AbhiGya SS - A Life Without You -Completed -Pg35 29/11 - Page 6

Originally posted by: kdsubs

Ah Diahh - i am glad i found this story again. Meant to read it earlier, but got side-tracked with life.

The charm in your writing for me is that your characters' reactions are so life-like. Turning Point ended at the perfect place. But if AbhiGya had to have a happy-ever-after, this new beginning also seems perfect. Just what they would be going through, feeling about each other. Its easier to forgive another person; so much harder to forgive oneself. And moving on, creating a new life for oneself is the hardest thing of all, especially when your heart yearns for something else all together.

Thank you for saying this! I love it!⭐️

Btw, loved the bickering in chapt 2 😆. Very characteristic of these two. And you wrote it so naturally.

[Oh and i read some of your drabbles too. Loved them. They left me with this big wide silly grin on my face 😛].

Awww very happy to know this!😛

Thank you for sharing these stories. All the best.

Love,
Kat

Originally posted by: daisydee425

Lovely

Originally posted by: Lkb79

This is a great story so far. I liked where you ended the first story because this gives them a blank slate, to an extent. Sure, the issues linger and your story incorporates those issues well, but there's a nice balance between their regretful past and a promising future. Lovely.

I also loved the thing about Abhi handling a crisis well. I never thought about it but it's true. He's immature and juvenile on most days, but he's the person to call in a crisis.

Originally posted by: -Martinski-

Awww! Aakash Rachna <3

BB Purvi Abhi!!

And AbhiGya <3

Fattu 😆

Their nostalgia and comfort <3

Lovely update

Originally posted by: athirakt

good update

Originally posted by: Asyalover

aww nice updt

Originally posted by: aafrah

Diahh I am dying to know more! Please please please update soon :)