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Posted: 9 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: nishkaa
WaitI got for the next update

thank you for reading and commenting!!

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Posted: 9 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: rbb1
Wow Mina amazing update it was worth the wait but hopefully we won't have to wait the long for the next update

ray!!! oh, ray. thank you. i'm so sorry it's been even longer. no excuses. thank you for always taking the time to comment. miss seeing you around. hope you will see the next update, whenever it is 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: deefan
RES for just coming to terms with reading Hookup 😊

deedee...arrived at terms yet??? 😃 🤡

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Posted: 9 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: MinMinMehra
Res first comment for when this is finished!!!

baachu when you are done exams you are actually not free kyunki first task after that - mera class lena hai!! 😆 😕

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Posted: 9 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: -Trishh-
Hayye Di!! Yaayayaa, gosh it's so Hott that I need to reread. Will comment later!! Spent the whole day with family!!

RES

thank you trishu <333

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Posted: 9 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
awesome glad you posted more!

thank you for reading!! hope to have next dose ready soon 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: Diahh
Res! Res! Res! 😉
Unres! Unres! Unres after an eternity!! 😆

Sorry Di! Read this yesterday but didn't have time to give a detailed feedback. And this update definitely deserve a long long feedback especially given your efforts.⭐️ Anyway here I am!

So first of all as always I loved the update!

TBH, I am very interested in the way AbhiGya are going ahead with this "hook up"!

Abhi wants to wait till Pragya comes back and when that doesn't work he makes sure he saves his number and has her number, in return. Abhi being all jealous with not Ramdayal!

And then all the texting!! UFF! So cute! Baby! And STUDMUFFIN!! OMG!! 😆😆 😆 I was laughing all the while!

I really liked the texting part! How eager Abhi is and how hesitant Pragya is, were shown nicely!

Pragya debating with herself as to where this "hook up" is heading! Hiding it from BB and all the reasons she gives! UFF!! I really wonder who will realize first! My bet is on Abhi! 😉 😆

And as a reader, second part was so hot hot hot! And as a writer, kudos to you Minamma for writing such hot scenes with such ease and brilliance. 👏

AbhiGya talking about thier week, Abhi's disappointment when Pragya leaves UFF!! These two bhi na! Indeed it's going to be only a hookup!! 😆 I am looking forward to the rest DI!!

And hope the wait is not too long!😉 *sends Writing bhootni and perfectionism bhootni to you*

This part was definetly worth the wait!

Lots of love to you Minamma!

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diyu...it only took you one day to unres, but here i am replying six and a half months later...so talk about eternity!!

so glad you liked the texting part!! i couldn't figure out any other way to show how they spent that week. so happy their different attitudes came through!! abhi knew what he wanted and thus was eager; pragya couldn't be honest with herself until the last minute and thus was hesitant...!

you will probably win your bet? we'll see when we get there but as far as i can tell pragya is going to have a lot on her mind over the next months...and realizing what her new equation is with abhi will actually not be a priority 😛

the wait is obviously beyond too long, but diyu, these bhootnis na, they abandoned me. kyun kiya aise?? did they get bored of me?? did they think i outgrew them?? did i curse them away without realizing?? though that being said, diyu the only place to send perfectionism bhootni is a cage at the bottom of the sea. she! is! paralyzing! in fact maybe she has been with me all this while, and i've only managed to write bits of the next update when she's been distracted/writing bhootni came back to visit...and this is getting involved and insane but you know what i mean na!! bhootni help definitely needed..but only the good kind 😉

thank you for the comment and lots of love back!

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Posted: 9 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: -Tia-
I will re read it properly later. Busy with Bua right now. My very demanding and cutely nosy Bua..

lol did bua catch a glimpse of the scene? oh dear. thanks for reading and commenting <3

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Posted: 9 years ago

#169

Diii saw you replying and was was waiting for mine!! 😛 and reread the whole thing again!!! 😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: -Tia-

Okay Mina,

Now HookUpDate!!! Finally here! Some of it, at least. Why do you talk of months and months to update? : - (. I am too impatient and this story makes me all the more so.

I wished they had all the time in the world that morning after. But really liked Abhi checking her msgs, saving numbers etc. It was never gonna be a mere hookup for him!!

Text exchange was cute. Why is it taking Abhi so long to come up with a new name for her (a bedroom one?).. guessing what he will come up with ultimately.

Abhi's apartment stuff was very nice to read (and needless to say super hot too). I liked how Abhi seemed to be in thoughts of building their nest and even thinking of everything long term.

Pragya's dilemma over whether or not to continue this was understandable.

What surprised me was Pragya's reaction to the whole thing. I understand that she finally wanted to let go of her virginity and ended up with the man she was once attracted to but then the same had hurt her too. I thought she might have major emotional issues after that night. She seemed more calm and composed than I thought. Or is it that she doesn't want to deal with that and just wants to go on with what seems like a dream/escape, which she doesn't think could ever be real?

PS: I love how you write smut scenes! So realistic as well as dreamy.

I can't wait for more. I hope it's not too long really.

Or else, I really have to start with my aandolan!

Thank you Mina.

Thank you for this detailed comment <3

Abhi has trouble thinking of nicknames because Mina has trouble too. It's one thing to name laadlis on the AT, quite another to figure out what would be in Abhi's mind for a Pragya whose body he adores whose heart he unknowingly craves...especially since Abhi's thinking is generally super different than mine, even when he is my own fanfic-version of Abhi instead of show Abhi!

Similarly Pragya not having emotional issues is a Mina's-limitations-as-a-writer thing. When I conceived of this story, Pragya's emotional pain from Abhi was never a main point for how I saw things. In this version, she didn't feel he hurt her as much as the situation did, and when she was able to walk away from it, she was able to let go of most of the pain too. I know, it's not super satisfying when we think about what actually happened between show Pragya and Abhi, even if only up to the demolition track (which is about where this story departs, because it started being written right around then). But within the scope of this story...how Pragya was hurt in the past is not as important as what Pragya is building for herself in the present. And the whole concept of her looking for a hookup for her first time has to do with her taking control of what she wants in life, and letting her decisions guide her heart rather than the other way around.

Not sure that makes a lot of sense or is relatable, and not expressed as clearly as I might wish...but that's what I can offer as an explanation for now.

As for aandolan, do I still qualify? 😆

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