Hugs | AbhiGya AU OS by mina - Page 2

The beginning part reminded me of the show, Felicity. Did you ever watch that? If you haven't, just know it's a good comparison to make for me (Felicity used to be one of my favorite shows).

Shallow note - Abhi in glasses and preppy clothing? Yum. 😛

LK! Haha no worries i TOTALLY TOLD MINA THE SAME THING !!! Like thats a huge stand out haha

Just going to say quickly though maybe you want to continue my story :)

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The reason I said the above was because my story might be going in the same direction...

Of all muses this is always my fav "if only and what could have been" and love how you've used it to describe the feeling she gets.

The teasing about her lengha and her not wearing glasses is too cute! reminds me of how they say boys always tease girls they like. You've also given Tanu the typical dumb blonde(excuse the generalization but you know what I mean) characterisitics.

Love how he looks smart and geeky after 3 years(I can picture it and in my head its HOT) with that slight hint of vanity and unexpected class(feminist approach to law...very nice...sounds like a class that should have all girls...hmmm maybe that why he took it..lol) and how pragya is bold enough to think about liking a guy.

The engagement and almost marriage(which didn't happen, thank god!!) and that placement of the second hug before he disappears..I felt like shouting at her through my laptop(don't know what I would have achieved but..)that don't let him go. And why why why did he ask her those questions about if she was happy with her engagement. It felt like there was a subtle undercurrent of something unsaid(imagination?!)

that third hug was just too cute and I loved how it was more of a comfort hug more than anything else and that she genuinely cared about his dadi even though they hadn't met for years.

But my favorite and I'm going to paste the whole paragraph :

To cut a long story short, we got closer than we ever had been before, talking and meeting over almost a year to share our miseries about the whole business of marriage-making. For my part I kept telling myself that I would start pulling away from him soon, because those attraction feelings were back but they'd evolved into something more powerful and terrifying and unnameable, and since I cared about my sanity I absolutely should and would save myself from heartache and get him out of my life right away. I told myself this after every lunch date and every evening phone call and every time I believed myself, but then he'd call or text again and I forgot all about that resolution.

Enough said I dont even know where to start with this one. I just love it. Every word was perfectly placed and the feels they gave. And the test at the end where he also felt the hug..my heart melted and I everything was right in my Abhigya world!

thanks for a perfection of a story! I loved it mina di!! Loved it heart it! and want to give yo a tight HUG for writing this!

Really nice!

Would be so nice if you can continue it to show them falling in love with each other like a slow burn!!

Abhi bumping into suresh feeling jealous abhi saving her from fans and reporters and every night they end with. A hug

A girl can dream can't she 👏

-"silly dog tags" I liked how Pragya isn't star struck with Abhi

- I liked the matter-of-fact, practical tone throughout. I liked that Abhi also proposed in a matter-of-fact manner. There is something quite romantic imo about gelling so well with a person that the only sensible thing is to get married. And of course physical attraction is important too so I'm glad Pragya checked for that!

Great job! 👏

But I dont have much to write for this one anyway...other than a big awww...

It was sugar coated from the beginning till the end...

I think When Harry met Sally was somewhere your inspiration for this one?

I lived the movie tooo...so there is no way i can stop awww-ing at this one..

I think the cutest moment of your story was when he finally proposed to her, and she wanted to check if it was a good decision, and the only way to check was another hug..

It was so so so sweet - they lived theor lives, often their lives collided and gave them hints, but they chose to ignore it and move on with life, until one final time when they realized...and they they were happy ever after

the best part of your stories are that they dont deal with too many characters in the show, but there is so much chemistry between AbhiGya in your writing that one doesnt even miss the other characters!

Mina you're a rockstar!!! ⭐️

And I will wait and wait and wait to see how AbhiGya eventually end up marrying again in The HookUp too !! (No no no I cant help but remind you of that one! Its not my fault! Who asked you to write so well? 😆 )