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Simmi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Mina!!!! What do I say?!? Huh?!? This was a great heart touching story from you!! Once again I loved it!! Glad that abhi finally did something to help pragya and behave as if she was a human as well! Thanks you for sharing with us!! Love it!!

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Berkeley

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Made an interesting read! Good Show!

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columbia

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Superbly done!

Okay confession time

you write so well that it irritates me what they are doing with the show - does that make sense???

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@putturani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Once again, lovely fic Mina! I liked how this fic is more realistic given the show's current stage. There isn't really much romance, but more a gradual acceptance from Abhi about Pragya's humanity and her needs. I loved this line: "If he overreacted, she would shut down, and for the moment it was much more important to let her get it all off her mind than to burden her with his anger and anxiety too. " We just had a consent workshop in college and one of the main takeaways was that you shouldn't overwhelm survivors with your anger - because then you're taking the choice away from them AGAIN (about how to deal with the perpetrator) - but instead focus on supporting them and not adding to their worries. So I was very glad to see that concept here!

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

wow amazing, emotional, true to life tale, amazing job!

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Lasya

@Dexterity

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Great work Mina..

"We have to recognise that there cannot be relationships unless there is commitment, unless there is loyalty,responsibility, unless there is love, patience, persistence."

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samig

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Pragya made abhi responsible and a little human like her

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Aafrah Khan Ahluwalia

@Aafrah-SA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

OMG Mina how did I miss these for so so long???? You even told me some OS's were coming up!!

I am so so so sorry for the late comment.

But Mina this was heart melting! When I read the part where Abhi was fearfully anticipating what possibly could have happened to Pragya - it was so so touching...he obviously was unaware of his growing feeling towards Pragya at that point, but something inside him burned in anticipation and without even realizing he put her before Tanu this night...it was so beautiful

Also when Pragya mentioned that the boys father was from the industry and he probably knew ABhi wouldnt care - the ache inside Abhi--uff it killed me..he was doing what he had planned to do from the beginning - torure Pragya, but now he didnt really do it with a purpose, he is just following his plan mechanically - but once in a while when he realizes - it just gets on me!!

Mina how how how do you write so lucidly????? I am a big big fan of yours!!!

And the part where he let chashmish have all 5 gulab jamuns? hahaha typically something Abhi would notice and take pride in (u know, kids dont like sharing, when they do, they are so proud) hehe

Your story touch all my emotional nodes!

LOVED IT

Keep rocking!! ANd waiting for more and more and more from stories from you!!! 👏

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Krishna

@kubare

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Aww...Miiinnnaaa...

Loved it loved it loved it!!!!!!!

Love your Abhi...

A sensitive topic...dealt with such fitness and delicacy... The mind set of women...the risk of being put through so much if one complains... The risk of losing ones job etc beautifully protrayed.

Loved how you describef Abhis feeling the earth moving fro..his feet knoei g accepting that His and Tanus affair led to her attack...the realization...wow

Loved him...his reaction to beat the guy up...reporting it...etc...thinking of making it all right for her sigh...

Oh and loved the subtlety with you you even described his attraction to her...knowing her etc...

Simply loved it...your Abhi is to die for...

So now Tradition us left nah?? When can we expect that as loved Hugs & Responsibility.

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Mina

@-mina-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: kubare
Aww...Miiinnnaaa...
Loved it loved it loved it!!!!!!!

Love your Abhi...

A sensitive topic...dealt with such fitness and delicacy... The mind set of women...the risk of being put through so much if one complains... The risk of losing ones job etc beautifully protrayed.

Loved how you describef Abhis feeling the earth moving fro..his feet knoei g accepting that His and Tanus affair led to her attack...the realization...wow

Loved him...his reaction to beat the guy up...reporting it...etc...thinking of making it all right for her sigh...

Oh and loved the subtlety with you you even described his attraction to her...knowing her etc...

Simply loved it...your Abhi is to die for...

So now Tradition us left nah?? When can we expect that as loved Hugs & Responsibility.

haaye haaye krishu your memory is so sharp :P

traditional is still in the works! hope to share it soon!

thank you so much for your lovely thoughtful comment. glad you appreciated all those moments for abhi, those were some of the most important parts for me. also thanks for reading and commenting all the time! i don't usually get to reply to yours for some reason or another so thought i wouldn't miss my chance now ;)