AbhiGya FF ~ Destiny's Children caught in a Web - COMPLETED - Page 15

Poor abhi pragya avoide abhi...we need a pragya abhi show down...and i wish pragya too feel jelous like abhi...

Originally posted by: rbb1

I know I'm being greedy but I really want to read the next 😃

me too when I see one update I always ask two other update,I think I'm addicted 😉

Originally posted by: sara7iris

me too when I see one update I always ask two other update,I think I'm addicted 😉

me too can't wait to read the next part and specially scenes with Abhi and Pragya

Wow this is such a thoughtful and thought-provoking fanfic! And you update faster than I have time to comment on each update! So I'm just going to throw some random thoughts out here:

You update faster than all our minds speed combined. But I like your way of putting names for each scene. Leaving that behind...

This chapter is getting me very tensed as I'm dying to know about the future. You're so unpredictable. It(story) is getting interesting very interesting.

Abhi ! hold your stare otherwise Tanu will come. The most I loved about this episode was inquisitiveness. Suresh words were momentous and honest. 'How distance can lead to a lack of time' I forgot the other half. Want to see Abhi-Suresh bond more but not as much as Abhi-Pragya.

I must say, your ability to create tension and rigidity in the surface, many can't use it.

Well, I'm speechless today. Summing up all the 11 updates you've updated so far, my mouth is zipped.

Update soon.

Originally posted by: Diahh

Res! 😃

Aafrah I am getting quite slow in commenting here!!! And it drives me nuts!!! So I am reserving this to comment on this chapter and the previous!!

Chapter 10

Fab as usual!!! So glad to see Aakash - Rachna relationship progressing and to know AbhiGya are their support system!!👍🏼 Loved Aakash -Abhi bonding. Suresh -Pragya marriage is getting worse day by day. And feel so sorry for Pragya. I like how you make the story move on in two months. Pragya is still missing Abhi badly. Of course it is to be expected given that distance makes the heart grow fonder! 😉 Nice update as usual Aafrah! Loved it!! 👏

Will come back later to comment on Chapter 11! 😉

❤️

Originally posted by: putturani

Wow this is such a thoughtful and thought-provoking fanfic! And you update faster than I have time to comment on each update! So I'm just going to throw some random thoughts out here:

-I love that both Abhi and Pragya did not feel guilty for kissing each other, but guilty for not feeling guilty about it. That's something I really identify with (for other, more innocuous situations of course!)

-I liked that you kept it realistic. Although we want Abhigya to be endgame, it's not realistic that Suresh and Pragya will never sleep together again

-I liked the Suresh-Abhi bonding ... seems it's setting up for some great future dhamaka

-and I LOVED how Abhigya handled the Aaliyah issue and how he trusted her implicitly (unlike the Abhi of the serial)

You really build suspense and tension very well and I'm really excited for your next update! Oh and I love the chapter sub-headings too - really get the anticipation up!

Originally posted by: Tupimanmus

You update faster than all our minds speed combined. But I like your way of putting names for each scene. Leaving that behind...

This chapter is getting me very tensed as I'm dying to know about the future. You're so unpredictable. It(story) is getting interesting very interesting.

Abhi ! hold your stare otherwise Tanu will come. The most I loved about this episode was inquisitiveness. Suresh words were momentous and honest. 'How distance can lead to a lack of time' I forgot the other half. Want to see Abhi-Suresh bond more but not as much as Abhi-Pragya.

I must say, your ability to create tension and rigidity in the surface, many can't use it.

Well, I'm speechless today. Summing up all the 11 updates you've updated so far, my mouth is zipped.

Update soon.

Originally posted by: -mina-

ahem

ohhh

aafrah :(

well pragya really is in a difficult position at the beginning of the chapter and i don't blame her for just letting things happen...but that was really hard to read :( so glad you thought to bring rachna and mummyji in for KMH...! and the way you have done the aakash rachna track is so so so good!! thank you! after a long time i'm feeling like their story is actually compelling to me. i hope it happens a lot like this on the show. i love the idea of aakash showing his commitment the only way he can, offering the property since she won't have his heart or his trust. and loved the aakash-abhi bonding too! yes yes!!

thanks for another great update, so intrigued for the next one!! ooh!! :)

ohh...wow waiting for your next update