up the tiny item. He opens his fingers as he straightens.


A sim card rests in the palm of his hand.
Edited by Taash - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Nice Taash!! Been eagerly awaiting the update and so happy to see the story moving forward. I love the humorous, family-focused tone of the story. Not trusting Taiji to take care of a houseplant is totally 🤣. Very excited to see what happens with the long awaited proof!! Heehee!!! And afterwards can you please pretty please write a story with Pragya showing Aalu how sisters fight - in your hands it would be awesome I think. Thanks for the update!! Hoping for more soon :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14

Okay, these are short. I'm just getting thoughts down as they occur to me.

Some Days Last Forever, Pt. 3


Pragya approaches the front door of the Mehra house with Aakash, Purab, and Bulbul in her wake. Although her innocence can be proven without a doubt, Pragya needs support to face the hostility that is sure to follow.

She trips to a halt as the front door swings open. Abhi is framed in the opening, staring at Pragya with a blank expression.

"He looks so tired," she thinks.

Pragya takes a slow step forward, holding out Aakash's cell phone.

"Here is --"

Abhi darts forward. Pragya is crushed to Abhi's chest. He holds her so tight that she has trouble breathing. Pragya feels Abhi's chest expand and then he whispers, "You came back."

Bulbul appears in the corner of Pragya's eye. She takes the phone out of Pragya's hand and points to the doorway. Bulbul and the two men enter the house.

"Abhi. Abhi," Pragya strokes his back with one hand as she lifts the other to his head. Abhi presses his face into her neck.

"Abhi, please look at me. Please, Abhi. Are you okay?" When Abhi doesn't move, Pragya twines his hair around her fingers and pulls gently.

Abhi moves back slightly only to cup her face in his hands and lean down until his face is inches from Pragya's.

"You came back," he repeats.

"I never wanted to go," Pragya says. Her hands drop to his waist and twist his shirt in her fists.

They stand for just a moment, looking at each other.

"Will you stay?"

"Yes."

Abhi leans forward to gently kiss her. After a wonderful eternity, he pulls back and they once again stand looking at each other.

Abhi's face twists into a mischievous smirk.

"Chashmish! Doesn't your phone work? I called you forever!"

"Why would I answer your call?" Pragya rolls her eyes. "I didn't want to talk to you!"

Abhi once again pulls Pragya into his arms. Pragya wraps her arms around his waist and rests her head against Abhi's chest. She can feel his cheek against the top of her head as they rock from foot to foot, chuckling.

Just then, they hear a woman shouting.

Abhi lifts his head and looks towards the house. His eyes narrow and he says in a hard voice, "Right. This is ending now."

Abhi takes Pragya's hand and leads her into the house.

Edited by Taash - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
awsm updates
loved it
very nicely written
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Thank you, Taash!!! That was wonderful ... loved Abhi's fear of losing Pragya!!!


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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
woohoo loved the chapter taash!! abhigya reunion and the truth about to unroll. awesome awesome. i'm really enjoying the tone of this story by the way - energetic and fun without being silly. love love love!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: Diahh

Love the beginning! This cant be an OS!! You have to continue! Soon!😃 Thank you for sharing this story with us!😛

Diahh is sooo right you have to continue pweez 😭
Edit*: actually guys I'm a newbie and I didn't read the entire thing so I commented a little a little out of date😳 but continue soon I just read the entire thing it"s really great
Edited by abhigya2 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
wow very nyc 👏👏 loved the story so far pls continue 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
This was utterly fantastic!! This was great!! I loved it so so so much!! Great abhigya scene!! <333

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