Abhigya & Rabul FF Battle of good and evil epilogue (Pg 47) - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: simsim25


I literally have no clue but im sure whatever it will be will be fantastic.

Hope there is more abhigya to look forward to!


Definetly yes, if you have no clue than it is unpredictable story, plus this is a realistic story with real issues isn't it?
Edited by ashpat3 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 6

Late at night Abhi and Pragya sees a cottage and decides to go there.

Pragya : I am so tired

Abhi : Girls like you never get tired and pretend like that

Pragya : Oh god, I don't know how will the girl who you get married to you will tolerate you

Abhi ; You don't have to worry about that because my future wife will be very sweet and simple

Pragya : Poor girl, she might not know that what kind of person are you

Both reaches the nearby house which is open.

Pragya : By the way were you following me that you saved me

Abhi : I don't have any interest in following you, I was in the temple, glad that he gave me wisdom to run after you

Pragya : Oh I did not know people like you believe in god too

Abhi : Why you don't

Pragya : No way,

Abhi ; why would you, your heart is full of arrogance

Pragya : I don't care if people call my self respect arrogant

Abhi : how strange, we don't know each other's name, I am Abhi Mehra

Pragya : I know you, big celebrity

Abhi : Really, who does not know me

Pragya : I am Pragya Arora,

Abhi : If I am not wrong, you were the journalist who with the help of a cops exposed that corrupt manager of showroom and photographer

Pragya : yes

Abhi ; how can I forget that name

Pragya : this house seems to be locked from many years

Abhi : So who is in your family

Pragya : Don't you think you are getting too familiar

Abhi : Because I am not a boring person who can sit whole night seeing a girl's face

Pragya : I live with my mom and sister

Abhi : oh, I only have my dadi and sister,

Pragya : your parents?

Abhi : they died in a car accident when we were 5

Pragya : Oh sorry

Abhi : Thats okay, so where will you go tomorrow

Pragya : I will go back to vadhavpur to finish my work

Abhi : have you gone crazy ? they will kill you

Pragya : I don't care, I will give justice to that girl

Abhi : do you even realize what dangerous game are you playing

Pragya : what is the fun if there is no thrill in it

Abhi : have this coffee

Pragya : thanks

Abhi : Fine but I cannot let you go alone as a humanity

Pragya : I don't need anybody's help

Abhi : But I will feel guilty if I leave you alone

Pragya :You don't have to come with me

Abhi : Okay then fine, best of luck

Abhi still decides to follow Pragya as he senses some danger

Pragya : when will this rain stop

Abhi : I am not a weather predictor

Pragya : who asked you? I was asking myself

Abhi : It is said that sun after rain looks beautiful

Pragya : how do you believe in this fantasies

Abhi : It is not a fantasy, tell me don't you believe in love

Pragya : No way,

Abhi : well I wonder how this arrogance side can ever love anybody

Pragya : I don't care about it, I only know I have some dreams which I will make come true

Next day Abhi wakes up before Pragya. He calls her but she does not wake up

Abhi : Hello, Ms Journalist,

Abhi shouts loudly in her ears making her wake suddenly

Pragya : what happened

Abhi : you got scared (laughs)

Pragya : don't you know how to wake up people

Abhi : Actually I saw you sleeping so peacefully so i got jealous

Pragya : I think we should get going now, I will go and freshen up

Abhi and Pragya reaches Vadhapur in few hours

Pragya : thank you

Abhi : So you know how to say thanks

Pragya : you can never say something straightly, fine bye

Pragya goes back to the village while Abhi follows her secretly.

Sandhya : what are you doing here? why did you come back

Pragya : I came to save you

Sandhya : Go back, they are looking for, goons will kill you if they see you here

Pragya : I will not leave you here alone, its your life and only you have right to live it

Sandhya : But how will we leave from here

Late at night Sandhya gets ready to elope according to the plan of Pragya.

Pragya : Sandhya lets go

When both starts to leave Shubh catches them. He calls the villagers to insult Pragya.

Shubh : So this was your plan, you want to spoil our reputation

Pragya : I am trying to save your daughter, you are concerned more about your reputation than Sandhya

Shubh : Yes I am, because you cannot live if you lose your dignity

Pragya : What about your child , I ask you all villagers that why do you born girls if you think they are unlucky

The villagers gets confused hearing it

Pragya : you all should be ashamed of doing this to your own daughters, you marry them off and think you are done with the responsibility, but do not think that how your daughters will be in their husband's house

The villagers feels ashamed after hearing the speech. Abhi claps for Pragya.

Abhi : wow what a speech, you should be a politician instead of a journalist

Pragya : what you doing here? are you following me?

Sarpanch and his goons grab Pragya.

Vikrant : take her away, and burn her alive so that everybody gets to know the result of messing with Vikrant

Abhi : You are right, she should get punishment for giving long speech right Gao walo,

Pragya : what are you saying?

Abhi : why? did I say something wrong, you are a jhansi ki rani so people will always remember you, hey villagers why are you all quiet, will you not punish this girl for standing up

The villagers and the women's take their sandals out and starts beating up the goons. Pragya hits goons with the rod but mistakenly hits Abhi

Abhi : what is this for

Pragya : For your stupid joke, idiot

Abhi : You called me idiot? I was trying to save you

Pragya : I saw how greatly you saved me

The village's collector arrests Vikrant and Sarpanch for attempt of murder. Everybody apolozise Pragya

Shubh : I don't have words to tell you

Pragya : If you all want to do something then make sure you never consider woman as your doormat


Edited by ashpat3 - 10 years ago
abhiya23 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
Why am I not getting any comments guys 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
SORRY I READ THIS PART JUST NOW SO I AM COMMENTING NOW
really nice update
abi helping pragya awww...
really nice abhigya part was fun
love pragya 's speech
at last the villagers are convinced
u r bringing up a very nice social message
eagerly waiting for the next part
please update soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
Thanks for the update ash!
Wow superb work!

Loved the way you stuck to the pure abhigya nokh jokh! Seemed so imaginable.

Defo loved the gaon walon line!

Fantastic work as always! 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: simsim25

Thanks for the update ash!

Wow superb work!

Loved the way you stuck to the pure abhigya nokh jokh! Seemed so imaginable.

Defo loved the gaon walon line!

Fantastic work as always! 👏


Thanks appreciate it, any guess about next track
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: ashpat3



Thanks appreciate it, any guess about next track



Not sure but wonder where you will take purab and tashu's story. I have a feeling they will break up soon and soon Rabul love story may too start.

As for abhigya, wonder what obstacles you create for them. Will some more of the antagonists be shown soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: simsim25



Not sure but wonder where you will take purab and tashu's story. I have a feeling they will break up soon and soon Rabul love story may too start.

As for abhigya, wonder what obstacles you create for them. Will some more of the antagonists be shown soon.


There is still time for Rabul story to start, there are villains, you can read about them on pg 1, these two will challenge each other soon hope it makes sense
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
plzz pm me!!!
i luved it..
update asap :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello ash...I was a silent reader of all your fanfictions...loved your way of writting...!!! I hope next time I'll get to read about my RaBul tooo...since last two updates had nothing about them😭...well I'd love too see how there love story starts..and hope some of the memories of their cute adorable fights like during office scenes get revived too...
Really looking forward to it...

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