Humsafars FF part one

veeleo thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#1
From his private balcony, Sahir watched the waves gently lapping into the soft sand. The gentle breeze caressed his stern, handsome face.
He had always loved water - so much so, that he had had a small, shallow swimming pool installed in his spacious bedroom back home. This beach house, in a secluded, expensive enclave in Goa, was his personal, private sanctuary, an escape from the relentless stresses at work and the noisy, colorful chaos that was Mumbai.
His mother had quietly offered to accompany him, but Sahir had politely refused. As much as he loved and respected Alvira, he needed to be alone.

"Are you sure, beta?" Alvira had asked, cupping her son's face.

"Ji, Ammi. It's only for a few days. I'll be fine," Sahir replied, forcing a smile that could not fool his wise and observant mother.

Alvira looked into Sahir's beautiful brown eyes; it broke her heart to see the fathomless depths of sadness that they carried. She remembered the happy, adorable baby he once once and a tear slipped from her eye, unbidden and unexpected. Sahir wiped it away, kissed her on the forehead and went back to his room without looking back at his mother.

TO BE CONTINUED...

Just a brief preamble...




Edited by veeleo - 10 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

2

Views

1k

Users

3

Likes

2

Frequent Posters

-mina- thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
#2
wrong forum vee! cool to see you writing though. best wishes for this story :)
Anbhigya thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#3
Ummm.. Wrong forum buddy...:):) but gud luck for the ongoing story... It will have rocking effect on respective forum for whom it is meant!!:)

Related Topics

Kumkum Bhagya Thumbnail

Posted by: Viswasruti

2 months ago

Kumkum Bhagya's Krishna Kaul to be part of Rajshri Productions show

This new venture offers viewers the chance to see Krishna Kaul in a fresh avatar, while also signalling a promising revival of classic-style...

Expand ▼
Kumkum Bhagya Thumbnail

Posted by: Sutapasima

2 days ago

Kumkum Bhagya gets ONE WEEK EXTENSION!

https://twitter.com/GossipsTv/status/1961016684145426726

https://twitter.com/GossipsTv/status/1961016684145426726
Expand ▼
Kumkum Bhagya Thumbnail

Posted by: BluebelPrincess

2 months ago

Am I the only one who thinks ?

Shivansh has Oedipus Complex ?

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".