Abhigya & Rabul FF Battle of good and evil epilogue (Pg 47) - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: sara7iris

yo yo I am here 😆 so first thank you for the pm...your update was nice and wonderful ...I love Tashu and Sameer convo in was awesome fight ...I hope we will see some scene with this two and I think
they have the same character ...good part
wow the meeting between Purab and BB we would say the world is small ...I love it ...the convo they have was very cute ...purab was atrue gentleman ...fab ash

the last part tell us we will have suspense ...I can't wait to know what will happen next
ash I looked forward to read your next update ...so pls update soon


defintely Tashu and Sam will be in same frame, hope everybody like his character
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
Part 9

Pragya : Hey you look so beautiful

Ritu : thank you di

Bulbul : why are you looking sad

Ritu : nothing I just hope everything goes properly

Pragya : don't worry no fear when I am with you

Ritu' s parents : Rajnath and Siya

Varun (Ritu's fiancee) : Thakur and Nilu

Rajnath : Look Mr Thakur,everything is fine

Thakur : It will be fine when guest will praise it

Nilu indirectly insults Siya when she gives the guest's expensive gifts to her servants

Ritu also calls Sameer for her wedding

Abhi clashes on Pragya again during the wedding

Pragya: You

Abhi : Oh hi, I did not destiny is very happy with us

Pragya : it might be happy with you

Abhi stops her in midway

Pragya : let me go

Abhi : are you still angry? okay I am sorry

Pragya : its okay, what are you doing her by the way

Abhi : obviously its my friend's wedding

Later Ritu hears Thakur threatening her father because of some lack of money and decides to take a big step.

The ritual starts for the wedding. Priest calls the bride

Ritu : Priest stop the wedding mantras right now and chant the sad mantras

Siya : have you gone crazy

Ritu : I did not but if I marry your son then I will make your family crazy

Rajnath : what is wrong with you dear

Ritu : now it is the limit dad, this man cannot insult us like this

Thakur : what do you think if you break this marriage then we will not get another family

Pragya : Uncle ji, you will definitely get another family but only when you be in that position

Varun : Hey you mind your language, Ritu why are you interfering in this matter

Ritu : Because I am concerned more about my family

Pragya : Somebody said is love make you blind but money and greediness make you selfish

Sarla : Pragya, what are you saying

Pragya ; One minute mom, they are fond of taking dowry na, I am full filing their wish

Sameer : but how

Pragya : Sam, seems like these people do not read newspaper, so they don't know that dowry is against law

Thakur : they gave it by their own

Sameer : I don't like to praise myself but can't help it, those who tamper with law I always teach them in such a way they never forget

Ritu : Varun, tell your parents that you always told me, we will live separately

Siya : what is she saying is truth?

Varun stays mum and Ritu slaps him hardly

Ritu : You cheater, you don't deserve my love

Thakur : Enough, we will also see how you will get married

Pragya : Uncle ji, there is a saying what you sow you reap, you don't know girls family have more power

Siya : what are you saying

Ritu : She means that if you try you ruin anybody then you will be more ruined than anybody else, this all clothes and decoration are by my father's, now if you stay here even for a minute then I will throw you all out by removing all your clothes

Thakur : This is the manners you gave your daughter

Bulbul : Uncle you learn some manner from her actually so you never get cheated in life from anybody

Rajnath : I am proud of my daughter today, she proved she is my daughter

Everybody kicks the groom's family out of the house.

Abhi : Wow, you should be a lawyer instead of a journalist

Pragya : thank you your compliment but I know I am in a right profession

Mehra house

Dadi : I must say this girl is brave

Abhi : It is nothing you should have seen her in Vadhavpur, she was fighting with goons

Alia : Really?

Dadi : whatever it is, after so many year I am so happy that somebody is standing for norms of this society


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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
Wow! Loved it Ash! <3 great work! I like that Abhigya don't hate each other and Abhi complementing her is great!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: simsim25

Wow! Loved it Ash! <3 great work! I like that Abhigya don't hate each other and Abhi complementing her is great!


thank you friend 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I don't know why am i not getting any comments here 😕 is it that bad
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
thank you for the Pm ...sorry I am later ...I love it ...today we have ritu and we have pragya and BB present nice and abhi also we have a meeting between abhi and pragya 😆 I like when abhi said sorry to pragya it was very cute
and poor ritu her wedding is a fiasco but her father is froud of her ...awesome ash ...abhi and pragya fight like always they can't speak normally with each other ...I like this part
dadi love already pragya because she is brave ...we will have something good after that
ash awesome update and I can't wait to read more pls update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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HEY...Your writing is simple, precise and very nice 😊...
Nice story and you've carried the drama,emotions very well👏...
Liked the different characterisation of the leads than that is shown in the show ...
Read all the parts in one go...The suspense's at the end of each part are good...
Waiting for next update...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: MarGan

HEY...Your writing is simple, precise and very nice 😊...
Nice story and you've carried the drama,emotions very well👏...
Liked the different characterisation of the leads than that is shown in the show ...
Read all the parts in one go...The suspense's at the end of each part are good...
Waiting for next update...😃


Thanks dear, this story has lot of suspense and drama ahead, watch out for it 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 10

Next day Pragya while going to her work sees something on the way. She goes near a rural area where people were struggling to stop a bulldozer demolishing their houses. She sees a young girl name Kaya and asks her the problem. But the girl is scared

Pragya : look don't be scared, consider me your friend

Pragya : what is happening here?

Kaya : they are demolishing our chawl by fraud

Pragya : Fraud?

Kaya : This chawl was built by Mr Mehta, our owner for us but now after his death,his rival is snatching our houses by saying the owner sold it to him to pay his debt I know he can never sell this chawl,

Pragya : But is there any proof that the owner mortgaged it ?

Kaya ; No, they don't but nobody is ready to listen it, I tried to contact lawyer but he is not in city, I don't know any other big advocate, these are the papers

Pragya : Wait I will do something

Pragya stops her car in front of bulldozer when it is about to break the chawl

One of the guy was about to slap her but Pragya pushed him down to ground

Guy : How dare you hit Max?

Pragya : Slap? if I would have law in my hand, I would have ruin this face by scratching it so much that you can never recognize your own face

Max : Wait I will show you

Max drags her but a hand stop him and hits him hard. It is none other than Abhi

Abhi : Seems like you did not learnt the lesson from last time

Max : don't you dare come in between, you cannot foil my plans

Pragya : the chawl you are breaking in not your property

Max : It is my dad's property now and he can do whatever he want

Pragya : Fine, then go bring the paperwork, I know you are doing this illegally with fake papers right

Max gets scared hearing that he has fake papers

Abhi ; what happened? Mr Politician's brave son became so scared

Pragya : you took advantage of this people but I won't let that happen

Abhi : Pay heed to my advise, go away from here before this girl will pull the bulldozer on you instead of this chawl

Pragya gets irritated to see Abhi whispering with Max

Max : You are scaring me ?Abhi , you and this girl will regret for this insult

Max goes to Pragya and threatens her

Pragya : Who are you threatening ? If I did not make your life living hell, my name is not Pragya Arora, and I will make you pay like that you will never able to threaten anybody

Max : I will demolish this chawl at any cost now

Max leaves from the place.

Pragya ; I have to bring stay order as soon as possible

Kaya : I will bring my dad's lawyer's number

Pragya ; what are you doing here

Abhi ; Nothing, I was just going from here and

Pragya : And decided to follow me, that guy looks like your friend right

Abhi : I never make friends like this, understood, you don't know this guy, he is very dangerous

Pragya : I don't care, I am not scared of anybody (leaves)

Abhi : I have to keep eye on this girl now

Purab meets Bulbul at her work to return her bracelet

Bulbul : You?

Purab : Actually the other day you forgot your bracelet in my car

Bulbul : Oh thats so sweet, you didn't have to take trouble

Purab : why trouble? it is okay

Bulbul : Then can I ask you for a favor

Purab : Sure

Bulbul : Actually Sufi gave me task to design Tashu's show stopper dress, can you tell her it is ready, I could have told her but I don't have her number and Sufi is not here

Purab : thats okay, you can give it to me

Bulbul : Wait, if I give this to you won't she doubt you

Purab : You don't worry about it, I will handle her

Bulbul : Here it is

Purab ; Wow, this looks fantastic , I am sure she will look fabulous in this

Bulbul : Thanks

Purab : Okay, I will have to leave now

Bulbul : Bye

Mehra house

Purab : what are you saying

Abhi : I am saying truth , that Max is back to town now

Purab : But do you think he will harm Pragya

Abhi : He will,, I will have to keep eye on Pragya because who knows him better than us

Purab : Do what you want but please be careful

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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
Thanks for update Ash! Loved it! <3

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