AbhiGya SS || ,'Love Hurts Once Again,'|| LAST PART UPDATED Pg. 32 - 6

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indi

@indi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#101

Thank you Mariam!!!! That was awesome👏 !!!! Loved the flashbacks .. the portrayal of emotions ... pain, heartbreak!!! !!! My. heart is breaking for Pragya ... how can she ever forgive Abhi ... no matter what his excuse ... !!!! Waiting for more.

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CrazzyBusy

@CrazzyBusy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#102

Did I lose my reader kya??? 😭😭😭
Looks like I did lose my 30 readers, but I am really thankful for to those who read and pressed the like button and left their precocious comments on the previous part.
I have wrote the next part, just have to edit few things and will post the full part tomorrow night. Till then I have a teaser for you all to enjoy.

TEASER:

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usse bichar ke usne zindagi jeena tu chor diya, par uske chal rahi saanson ki wajha uski band aankhon ke peeche chupi thi. Maut uske naseeb main nahi thi likhi, aur zindagi ko khud unse apne haton gawan baitha.

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He pushes his hair back while leaning back into the chair letting his tears rolled down his cheeks as he thought "Kash Chasmish us raat maine tum se wo wada hi na kiya hota. Kash tumne mujhese mera jawab janna chaha hota. Kash tumne mujhe meri baat kahene ka ek mauqa diya hota"

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Uss ek gunha ki maafi ke intezar main guzarta raha wo din-aur-raat. Har pal, har lamha pachtawe ki aag main jlata raha subh-o-sham. Ke kab wo pal aye jab apno se mil jaye maafi use, har lamha wo yeahi ek dua maangta rah apne Khuda se. Anpe hi gunhe ki aag main jalta raha, khud ko saza deta hi raha ke kab us Khuda ko aye is bande pe bhi raham. Par shayad uska gunha tha hi aisa ke Na maafi ayi na maut aai uske dar se, aai tu bas ek aur gunha ki sunwai aai.
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"I want you to divorce me and Marry Tanu" and she heard him gasp in shock. "Yo-o-you wa-ant me to do what" He asks in shock.

Enjoy the teaser.
Mariam

Edited by CrazzyBusy - 10 years ago

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smala

@smala

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#103

Loved it Mariam.

Read Chapter 4 and the teaser one go and it was awesome..

Poor Pragya.😭

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vivkriti

@vivkriti

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#104

Amazing teaser Mariam. waiting for the updates

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Miss.M

@Miss.M

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#105

Why are you torturing us like this mari!!! Loving the teaser!!! Please update tomorrow!!! Cannot wait to read it!!! Loving the story so far...you've kept me guessing as to what is going to happen!!!EEekks please update soon!

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Diahh

@Diahh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#106

Hey Mariam!😃

First of all sorry for not commenting soon. I read it earlier but didn't have time to comment.

So coming to the story it was mindblowing. Loved it. Feel so sorry for Pragya. Loved the flashbacks. I am sure this is Tannu's plan and both AbhiGya are trapped in it.

And the teaser. UFF! You are making the wait very hard. Please update soon. And thank you for the PM.

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indi

@indi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#107

Thank you, Mariam!! Loved it!!!! What a teaser 👏... can't wait for more !!!!

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Lasya

@Dexterity

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#108

I don't know how I missed this story, Mariam...

OMG !!

Very beautiful and beautiful story...❤️

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sarra

@sara7iris

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#109

I hope you will put an update tomorrow because with this Teaser this is to much for my heart...I looked forward to read your next update...PLS PLS PLS update soon...thank you for the pm

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CrazzyBusy

@CrazzyBusy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: MinMinMehra
Thank you for the update!! loved it!!beautifully written!! Cannot believe you had to re-type the whole thing!! Hope you update soon!

Thanks for liking the update dear😊